my votes are in the tracker thread effort thingy.

2 verses
5 bars per verse
i drop first
no dr, bs, hate votes blah blahblah fuckin blah

watch as tigger wrecks zeke, dude new-phex reeks of poor technique
he maybe a dope textcee, but nah he just another net-geek
zeke should get a ghost writer, coz maybe then he'd flow tighter
i'd say his shits on fire, but he seems more like a broke lighter
shit my flow's so hot i sizzle, i'm renowned for cookin beef, mate
gettin burned on proverbial griddles, i'ma fry this philly cheesesteak
pity u aint another fresh prince, more like carlton'n ya text stinks
dude you used to do it smooth'n groove, now stuck like pucks in wet rinks
ya not a flyer like lindross, ya verse requires a *bin toss
call me tyson in the ring, i'm swingin punches t'make ya chin rock

*bin = another term for trash can not sure if non british peeps use this term.

you're up zeke, lookin forward to it.

peace.

[Zeke1]

chin rock? more like a rim job, i use m'ass to bate you
actin like a homo, shit your just a fucking fake dude

AND...

No! I dont wanna date you, I hate you, and this battle gives me more of a reason
take ya form a beat it, leave ya lyin there cryin like you were just born and bleedin...
and the storms repeatin, time slows as my mind flows while the shores recedin
Yur layin on the floor and pleadin, im the reason your bitchass was Torn from Eden
Get on ya knees you heathen an yell higher in the burnin hellfire, im yur GOD an Demon
Speakin and fiendin for Zeke seamen, get closer and youll be beatin long gone and screamin
beatin me kid ya must be dreamin, take ya right here, even if ya don't fight fair
cause ill come through england like nazi bomers-your worst fuckin nightmare

you could call me loki(low key) but my mischeif is infamous*
like titanic'n iceburgs y'all can see zeke is sinkin thus
i'm rainin fire on fakes ya rhymes're dyin of plagues
ya digitally disturbed jus' like ya cyberin gays
talkin 'bout ya semen, yo ya firin blanks
what? you been snortin dicks? coz ya lines're wank
ya mind must be empty coz ya flowin like deserts
zeke's droppin plain nasty like the bloke is a leper*
at jokin i'm better, but i'll applaud ya fa' tryin
ya such a fuckin pussy, it's like you've cum when ya cryin

*for those who don't know loki was the norse god of mischief
*leper = limbs fall off (droppin) = nasty

[Zeke1]

if your loki, then im peter, and your not gettin through these gates
can't cheat fate, even if you were the oldest "Alex", you wouldn't seem "Great"

let the dreams wait, if im shootin blanks, its with the gun to ya ear
i spear queers ta stike fear and take away the ability to hear
can't beat my mean demeaner with a sweet fiendin for rear
but the crowds cheer for the mythical harpoon fighter
tied up by your ankles an dressed like a gay cartoon tiger

my furtunes tighter, i back slap this wack cat an retract his flase facts
its all sad that this doll has to resort to false ads
i only cry cuz i hold my load till my balls black
its called splat when my supreme cream smacks your moms back

[nzameleznzobody]

Really close hmm.

well I'm gonna break into two parts

Dobb spit first, so props, you didn't know what he would be throwin at you so good with an offensive start,

shit my flow's so hot i sizzle, i'm renowned for cookin beef, mate
gettin burned on proverbial griddles, i'ma fry this philly cheesesteak

this line was nasty,

at a few points the flow was a little unclear but good insults

Zeke responds,

Ok here you had mad flow
plus
you were on target

and the storms repeatin, time slows as my mind flows while the shores recedin
Yur layin on the floor and pleadin, im the reason your bitchass was Torn from Eden


this line gave you the first round of verses, all the rhyme and flow was on

but dobb responds

this verse was nasty I liked all the insults that went beyond just having it fit the rhyme


i'm rainin fire on fakes ya rhymes're dyin of plagues
ya digitally disturbed jus' like ya cyberin gays
talkin 'bout ya semen, yo ya firin blanks
what? you been snortin dicks? coz ya lines're wank

snortin dicks was clever, fit in with the gay line, I like how the disses ran in the same vein as your first attack, you wer consistent, like the cyberin tied to the dope textcee line in the first

you closer was NASTY

. . . but i'll applaud ya fa' tryin
ya such a fuckin pussy, it's like you've cum when ya cryin


So zeke had the chance to beat this in the response

which he almost did with

i only cry cuz i hold my load till my balls black
its called splat when my supreme cream smacks your moms back

good but you should have torn HIM down with your last line



Dobb won


In the end there are three catergories
Flow: Zeke
Insults: Dobb
Closers: Dobb

The insults were close
But I felt Dobb won


This is an attempt to do this right so bear with me -thx

[Mode]

dobb 1st - hmm, flows were smooth, def feelin 'em.. punches weren't really hittin on target though.. had some decent lines 'n wordplay, but you had a bit of promotional filler in there too.. decent drop, not overly hard, but decent..

2nd - def picked it up punch wise.. didn't really flip any of his shit though.. but flows reamained steady 'n your punches hit harder this time round.. wordplay was upped too.. good job.


zeke 1st - nice nice, def feelin it, you came in strong 'n with a nice flip in the opener.. had some nice punches in there, some better directed than others.. overall was a good battle drop, flows were tight too..

2nd - def upped it, sick with the flips 'n shit.. some hard hitting punches 'n nice personals.. real nice flows too.. good drop.

overall i'ma vote for zeke, he came alot harder 'n more direct than dobb.. both had equally smooth flows, dobb woulda took wordplay.. 1st rounds were nice, second round was crazy but zeke just flipped so nice 'n shit..

my vote - Zeke1

[mothafunky]

first round:
dobb-
nice flow, punches were alright. i've seen better, but i've also seen worse.

zeke-
same, nice flows. had some decent punches. i guess i understand what your saying in your opener, but i don't really like it, in my opinion its a stretch on vocab.

first round was pretty even

second round:
dobb-
wasn't feelin your opener, but i loved your closer. decent stuff in between, stepped it up from round 1. still nice flow on that too.

zeke-
came with a good opener and a decent closer, and you had good flips in your verse. also stepped it up a lot in this one, i think you edged him out because of the flips in this round.

vote-zeke, crazy close though imo

[bboyarfen]

round 1

Dobb - I was feelin the flow, had some nice wordplay and some good pucnhes but, imo, nothing hit real hard.

zeke should get a ghost writer, coz maybe then he'd flow tighter
i'd say his shits on fire, but he seems more like a broke lighter
shit my flow's so hot i sizzle, i'm renowned for cookin beef, mate
gettin burned on proverbial griddles, i'ma fry this philly cheesesteak
pity u aint another fresh prince, more like carlton'n ya text stinks
dude you used to do it smooth'n groove, now stuck like pucks in wet rinks


Zeke - Definitely had a better verse than dobb, better punches, flowed well...opener had me crackin up, as well as the first few lines.

round 2

Dobb - definitely stepped it up, much better than the first round. Flow was on point and had a dope closer. Just came alot harder with this verse, imo the best one of the battle. Had me laughin in the middle...

Zeke - not as good as the first. Flowed well, the tiger line and the opener were decent, but there was alot of filler...wasn't really feelin this drop...

battle could've easily gone both ways...but I think dobb's second verse gave him a edge over zeke...

vote: dobb

[puertolumbian]

Dobbs - from the beginning you had me. i chuckled at the punches and the flow was nice. some people dont understand that just because it looks nasty and the bars are long, that it still flows. i was feelin that yuh punches were harder and overall, niceness:

watch as tigger wrecks zeke, dude new-phex reeks of poor technique
he maybe a dope textcee, but nah he just another net-geek
zeke should get a ghost writer, coz maybe then he'd flow tighter
i'd say his shits on fire, but he seems more like a broke lighter - that was nice right there, good flow and nice punches...

ya mind must be empty coz ya flowin like deserts
zeke's droppin plain nasty like the bloke is a leper*
at jokin i'm better, but i'll applaud ya fa' tryin
ya such a fuckin pussy, it's like you've cum when ya cryin - nice punches and flow


Zeke - the whole thing was nice overall, and i was feelin yuh flow. real nice and elaborate. punches were hittin and everything. 2nd verse wasnt felt all that much by me, but it wasnt all bad. there was a couple parts where you coulda ragged on him instead of hypin yuhself, that woulda kept with the momentum, but overall, niceness:

The whole first verse was nice, no need for me to paste it

but the crowds cheer for the mythical harpoon fighter
tied up by your ankles an dressed like a gay cartoon tiger - nice since hes DJ Tigger


this was a pretty even battle, and i was feelin it. very evenly matched. but, ima have to pick one person and my vote goes to:

Dobbs

[Bboy Jroc]

dobb:
neck ta neck with zeke on the 1st round.. flow was a lil ehhh, but i was feelin' the punches..

zeke should get a ghost writer, coz maybe then he'd flow tighter
i'd say his shits on fire, but he seems more like a broke lighter
shit my flow's so hot i sizzle, i'm renowned for cookin beef, mate
gettin burned on proverbial griddles, i'ma fry this philly cheesesteak

maintained the punches on the 2nd round, upped the flow a bit..

ya mind must be empty coz ya flowin like deserts
zeke's droppin plain nasty like the bloke is a leper


zeke:
1st round was off-the-fuckin'-chain.. really didn't expect if from ya, but damn.. don't wanna quote, 'cause it'll be the entire verse..

kinda of a let down on the 2nd though, i mean.. flow, wordplay, 'n whatnot were there but the punches seemed lackin'..

only cry cuz i hold my load till my balls black
its called splat when my supreme cream smacks your moms back


overall, zeke took the 1st round 'n dobb edged-out on the 2nd. tough choice, but..

vote: dobb

4-2 dobb

[Yosh One]

If this is a first to 4 ignore my vote.



Here goes - Dobb - thought the flow of your verses was generally tighter than Zeke's, wordplay was nice, but Zeke man, your finishers were top notch and the punches seemed just that little bit harder.



My vote goes to Zeke on account of he came harder. peeace.

[Zeke1]

bagizzel-ma-nizzle-bizz-umpizzznizzle..........fizzle

4-3....s few more votes....c'mon, you can do it....

YOU CON DO ET!

[razorbrain]

been a while eh? guess ill try and start voting moe ofter:




round 1

dobb: pretty good for startin off ill say that.. flow was alil rocky but youstarted picking up in the middle and ended pretty decently..decent wordplay and decent punces..dopest punch:

"shit my flow's so hot i sizzle, i'm renowned for cookin beef, mate
gettin burned on proverbial griddles, i'ma fry this philly cheesesteak"

zeke1- ill have to say your flow was better than i thought better than dobbs in the first round.. though on that note i think your lines were kinda played in the respect that the gay thing is played out to the core.. you had that littered through the verses and kinda seemed like a filler cuz of no other line could be thought up..kinda like cursing ina regualr song..but i will say ya dopest line wasnt a gay line..and it had dope word play, which suggest you could drop a verses with out the gay bashing, just aint choose to..fav bar:

"and the storms repeatin, time slows as my mind flows while the shores recedin
Yur layin on the floor and pleadin, im the reason your bitchass was Torn from Eden"

round one- i give to dobb.. more creative, better punches..


round 2

dobb- liked the line flipping on zeke, flow was better punches were pretty decent.. could have been alot harder but pretty solid.. closer was so so..fav bars:

"
i'm rainin fire on fakes ya rhymes're dyin of plagues
ya digitally disturbed jus' like ya cyberin gays
talkin 'bout ya semen, yo ya firin blanks
what? you been snortin dicks? coz ya lines're wank"

zeke1- alot better this time around.. opener had so much potiential to be better though the first line got me excited, but the second line left me feelin alil flat..ya was kinda funny, but again the gay lines were still pretty uninteresting, except one and ill give ya points on that..but pretty funny ill say overall flow was good punches were good..fav bars:


"let the dreams wait, if im shootin blanks, its with the gun to ya ear
i spear queers ta stike fear and take away the ability to hear
can't beat my mean demeaner with a sweet fiendin for rear"


round 2- i give to dobb..still more creative better punches flow wa sabout even there but i think dobb had a better grasp of what was comin the second go around


final vote: dobb- you guys both did will and i liked the humor of zeke's finisher in round 2, but it wasnt enough to sway the vote since doob had already taken it int he first and kept it up..good job to both of you and keep pushin yallselves, cuz on the whole the battle could have been alot better...keep spitting..

[flobotopics]

dobb wins 5-3...closing thread and moving it