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Fool Vs. Namelez - 03-19-2005, 04:46 PM

STANDERD RULLES 1 ROUND I SUPOSE

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03-21-2005, 04:23 PM

DUDE Y YOU WANNA STEP UP, YA GONNA GET SERVED FAST
LAST TIME I SEEN 'STRETCHED LINES' LIKE YOURS WAS ON YA MOMS ASS
YA CANT BORROW SKILLS , BUT YA CAN STEAL BITTER
MY RHYMES SHINE BRIGHTER SPIT FIRE WITH NO LIGHTER
YOU WANNA BATTLE ME BITCH? LEARN TA FLOW TIGHTER
HERES MY 2 CENTS..... NOW GO BUY A FUCKIN GHOST WRITER !
JUST RELAX CUASE ITS CLEAR YOUR GETTING DEYSTROYED
BRO IF YOU WANTED TO GET RIPPED COULDA JUST TOOK STERIODS
I ONLY RHYME WHEN IM ANOYED TO PUT WACK LIL BOYS IN THERE PLACE
THAT WAS JUST A TASTE , CANT BELIEVE THIS IS WAT I WASTED MY LAST VOTE ON
AGAINST A KID WHO COULDNT BE HOT IF HE WAS CHILLIN WIT TWEALVE COATS ON
WORD IS BORN, IF YA WANNA PLAY ILL SHOWED U THE ARTS OF MARSHAL
I WON , YOU CAN PICTURE THE WINNER IN A DARK ROOM
YA GOT NO HEART DUDE , MY WORDS IS FUCKIN ART PUSSY
YOU LIL WACK ROOKIE YA GETING SMOKED FASTER THEN CRACK COOKIES
I SMACKED THIS PUSSY CLOSE THE BATLLE THIS SHIT IS FINAL
BUT THATS NOT SAYIN MUCH CUASE DUDE BEEN BURT MORE TIMES THEN ALBINO'S

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Response in preponderance - 03-22-2005, 01:21 AM

aww shit, yer repetition is borin, its cliche an i'm snorin
assume the position we're warrin'
now listen there's somethin missin in yer mission
learn ta be proficient it's important
cuz the ony top you'll see is ramen
the only beatin you'll be doin is palmin
talkin bout ghost writers and lighters is all too common
YOUR bright ideas each million years like a comet
an the only comin up ya got goin fer yer flowin is yer word vomit
see I'm on it, so well rounded i'm spherical
so balanced I'm empirical, from tha scientific to the spiritual
bitch best stop messin or learn a lesson
you'll be down on yer knees blowin my blessin
yer flow so slow they call it molasses
your rhythm vision so out of position yer needin some glasses
your final jab as ballsy as michael jackson nut grab
not a punch what is that crap
shit i'll cut you up, fuck you up leave you in sections
like lorena bobbit does to erections
So S.O.B Be R ight back
let me yawn 'fore yer stopped like a heart attack
not beatin yer dead in yer tracks
clutchin yer chest giv it a rest
yer settin like the sun in the west
didn't pass the test yer time is over i'll leave you fucked up and fucked like incest




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no defrosted rhymes pulled from the freezer,

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03-22-2005, 11:15 AM

ok i am no idiot and i am voting on this. even though i am in sobbers crew. i am not a baised voter.

sobber--DUDE Y YOU WANNA STEP UP, YA GONNA GET SERVED FAST
LAST TIME I SEEN 'STRETCHED LINES' LIKE YOURS WAS ON YA MOMS ASS
this line was hilarious. man i laughed hard at that one. good flow too

YA CANT BORROW SKILLS , BUT YA CAN STEAL BITTER
MY RHYMES SHINE BRIGHTER SPIT FIRE WITH NO LIGHTER
YOU WANNA BATTLE ME BITCH? LEARN TA FLOW TIGHTER
HERES MY 2 CENTS..... NOW GO BUY A FUCKIN GHOST WRITER !
loved the flow here. and the 2 cents ghost writer line i liked. i didn't like the begining of this section as much as most of the verse though

JUST RELAX cUASE ITS CLEAR YOUR GETTING DEYSTROYED
BRO IF YOU WANTED TO GET RIPPED COULDA JUST TOOK STERIODS
hahahaha best line of the entire battle

I ONLY RHYME WHEN IM ANOYED TO PUT WACK LIL BOYS IN THERE PLACE
THAT WAS JUST A TASTE , CANT BELIEVE THIS IS WAT I WASTED MY LAST VOTE ON
AGAINST A KID WHO COULDNT BE HOT IF HE WAS CHILLIN WIT TWEALVE COATS ON
another good punch. sobber always drops that funny shit.

WORD IS BORN, IF YA WANNA PLAY ILL SHOWED U THE ARTS OF MARSHAL
I WON , YOU CAN PICTURE THE WINNER IN A DARK ROOM
this was ok. not the best flow. the line before it prolly made this look worse

YA GOT NO HEART DUDE , MY WORDS IS FUCKIN ART PUSSY
YOU LIL WACK ROOKIE YA GETING SMOKED FASTER THEN CRACK COOKIES
don't know what crack cookies are, but i can imagine.

I SMACKED THIS PUSSY CLOSE THE BATLLE THIS SHIT IS FINAL
BUT THATS NOT SAYIN MUCH CUASE DUDE BEEN BURT MORE TIMES THEN ALBINO'S
good ending. liked it, cause it really coled the verse well

nzameleznzobody- aww shit, yer repetition is borin, its cliche an i'm snorin
assume the position we're warrin'
not the best opener. ya coulda came a lil harder to open. it did flo but not the best to open a battle

now listen there's somethin missin in yer mission
learn ta be proficient it's important
again i didn't gwet this line. like if ya switched where important and proficient were it woulda flowed better

cuz the ony top you'll see is ramen
the only beatin you'll be doin is palmin
talkin bout ghost writers and lighters is all too common
i don't know what the only top ya see is raman means. this had flow again but not hard punches

YOUR bright ideas each million years like a comet
an the only comin up ya got goin fer yer flowin is yer word vomit
now this is a punch, at least the best so far that ya threw

see I'm on it, so well rounded i'm spherical
so balanced I'm empirical, from tha scientific to the spiritual
this was a good bar. i liked it, but it wasn't a battle bar yanno.

bitch best stop messin or learn a lesson
you'll be down on yer knees blowin my blessin
good flows, but whats blowing ya blessin???

yer flow so slow they call it molasses
your rhythm vision so out of position yer needin some glasses
this was prolly your best line. liked the flows here

your final jab as ballsy as michael jackson nut grab
not a punch what is that crap
ahhh its was ok. nuttin special here.

shit i'll cut you up, fuck you up leave you in sections
like lorena bobbit does to erections
hahahaha i liked this. good flow and funny punch

So S.O.B Be R ight back
let me yawn 'fore yer stopped like a heart attack
not beatin yer dead in yer tracks
didn't like what ya tried to do wit his name. it just didn't work. it was an ok couple of lines

clutchin yer chest giv it a rest
yer settin like the sun in the west
didn't pass the test yer time is over i'll leave you fucked up and fucked like incest
not the best closer ever. but ya did aight there


overall SOBBER won. he just had a way better battle verse. nzame didn't come hard. his was more of a cypher verse wit some punches in it. and this is not a dickriding vote since he is in my crew. i hope you see his battle verse is better too. late




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Goddi and Anaktix--this was when i was in AZ for a day. we recorded this really quick. its not bad but i can do better. this is just so yall can hear me. i like freestyling much better at open mics and shit. hopefully the studio my boy got around the block will be open soon.
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03-22-2005, 02:21 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Zeke1
It means Top Ramen Noodles...its a brand of ramen noodle....we po bastads eat dat shit all da time
foreal man, thats all i eat shits sad but you cant beat a meal for less than a dollar

ok foolish:
punches came in good, you started off really nice with the your mom stretch marks line lol that shit still has me trippin. Your flow was good like i sayed you came in hard but in the middle you started going off abit and your punches started going lower but then again you picked up the ball and had your flow better in check. The finisher was original as well i liked that.

nzame: ya shit was ok, a bit to simple but with flow, i wasnt feelin some of the punches and the ramon cup line could of been re warded, you took the flow though i give it to you but you werent hard on punches and i didnt feel any metas or other things. Good job though ic it was a good attempt.

nice to see both of ya comin up..

my vote foolish for better verse


keep elevating...


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03-23-2005, 02:35 AM

fuck, i just voted and it got deleted!!! ok, i'll try to summarize what i said. i said this last time too (but its gone now) if you want more, just holla.

sobber:
nice punches, had me laughin a bunch of times. pretty good flow, a lil weird like once or twice. dope opener and closer, loved the steroids bar.

nameles:
some punches didn't make sense, not many punches at all. started out with a dope flow, lost it like a third of the way through. not a bad newb verse, but couldn't compare to what sobber dropped.

vote: sobber




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03-23-2005, 03:50 AM

foolish wins 3-0 KO

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