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Mode [vs] Puertolumbian - 03-01-2005, 09:58 PM

2 verse's (flipping allowed)
5 bars..

you know the deal, i'll drop later.




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03-02-2005, 02:08 AM

whoa, which faggot i'm dissin? i forget, man you have ta forgive it,
you the gangsta stabbin on victims, wait, aint you avidly christian?

i bomb with rhymes, battle me ya put ya life 'on' the 'line',
i'll have ya 'disconnected', not off the net but i'll rob ya spine,
make ya stop like signs, i got you shook in sections,
i know your a redneck, you supported the bush election!
damn look, i wrecked him, this son's down like dawn,
haha, puerto's funny to fuck with, like clowns in porn,
like hounds i maul, get on my dick 'n ya bound to fall,
shafted, you'd be a better mc if ya made no sound at all..
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03-02-2005, 04:32 PM

hol up, lemme stick it you, dont let the religion fool you
i can practice crucifictions with you 'n still eat this bitch like a christmas strudel


im servin this diseased cat, look it, yuh theme's wack
you gotta put an ad in yuh sig just to get some feedback
believe that this kid can 'run' and 'gargle' 'tide' and still not 'spit' a 'clean' 'track'
you can dream that, you think you comin wit pristine raps?
thats like you sayin "wuddup nigga, check it yo, i be black!"
you know its crucial and brutal, you just puttin on a serene act
i breathe facts, dont be fooled by my outlook on politics
im surprised this 'bitch' got a 'dick', you can call mine's "Pride" and swallow it...




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03-03-2005, 01:36 AM

this dude is a bore, fake ass wanna be gruesome 'n raw,
steal my style with openin bars? shit, he never use 'em before!

this flows mine don't borrow shit, don't bite don't try 'n follow this,
i must've hurt ya ego, there's not much "pride" to swallow bitch,
you call me a tyrant 'n shit, the illest with rhymin 'n spits,
i don't need feedback when i got you ridin my dick,
no denyin it kid, ya spit wackness, is that all's ya do?
i mean damn ya weak, ya av's got more balls than you,
no one likes you, ya fans want mode 'n love my crown,
'cos i'll rip ya "soul out" 'n put you "above the clouds"
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03-03-2005, 03:56 PM

yea, i do support you, and yea, i stole "opening bars"
wait a minute, you just mad cause yours was supposed to be 'hard'

you never had flow to begin with, dont fantasize so much
me ridin? not!, dont be mad cause no female'll give you that tantalizin touch
yous a joke, you can spit yuh rhymes backwards and id still "e dom" (eat um)
i bet you already braggin you won like "yea, i did 'beat um'! "
damn faggot, QLD? must mean you Quick to Lick Dicks kid
no wonder why i say you 'spit' the 'illest', youve been spittin my children
dont be mad cause PL's ill on the DL and its known across the globe
like 'clogged arteries', yuh 'dead', let this be the day mode lost his 'flow'...


end...good battle mode, even though its been a while. vote up peoples....
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03-03-2005, 05:17 PM

Short and sweet battle huh?
Puerto, you came pretty creative and your flow was for the most part on point but I think you stretched some lines a bit. For text anyways. There's different ways you could spit it to make it work, but a few lines just didn't flow.

"you gotta put an ad in yuh sig just to get some feedback
believe that this kid can 'run' and 'gargle' 'tide' and still not 'spit' a 'clean' 'track' "<---concept was really tight though

"you never had flow to begin with, dont fantasize so much
me ridin? not!, dont be mad cause no female'll give you that tantalizin touch"

Mode, your opening verse was pretty good, but your second gained way more momentum. I was gonna quote some of your second verse, but it's too short, I'd have to highlight the whole thing. You killed it. Flipping on him in the beginning to straight dissing him in the end. You're one of the only peeps on here that actually researches their opponent before battling which brings really crazy punches. Props for that.

Vote: Mode for ripping it with flow and personals.




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Dont talk it just live it
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Quit placing the blame
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03-03-2005, 07:41 PM

i gotta be real man, puerto.. wasn't feelin' the 1st verse at all, barely the 2nd either.. too stretched at some points like aura had said. i've seen better from mode also.. flow wasn't dead-on like usual. ta make things short, mode pretty much owned the 1st round 'n was just better overall in the 2nd.

vote: mode

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The Tigger Report - 03-03-2005, 09:17 PM

Mode

verse 1

whoa, which faggot i'm dissin? i forget, man you have ta forgive it,
you the gangsta stabbin on victims, wait, aint you avidly christian?


nice personal, flow was on, punch coulda been a harder one for ya opener, but decent.

bomb with rhymes, battle me ya put ya life 'on' the 'line',
i'll have ya 'disconnected', not off the net but i'll rob ya spine,


flow seemed a little off to me especially from you, punch was a bit blah, seemed like wack vv lol jp, but not that dope.

make ya stop like signs, i got you shook in sections,
i know your a redneck, you supported the bush election!


nice flow picked it up again, nice personal, made me giggle fa reals.

damn look, i wrecked him, this son's down like dawn,
haha, puerto's funny to fuck with, like clowns in porn,


haha flowed nice, funny punch, pretty hard.

like hounds i maul, get on my dick 'n ya bound to fall,
shafted, you'd be a better mc if ya made no sound at all..


decent closer not amazin but hard enough to make an impression.

flow - 3.5/5
wordplay - 3/5
punches - 4/5

overall - 10.5/15

verse 2

this dude is a bore, fake ass wanna be gruesome 'n raw,
steal my style with openin bars? shit, he never use 'em before!


nice half-personal/flip punch, flow was hot.

this flows mine don't borrow shit, don't bite don't try 'n follow this,
i must've hurt ya ego, there's not much "pride" to swallow bitch,


haha owned lol, this was a sick bar, dope flip, insane flow.

you call me a tyrant 'n shit, the illest with rhymin 'n spits,
i don't need feedback when i got you ridin my dick,


blah bit of a filler punch, flow was on but it wasn't the best u ever wrote na'mean?

no denyin it kid, ya spit wackness, is that all's ya do?
i mean damn ya weak, ya av's got more balls than you,


not bad nice multies decent punch but nothin special.

no one likes you, ya fans want mode 'n love my crown,
'cos i'll rip ya "soul out" 'n put you "above the clouds"


ok closer nothin jaw droppin but decent.

flow - 4.5/5
punches - 4/5
wordplay - 3/5

overall - 11.5/15

Puertolumbian

verse 1

hol up, lemme stick it you, dont let the religion fool you
i can practice crucifictions with you 'n still eat this bitch like a christmas strudel


good flow, first line was more defensive than offensive but the second brought it in as a theme which gave t more strength, decent opener.

im servin this diseased cat, look it, yuh theme's wack
you gotta put an ad in yuh sig just to get some feedback


flow was on, ok punch nothin specail but decent.

believe that this kid can 'run' and 'gargle' 'tide' and still not 'spit' a 'clean' 'track'
you can dream that, you think you comin wit pristine raps?


flow was aite, a lil off, nice concept for the punch, maybe woulda been harder reworded.

thats like you sayin "wuddup nigga, check it yo, i be black!"
you know its crucial and brutal, you just puttin on a serene act


pretty fillery bar, seemed more focused on rhymes, flowed ok.

i breathe facts, dont be fooled by my outlook on politics
im surprised this 'bitch' got a 'dick', you can call mine's "Pride" and swallow it...


not a bad closer, decent concept coulda been better delivered

flow - 3.5/5
wordplay - 3/5
punches- 3/5

overall - 9/15

verse 2

yea, i do support you, and yea, i stole "opening bars"
wait a minute, you just mad cause yours was supposed to be 'hard'


not bad, kinda schoolground diss, flow was tight.

you never had flow to begin with, dont fantasize so much
me ridin? not!, dont be mad cause no female'll give you that tantalizin touch


pretty poor flow, and the wording really didnt help this punch imo.

yous a joke, you can spit yuh rhymes backwards and id still "e dom" (eat um)
i bet you already braggin you won like "yea, i did 'beat um'! "


first line was real nice but the second failed to deliver, it was like you focused more on the rhyme and not enough on the punch.

damn faggot, QLD? must mean you Quick to Lick Dicks kid
no wonder why i say you 'spit' the 'illest', youve been spittin my children


the rhyme seemed off at the end of the bar, first line was aite, second dint seem to be a punch, what the fuck does 'spittin my children' mean? i dunno, didnt feel it.

dont be mad cause PL's ill on the DL and its known across the globe
like 'clogged arteries', yuh 'dead', let this be the day mode lost his 'flow'...


nice closer decent wordplay, flowed crisp

flow - 3/5
wordplay - 3.5/5
punches -2.5/5

overall - 8.5/15




Conclusion

Mode had the better everythin throughout really, just a cut above puerto. Puerto had a better first round than his second and some good concepts which coulda been delivered better. Mode killed it all with his second which was the better of his 2.

Mode - 22/30

Puerto - 17.5/30

Vote = Mode

Last edited by bboy dobb : 03-03-2005 at 09:21 PM.
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03-03-2005, 09:25 PM

KO! mode.. closing thread.
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