[Bboy Jroc]

Deadline: Friday, April 1st

"..been just a week now, got mutton chops like longshanks,
i thought bein 'cast away' only happened to 'tom hanks.." - mode

[flobotopics]

"..been just a week now, got mutton chops like longshanks,
i thought bein 'cast away' only happened to 'tom hanks.." - mode



we come in on flanks, but we so fly when we drop we just bomb tanks
i give thanx, to all the mc's who came here before me
like slick rick who taught us that ours rhymes can make a story
not to sound corny but i used to rock to hammer and kris kross
but don't get ya wits crossed, cause trying to dis me then you can piss off
i'm not that soft, and neither are my three amigos
cause me, anak, razor, and nzame eat up mc's beef in tortillas like burritos
cause mad cats out there be coming mad cheesy like cheetos
while these four mc's straight spit discrete flows,
yall can keep those hands clappin and ya feet stompin
the only time i eat the pie is if it got the whip cream toppin
we all moppin up the floor wit perfect similies and metaphors
as we settle scores and make mc's sweat out of they pours
droppin so hard i make the ceilings meet the floors

[nzameleznzobody]

no hard feelings in war i'm breakin into this cypher like the FBI be breakin down doors/
with down force i'm with Raz'n we be blazin lines so fine leavin' MC's in circles like world tours/
ya'lls winnin streak'll be like nudists on the tennis court, a little too bare, a little too short/
amazin' rhythm consistent like 'nothing' is nonexistant, we're proficient, efficient, we keep it short and sweet, like poor boys with whores/
we'll rack up votes like wilt the stilt scores, we'll give ya some more, crowd's all aloud shoutin 'encore' 'encore'/
the spittin i'm drippin like i'm on a mission french kissin, mackin not lackin in game, call it a sport/
we'll play you we'll flay you raz'll shave and degrade you, come to, and here is the noose and here's the report/
i'll leave this writ like horny bitches suckin a dick they're wantin it, i'm flauntin it, bitches are nearin and all i am hearin is 'more' 'more' 'more'/
so watch out for us four we know you're takin cheap shots cuz you're so dirt poor/
but you know you can't face when flobo opened the test and raze will finish like sun sets in the west/
it's a given, 'cuz this is the place, the FRS, next expect anaktix to lay it down like a pirate does a treaure chest/

[Anaktix]

it's a given, 'cuz this is the place, the FRS, next expect anaktix to lay it down like a pirate does a treaure chest..../

so you better bet we effortless when composin dope flows 'n
we bustin hard off the head in one motion like broke trojans,
so know no one's holdin a match the flames we spit,
like a dude coughin in a mental ward......we insanely sick,
so get it quick, i met this kid from tv, he wanna-be reppin me
wanted-ta check 'n see if he could use my lines on jeopardy,
thats this friday night, be like: "he says 'sittin pissin in my khakis' "
this one dude'll start laughin then spit "alek, who is muzak, please"....
thats a no brainer, like how classes used ta be,
usually i wouldnt study but be the dude with 215.....
'n thats outta 20 points, now i do shitty when i rep,
today: like number 3 was g-unit ............i got a fifty on my test,
no joke, this shits fucked up 'n i'm sprayin-it at you,
my math?? dude, each problem is a page 'n a half proof,
fa reals, my maths madd long so it fucks with my shit,
how can i sum it up quick??.......i feel like forrest gump in this bitch........



haha aight razor just get at this when you get a minute....peace.....

[razorbrain]

.....shiiit, anaktix, ya problems, i sympathize kid/
used to love comp class, now its like heiroglyphics my books are transcribed in//
made me feel llike a dumbass; always the kid thats done last/
feel like they moving ahead in limo's..me? im tryin to catch up with a bus pass!//
but thats only with school, thank god for the Cyphers/
where the playing field is evened out alil , think we call it the equalizer//
always find my groove here: when we move, you in a dead stop/
sonic proof; the very nature of the flow is harder than bedrock//
from the womb to the tomb, its hip hip to the death of me/
embracin us eternally... from weakest to the best mc//
my urges grow and fade, but the love is always left in me/
and it will never leave.. best to beleive this is my destiny!//
i aint been named razor nothiin..im sharp, and aint known for frontin.
but also blunt at the same time, when i speak my mind ia int pullin punches//
you KNOW if im tellin, its truth so just accept it/
were the future of the game, we here stay, dont second guess this!//
just sit and take notes; feel the ebb and flow/
watch are heads bob as we scorch mics..oh, if you get burned, just tuck and roll//
heeheh, ok lemme stop the nonsense and put an end to wild ride/
before one of you other cats steal the show and i dont have a chance to say goodnight///

sorry i took so long i got side tracked today..if ya accept it cool if not i understand

[Reflexion]

aight, pretty nice battle


flob- pretty nice with the flow.. a bit longer at parts but coherent for the most part, seen you drop better shit in sessions and cyphers but ya still brought it.. melikes this part the best:

we all moppin up the floor wit perfect similies and metaphors
as we settle scores and make mc's sweat out of they pours
droppin so hard i make the ceilings meet the floors

nice end


nameless- I'm sure people will say this but ya flow was mostly stretched.. even taking one line as a bar still has its inadequacies, but ya didnt do too bad man.. look up power wording though, it would help you out a lot.. there was some real awesome concepts in here but ya need to work on your articulation, not too bad though. melikes this part the best:

with down force i'm with Raz'n we be blazin lines so fine leavin' MC's in circles like world tours/

nice inners


anaktix- started real hard and i was feelin the flow.. didnt like the change mid-verse but the flow was still pretty much on.. i think ya definately brought it harder to start with though, but ya did good by me. melikes this part the best:

so you better bet we effortless when composin dope flows 'n
we bustin hard off the head in one motion like broke trojans

dope, awesome flow too.. prolly best line in the battle


razor- brought some nice shit, flow was alternating sometimes making it sorta weird, but it was generally alright.. some nice content, i like how ya played up anaktix's verse for the beginning, giving it that genuine cypher effect.. eveyone would have been stronger to do that i think. nice verse overall though. melikes this part the best:

feel like they moving ahead in limo's..me? im tryin to catch up with a bus pass

dope meta, best of the battle ta me


overall, i think flo and ana brought it the best as a team.. they had the flow pretty nicely while nameless was a bit obscure and razor brought a nice verse but not to overcome flo and ana together when paired with nameless.. everyone did pretty nicely in this battle, seen all y'all drop better but it was aight still. good job


vote- flo and ana

peez

[mothafunky]

alright, lets get this shit goin

flo:
flow wasn't as tight as usual, had some real dope spots, the whole first part up to the piss off line was dope, then ups and downs. loved the closer though.

nzameless:
flow was alright in the beginning, completely lost it pretty early though. some nice wordplay, had some good spots but your verse wasn't that consistent.

zak:
dope verse, loved the flow. an i don't know why but i loved the "page n a half proof" line haha, flowed so sweet an ionno why but made me laugh.

razor:
started it out real dope. sick flow, dope verse, then the last like 4 lines just stopped comin hard. kinda lost the flow an wasn't feelin it that much. overall a good drop though.

vote: i'm a have to hand this to goddi an zak, potentially could have been closer. nzamelez, just clean up your style a little bit and it'll come a lot better.

[Zeke1]

FLOBOT- deff seen better, we talked about this, you know what i mean...ill use a metaphor....this verse was like going to take a shit before you REALLY have to shit, something comes out, but you really have to push and force it out, then when its out, you're like damn, thats it.....then later in the day, the real shit comes....you know? it was hot shit, but seemed like it was forced out


namez - smooth verse....one thing for ya to think about though, you seem like you try to rhyme inners so much that the end of the bar gets lost.....its like really reachin for a flow....try countin syllables....you had some dope lines though, i liked the "leavin mc's in circle like world tours" line.....you have some good ideas, just need to work them out into a fluid flow

anak- dope verse....nice concept...i liked the g-unit line, not your best, but it was still fun to read

razor- best verse of this cypher, smooth transitions from concept to concept....you dropped the hottest set of this cypher right here:
"from the womb to the tomb, its hip hip to the death of me/
embracin us eternally... from weakest to the best mc//
my urges grow and fade, but the love is always left in me/
and it will never leave.. best to beleive this is my destiny!//"
....i feel ya on this one

overall- as a team i feel goddi an muZak took this one....raz'n namez put it down, but namez verse was lackin cuz of the strechiness...tight verse all around though...stay up!!

[flobotopics]

3-0 we win. thanx for all the votes guys. closing thread