[Mode]

two verses..
10 bars max..
flipping allowed..
3-0 ko or first to 5

rest is standard, good luck.

[Mode]

ya structure? i tore to ground, flex gettin gored 'n clowned,
ya flows are weaker than when ya cereals watered down!*
floored with rounds, ya'll know i'm nice but i gotta beef,
ya rhymes are shit flex, just like ya mic quality,
fuck it, to hell with mics needn't say it but well i'm tight,
this fag changed his name twice 'n still can't spell it right,
i never did like you, think ya wack 'n others reckon i'm right too,
no one's awaitin ya shit dog, so why'd you go 'n edit the title?
my standard with rhymes has got ya bladder in strife,
guess i'm kinda like flex, 'cos i only get phatter with time,**
i'ma rapper divine, so sick when i spit i'm needin to puke,
knew i had dickriders, didn't think you was leadin the group!
leavin ya mute, flows got more holes than those seen in a flute,
can think ya dope kid, but there's a difference between dreamin 'n truth..

*the BS thread, flex said he has water in his cereal sometimes 'cos he got no milk.

**(fatter) peep his older pics in the bgirl thread, 'n then his newer ones, i think he got fat hahaha

[Reflexion]

This punk’s gettin’ pumped but don’t need to break sweats for this chump
Cuz like ‘blow jobs for garbage men,’ mode’s writs ‘head for the dumps’
This dunce calls me ‘leader of his pack?’ Don’t make me get my laugh on. . .
The only way this bitch ever gets a dickride is with a strap-on
I blast bombs while ‘getting fatter’ is the dopest he attacks me
what's next? u gonna slide off ya heels and try to bitch slap me?
Feminine when he taps keys, “so ‘sick’ I ‘spit’ ‘puke” the best of ya battle?
C’mon, better wordplay’s come out of 'dyslexic kids playin scrabble'
Just don’t know what’s more funny—the lack of skill in his pieces
Or the fact that mode’s atheist and claims to be lookin like jesus!
Ya undeveloped like fetus, I make him obsolete like typewriters
He just ain't making sense like bright-coloured night-snipers
This biter claims tightness in his mic spits, but lying ain’t really pleasant
Be real, Christmas the only time ya have ‘microphone PRESENCE’
Should be rhymin' for penance, "the illest" but no label's claiming him
Maybe cuz this jerk fucks up more often than jenna jameson
Aimin' grim, if dreams and truth ain’t the same dawg your skills are reduced
Ya wishin’ this battle was graffin'.. at least u'd have an ‘Eskews’*


*his graff name is Eskew

edit: since he changed his sig, his graff name is less apparent so i added an explanation... other things are inside-FRS type hits so hit me up if ya dont get something, peace

[Mode]

need to back down, 'cos man ya raps got wack sound,
i laugh loud, this fag need italics for wordplay to stand out,
damn now, i'm slammin keys so hard my cuticles double,*
heard flex raped his mum in search of a "beautiful struggle",
but dude ya in trouble, 'cos goin by you she be ugly as fuck,
roughin ya up, i'll beat ya with skill aint nothin with luck,
aint tough 'n you suck, i'll smash ya head in the sediment,
ya gettin repeditive, couldn't blow up in weapons development,
got a fetish fa wreckin kids, fuck ya up more than ya high priest,
might bleed on ya nike's, write tightly? unlikely ya ever be like me,
i slaughter clowns 'n destroy this baby like abortions now i'm,
raw with sound 'n, more revolutionary than immortal's album's,
ya shook man got the shakes 'n my punches squash ya face in,
all ya drops are basic i'll come after ya spirit like vodka chasers,
i lost all faith in, ya skill 'n ability cheated like bill 'n ms. hilary,
ya feelin me, really aint as ill as me 'bout as real as godzilla be,
notice this hopeless bitch flow shit against mode the dopest known kid,
get ready to doze as flex blows with a pre-wrote spit fuck votes just close this..

*cuticles - skin on tips of your fingers

[Reflexion]

ya were bombed by Flex now ya bitter, kid expects me to quiver
but like ‘mail with fictitious addresses’, Mode just ‘never delivers’
ya pollute with that litter, y'all may ask 'can he have a worse spit?'
but i'm asking 'who takes 2 weeks to drop a verse with no flips?'
could have keystyled that shit, ya hollow rhymes don't concern me
cuz i remember when ya jumped at the opp to be with me in the tourny*
tryna burn me with his old 'Mode's the dopest cuz i drop fine'
if that's true how come i summed up 99% of ya rhymes in one line?
face it, if ya needed something more you'd be better to surrender
when it comes to 'deep rivers of thought', Mode's just a shallow-ender
never a contender, and ya wanna make rec's with those lines?
c'mon, graffin' over the STOP is only time Mode'll be SIGNed
just not in ya design, sorry not all dreams come true
closest you'll come to 'tigga's bassment' is watchin Winnie the Pooh
gimme the win cuz it's through, dawg ya just down and defeated
ya joints just keep gettin' weaker like arthretis patients untreated
same shit is repeated, show me a punchline that hits straight!
nothin' special, Mode only gets jaws droppin' with lip-weights
pack up and quit mate, this has-been talks big but rhymes tiny
at least I know I drop hot...don’t need to change my sig to remind me. . .


*ahah, check the red

[Yosh One]

Shizzle this one is tight so i might have to actually drop a real vote for once (you know, with numbers n'all) Marking on flow (multis, inners, syllable count) content (wordplay etc.) and punches.

Round 1


Mode

ya structure? i tore to ground, flex gettin gored 'n clowned,
ya flows are weaker than when ya cereals watered down!

Liked the second line, good strong opener with a clever personal.

this fag changed his name twice 'n still can't spell it right

Again, another good personal punch, flow is good.

i never did like you, think ya wack 'n others reckon i'm right too,
no one's awaitin ya shit dog, so why'd you go 'n edit the title?
my standard with rhymes has got ya bladder in strife,
guess i'm kinda like flex, 'cos i only get phatter with time

first half of this is strong, again personal, second couplet seems a bit weaker and cypher-ish, flow hiccup. Like the personal diss on flex's pics tho.

i'ma rapper divine, so sick when i spit i'm needin to puke,
knew i had dickriders, didn't think you was leadin the group!
leavin ya mute, flows got more holes than those seen in a flute,
can think ya dope kid, but there's a difference between dreamin 'n truth.

First punch is niice. Second half - multis seemed a bit forced but you pulled it off. Nice finisher, good strong closing punch.

Flow: 8
Content: 8
Punches: 9
Total: 25

Flex

This punk’s gettin’ pumped but don’t need to break sweats for this chump
Cuz like ‘blow jobs for garbage men,’ mode’s writs ‘head for the dumps’
This dunce calls me ‘leader of his pack?’ Don’t make me get my laugh on. . .
The only way this bitch ever gets a dickride is with a strap-on

Strong opener. Shit-hot wordplay.

Feminine when he taps keys, “so ‘sick’ I ‘spit’ ‘puke” the best of ya battle?
C’mon, better wordplay’s come out of 'dyslexic kids playin scrabble'

This one had me laughing. Again, strong wordplay. Hard punches.

Ya undeveloped like fetus, I make him obsolete like typewriters
He just ain't making sense like bright-coloured night-snipers

Funny mental pictures here.

Should be rhymin' for penance, "the illest" but no label's claiming him
Maybe cuz this jerk fucks up more often than jenna jameson
Aimin' grim, if dreams and truth ain’t the same dawg your skills are reduced
Ya wishin’ this battle was graffin'.. at least u'd have an ‘Eskews’*

Nice last few bars. Finisher is spot on. Like the way you flipped the graf name.

Flow: 7
Content: 9
Punches: 10
Total: 26




Round 2


Mode

need to back down, 'cos man ya raps got wack sound,
i laugh loud, this fag need italics for wordplay to stand out,
damn now, i'm slammin keys so hard my cuticles double,
heard flex raped his mum in search of a "beautiful struggle"

Nice. 2nd bar = good flip on Flex's style, the momma punch had the "ouch" factor. Third bar still more self promo than punch.

got a fetish fa wreckin kids, fuck ya up more than ya high priest,
might bleed on ya nike's, write tightly? unlikely ya ever be like me

Really like the way this flowed. Good diss.

lost all faith in, ya skill 'n ability cheated like bill 'n ms. hilary,
ya feelin me, really aint as ill as me 'bout as real as godzilla be,

Again, nice flow, stepping it up. Doubled up the timing on the rhymes.

notice this hopeless bitch flow shit against mode the dopest known kid,
get ready to doze as flex blows with a pre-wrote spit fuck votes just close this..

Owwwww. Nice finisher. Seemed more personal than most of the punches.

Flow: 10
Content: 9
Punches: 9
Total: 28

Flex

ya pollute with that litter, y'all may ask 'can he have a worse spit?'
but i'm asking 'who takes 2 weeks to drop a verse with no flips?'

Made me laugh. Clever shit.

could have keystyled that shit, ya hollow rhymes don't concern me
cuz i remember when ya jumped at the opp to be with me in the tourny

This is shameless. I love it.

never a contender, and ya wanna make rec's with those lines?
c'mon, graffin' over the STOP is only time Mode'll be SIGNed

More good wordplay.

gimme the win cuz it's through, dawg ya just down and defeated
ya joints just keep gettin' weaker like arthretis patients untreated

More clever wordplay.

same shit is repeated, show me a punchline that hits straight!
nothin' special, Mode only gets jaws droppin' with lip-weights
pack up and quit mate, this has-been talks big but rhymes tiny
at least I know I drop hot...don’t need to change my sig to remind me. . .

Good personal on the finisher. Could have been stronger for the 2nd round but still good. Good attack on Mode's style.


Flow: 7
Content: 9
Punches: 10
Total: 26



Mode ::
25+28= 53

Flex::
26+26= 52


Vote goes to Mode. Flex your wordplay way hot shit and I'm not sure who had the upperhand on the personals but Mode's flow took it.

[flobotopics]

Mode--ya first verse was good man. typical you. good punches and flow all around. good job mate

ya structure? i tore to ground, flex gettin gored 'n clowned,
ya flows are weaker than when ya cereals watered down!*
great opener. hahaha i liked it and remembered his post bout it.

fuck it, to hell with mics needn't say it but well i'm tight,
this fag changed his name twice 'n still can't spell it right,
hahahhaha awsome line man

Reflex--awsome wordplay man. really enjoyed this verse. extremely good battle verse

Feminine when he taps keys, “so ‘sick’ I ‘spit’ ‘puke” the best of ya battle?
C’mon, better wordplay’s come out of 'dyslexic kids playin scrabble'
my favorite line of the battle. hahaha good stuff flex

Mode--ya left some to be wanted with ya second verse man. it wasn't as powerful to me as your first.

i lost all faith in, ya skill 'n ability cheated like bill 'n ms. hilary,
ya feelin me, really aint as ill as me 'bout as real as godzilla be,
hahha love the hilary line. nice nice

Flex--i believe ya first was also better, but this was also good. wordplay and flow were there.

face it, if ya needed something more you'd be better to surrender
when it comes to 'deep rivers of thought', Mode's just a shallow-ender
great word play on his shit. man liked this alot

overall i give this to REFLEX cause his both verses were more consistant to me. mode ya second verse wasn't near as good as ya first to me, and lots of battles is what have ya done for me lately. kinda like ya remember the end more than the begining type shit. but i liked reading this. thanx guys

[b-boy sobber]

ok just a quickie cause im a lazzy fuck

mode
both ya verses were hott, punches were nonstop and all hit hard. flow on piont as usual
shit i liked

dmn now, i'm slammin keys so hard my cuticles double,
heard flex raped his mum in search of a "beautiful struggle"
that shit was a tight flip..

notice this hopeless bitch flow shit against mode the dopest known kid,
get ready to doze as flex blows with a pre-wrote spit fuck votes just close this..
nice closer on ya second verse

flex
WORDPLAY ,bro you play with word like kids with letter blocks
flow was iffy in some spots in 2nd verse but it could just be me

shit i liked
Feminine when he taps keys, “so ‘sick’ I ‘spit’ ‘puke” the best of ya battle?
C’mon, better wordplay’s come out of 'dyslexic kids playin scrabble'
that shit had me crackin up

gimme the win cuz it's through, dawg ya just down and defeated
ya joints just keep gettin' weaker like arthretis patients untreated

now i read this shit like 8 times trying to see who won.
mode your shit flowed alil nicer, punches were on piont , and had some decent personals
flex had hot wordplay nice personals and some tight punches
overall im gonna have to go with flex by a hair

[Mantic]

ok guys this is extremly hard to vote on... no wonder no one votes on this shit... anyways ok lets see what i can do here...

mode: Ya punches hit nice and ya wordplay was decent. Like always you hit nicely with the personals, i guess you could say thats your battle signature towards your oponent. I was feeling the flow though some words seem'd a bit forced but that must the the aussie speaking i dunno, and the punches the most of the first verse... this is some of my fav...
fuck it, to hell with mics needn't say it but well i'm tight,
this fag changed his name twice 'n still can't spell it right,
my standard with rhymes has got ya bladder in strife,
guess i'm kinda like flex, 'cos i only get phatter with time,**

Flex: Your punches were good as well.. ya flow was nice and hit the point even though i think you had a few stretched lines. But it all still connected well. The finisher was nice i liked that the most out of both first verses...

This dunce calls me ‘leader of his pack?’ Don’t make me get my laugh on. . .
The only way this bitch ever gets a dickride is with a strap-on

Aimin' grim, if dreams and truth ain’t the same dawg your skills are reduced
Ya wishin’ this battle was graffin'.. at least u'd have an ‘Eskews’*
Way to flip it man, nice~
second verse is what determined the battle i guess... to me flex took the first round for a lil bit... second round... here we go...
Mode: Better than the first.. seemed like you didnt flip wich shows strenght in a way. You should of done it though lol. Still your punches hit better and harder than in the first one. Flow is always on point like always niceness. Wordplay was nice i liked it. here is a couple of lines...
damn now, i'm slammin keys so hard my cuticles double,*
heard flex raped his mum in search of a "beautiful struggle",
one word.... ouch... hahahaha
got a fetish fa wreckin kids, fuck ya up more than ya high priest,
might bleed on ya nike's, write tightly? unlikely ya ever be like me,

like the first line though the second didnt quite fit but it still good
i lost all faith in, ya skill 'n ability cheated like bill 'n ms. hilary,
ya feelin me, really aint as ill as me 'bout as real as godzilla be,
haha good old bill
Flex: ok ya fell on the second roung.. you did have good punches and flow but your wordplay was a bit... i dunno i didnt feel it as much this time. Punches were good flow was decent. Mad nice though dont get me wrong just that it lacked a lil bit compared to the first one.. Good job though i liked ya shit.
could have keystyled that shit, ya hollow rhymes don't concern me
cuz i remember when ya jumped at the opp to be with me in the tourny*
good personal...
never a contender, and ya wanna make rec's with those lines?
c'mon, graffin' over the STOP is only time Mode'll be SIGNed
haha nice flip on the graff shit.. i like

ok guys this was a hell of a not easy battle to vote on but ima have to go on Mode because he dropped a slight better than reflexion.. took me 30 minutes to drop this vote so be happy... lol Anyways dam man foreal this shit is mad hype i cant belive people dont vote.. anyways good job guys, flex that was one hell of a battle, if you would of done a bit just a bit better you would of taken this shit.. good job guys foreal ya mad nice!
peace~

[Anaktix]

haha i aint voted cuz i see how big errybody else droppin votes, but fuck it.......yall aint gettin that much outta me tho haha.....

mowed:

came out swingin, first verse was outta control, some real good lines 'n quotables, i was feelin it fa sho. flow was on 'n just had me chucklin, good way ta get the battle poppin off.........

ya second verse was coo, fow was on, some good lines too but just didnt hit as hard as the first....lines like 'couldnt blow up in weapons developement' were coo but just aint hit as hard as alotta the punches in ya first verse. overall a real solid performance tho....

phlecks:

first verse was solid as it needed ta be. flow was on point 'n there were some solid lines. mode came hard first verse 'n i think yours was bout the same, kept up........good verse tho (if you wrote a shitty verse i'd give you more feed lol)......

2nd verse, haha i was feelin it. there were some good personals in hurr:

"i'm asking 'who takes 2 weeks to drop a verse with no flips?'"

and "tryna burn me with his old 'Mode's the dopest cuz i drop fine'
if that's true how come i summed up 99% of ya rhymes in one line?"

haha, but word, came at modeezle real solid this round.......


overall, to me the first round was pretty much even, in the second mode flowed good 'n had some good lines but aint seem ta get all that personal or come all that hard.........flex had some good lines 'n came more direct this round imo..........so becuzza that:

my vote goes to flex.

good battle yall, shit was hotttt.

peace.

EDIT: Please return the favor 'n vote on my newest battle, thanks yall.......

[Awe-Dio]

Mode:
1st verse - opener was coo, i like the personal but if his cereal's watered down than it would flow better right?.. think you coulda flipped that personal in a much better, more creative way... flow's nice... "spell it right" punch was kinda coo... "dickriders... didn't think you'd be leading the group" was ya best punch, i like that right there... nice closer, makes a strong statement... overall, ya had some nice punches but coulda came harder i think... flow was consistent n' well penned.. i hate rating verses so i ain't gonna drop scores... but it was a nice opening verse, just think you coulda came a lil harder and flipped that opener better.

Flex:
1st verse - opener was aight, wordplay seems a lil forced... haha at the "strap on" line, that was nice... next couple lines are ok, "lookin like jesus" line was coo... "jena jameson" line was funny... at first i didn't really get the closer, but i read it again and figured out eskews is suppose to 'excuse'... which makes it alot better than i originally thought.. still the closer coulda been a bit better... overall ya flow was coo but seemed a lil stretched a couple times... had some dope punches and a couple that were blah... pretty even so far, i think you had some punches that stood out more but mode was a lil more consistent and flowed a bit better..

Mode:
2nd verse - opener was ok... next few lines were coo but nothin crazy, "weapons development" was coo... next 2 bars were blah, more talkin bout yaself than anything.. no real punches... "come after ya spirit like vodka chasers" ha, dope line... that'd be a good line to spit on a verse, but still a nice for this... next line was blah, not really feelin it... closer was ok, not that great.. shoulda came better.... overall ya flow was pretty dope but ya lacked any real hard punches... just didn't have much strong content... the vodka chasers line was dope but that's about it... and the weapons development line was coo, but the concept is kinda played... decent verse but just not hard enough.

Flex:
2nd verse - opener was aight, first line was nice and set up a potentially good punch but the wordplay seemed kinda forced again... "be with me in the tounry" was a good personal... "99% of ya rhymes in one line" was another good personal... "shallow-ender" line was kinda weak, concept was coo but just sounded dumb to me... lmao @ the "winnie the pooh" line... that was funny... next few lines were coo, real consistent... closer was nice, felt that.... overall, ya flow was aight, nuttin spectacular but good enough... your punches were more consistent in this verse, had a couple dope ones.. the winnie the pooh line made me laugh.. a couple weak ones, but overall a pretty nice verse... i think you def took the 2nd verse.... came more consistent and had better punches...

Vote: i gotta go wit FLEX... i think the 1st verse was basically even, mode was a lil more consistent with his punches but Flex had a couple that stood out more... mode flowed better in the battle but Flex's flow was good enough that it didn't make much of a difference in the out come... Flex took the 2nd verse hands down imo... so i gotta give it to Flex.. 2nd verse decided it and Mode just didn't really show up the way he should of... nice battle though...

last thing, a lot of the concepts in these text battles are just so played, just worded a bit different.. that's why i couldn't really get into ya punches Mode... i mean the concepts i've just seen so many times, and not just in this battle.. and more often than the original is gonna be better... tha's one of the reasons i stopped doing text battles.. everything just kept gettin to repetitive, it was gettin boring and i didn't want use the same ideas myself... but if you're gonna do these battles than don't stick to the normality of text punches about structure and shit, and try to get more personal and more creative na'mean... think of new shit.. that's for anyone battling, be creative. My 2 cents.

peace.

[Mode]

word i totally feel you on that one awe.. it gets difficult especially 'cos i'm not to clever with the wordplay.. thanks for the vote

2-4 flex, uppin

[Reflexion]

Originally posted by Mode
uppin

[Zeke1]

I THINK WE ALL KNOW THE OUTCOME OF THIS, SO IMA MAKE IT SHORT AND SWEET...

MODE- FIRST VERSE WAS TIGHT, HAD THE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES, FLOW ISNT A QUESTION WITH YOU SO I DONT EVEN NEED TO SAY IT HERE....THE LEADER OF THE DICKRIDERS LINE WAS MY FAVORITE...
SECOND VERSE WAS WAY OFF PAR FOR HOW YOU PLAY, FLOW WAS OK IN THE BEGINING, BUT YOU LOST IN IN THE MIDDLE, BUT THEN PICKED IT UP AT THE END, BUT THE CLOSER WAS WEAK AND I COULD TELL YOU JUST DID THE VERSE TO GET IT DONE, NO GOOD PERSONALS, AND THE PUNCHES WERE UNDIRECTED, SEEMED LIKE AN ANGRY CYPHER VERSE, IF THAT MAKES SENSE


REFLEXION- FIRST VERSE WAS TIGHT, LIKE EVERYONE SAID YOU STAYED EVEN WITH MODE ON THIS VERSE, BUT THE FLIPS HELPED YOU EDGE IT OUT, THE MIC PRESENCE LINE AND YOUR CLOSER KILLED IT FOR ME
SECOND VERSE, BEST VERSE OF THE BATTLE, AND THE ATHRITIS PATIENTS UNTREATED LINE WAS MY FAV LINE OF THE WHOLE BATTLE, YOU GOT HIM WITH THIS VERSE, YOU KNEW HIS LAST VERSE WAS WEAK AND YOU DIDNT HOLD BACK, THE LINE ABOUT THE CYPHER TOURNY HAD ME LAUGHIN, FLOW WAS GOOD, PUNCHES ON POINT....AND YOU CLOSED IT OFF NICELY


VOTE: REFLEXION FOR OBVIOUS REASONS, MODE DIDNT COME HARD IN HIS SECOND VERSE, IN MY OPINION FLEX TOOK BOTH VERSES....TIGHT BATTLE GUYS.....FLEX TAKES IT

[flobotopics]

5-2 flex wins...closing thread. good job fellas