[Zeke1]

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you a normal lookin head walkin the streets, got your own lil problems and what not. little does everyone know, you're a god and you control the events that occur around you. what do you see? what do you do about it? and where are you at (preferably the city you live in now or a make believe city)?---topic supplied by puertolumbian
enjoy!

[Zeke1]

zeke the freak demon creepin streets feindin for impecible pleas
defeatin weak meeker people'n seemin to beam incredible frees
suspectable trees, breezed one hit raised so high my eyes bleed...

blood turns to water, water hits the ground
finger dipped in water, wine appears profound
this was the day, my god-like powers came around

there was a sound, a flash of light'n it all started
my marriage with normal life has dearly departed
a mind half-hearted wonderin concrete streets of Edan
the ability to see the unseen,.. given to a Demon
one hit of unbelievable trees create seas of reason
passer-bys'n people on the side dumb to the change of seasons
wind breezin, ignore pleas'n create demons to seige them
look around and see men, women and child, the victoms i kill them
their spirits i will'em creatin villians from children
all around me burnin buildins with a shot of a mind thought
i cough and the time stops to take advantage of this holy crime job
materials are meaningless im speakin scripts until this rhyme stops

the new ruler of this city that bore me
powers profound to entice this story
pressure to great for a chess plate glass figure
fall to my knees, turn a gun on myslef.......and pull the trigger

[flobotopics]

as i cruise the land that i made wit my devine hand
i'm blending wit an appearance of the common man
just an average joe wit my own places to go
saying hi cause everyones faces i know
the father of creation just checkin all the problems yall facin
walking through the ghettos that are plagued by satan
as i stroll down a back alley to cure a bum of his hunger
i get stuck up, so i change the mans gun to a plunger
i look into his eyes, and peek deep into his soul
and at this instance he understood i'm in control
so blunts begin to roll and the man and i talk of worldly vices
he keeps repeating the cost of living is rising cause of inflated prices
i see the crisis, as my eyes start to behold
a girl prostituting herself at twelve years old
i realize this worlds become cold, and global warming ain't the answer
the plague of poverty seems much worse than cancer
so i use my devine mind to rewind time and give a lil push
i'm no advocate for abortion but here i made an exception for george w. bush
i ask myself for forgiveness in my own personal confession
then i do what i love before i go back to heaven, i go hit up a quick frestyle session


aight aura your up.....

[Aura]

I woke up around eight o'clock in the morning,
looked out my window to see that it was pouring,
I could have took that as a warning,
to climb back into bed and keep on snoring,
but I, turned on the news and brushed my teeth,
put on my shoes and got something to eat,
turned off the TV, pissed at the sheep,
now ready, to make my trek down the street,
I step outside and here's the first thing I see,
a mother of three and she's looking angry
She raises her hand to strike her child in the face,
til an invisible power rearranged and replaced
all her feelings stemming from frustration and hate,
with the love for her child and ability to procreate
I continued on my walk glancing back at their smiles,
I was born to change the world but I have to walk for miles
It's just a beautiful day as I 'marvel' at the 'universe',
tired of rain I turn on the sun and watch clouds disperse
Let's rewind, you're prolly wondering how I did that,
you see...I been a 'chosen one' since way back
Given the powers that be...I shine brightly,
and there ain't a force in the world strong enough to fight me,
Born with the strength of Bruce Almighty,
your only chance would be to resurrect Aphrodite
So I been living this lie in constant disguise,
pretending to be mortal so I can change people's lives
And most of the time I can just read their minds,
like this man on the corner who appears to be blind
I don't always do this, cuz it's not really right,
but the forces within me urged: girl, give him sight!
I felt the power surge right through my fingers,
blinding myself from the energy that lingered
"It's a miracle! I can see, I can see!"
I smiled and said "now find your family"
Next stop's the bank so I can get some cash,
any other day it would be a simple task
But the guy at the counter's wearing a mask
...and once again it's time to think fast
I saw his stash in one hand, the gun gleamed in the other,
my thoughts raced til I thought to shift shape...into his mother
He looked at me shocked and his eyes turned soft,
he dropped the gun, the money, and then he took off
I woke up lost, totally confused,
like what just happened and who the eff was that dude?
It must have been a dream, but what did it mean?
Do I wanna be a God and...reign supreme?
I looked in the mirror, my "aura's" still beautiful,
I guess being human is just as suitable
I can still change the world with smiles and words,
I can't rule the world but I can still settle nerves
So its back to life's clock with its greedy hours,
back to being Superwoman without the special powers~




(edited mine in to an old post so it went team 1, 2, 1, 2)

[puertolumbian]

since there's no order, ima drop now, cause i dunno whens the next time i can drop....



i was born with this gift, yet no one knows that i have it
i let my lab rats roam as they please, never disrupt the habits
picked them from my own bones as they developed from a callus
they do as they want, practice good will to all or practice malice...


i walk the streets like i own them cause the fact is i made it
descended from heaven just to watch the loved and the hated
i try not to let them stray to the ways of my brother satan
but free will is something i have and thats what i gave them
drew life from the basement, i thought it up from a single concept
some come out bad cause they came from my guilty conscious
but its ok, i see in them a part of me and i try not to stop it
occasionally i come across someone whos overly cautious
sometimes a prophet who sees i also gave them a gift to use
realizing they aint all gotta be isolated to only christian rules
evolution was imperative to emerge from using fists as tools
this is the way it gotta be, i reminisce and remember my distant rule
and this is true, i made this city for the weak and the meager
look what ive raised, an army of soldiers who've submerged from ether
either atrocious or positive, i believe that my words are neither
cause im the neutral god who roams the streets with unheard-of features

i let my children control their lives, its somethin i chose
but whether they live life all determines on their roads
im only here to collect and congest the number of souls
im the god of these streets whos in charge of every life's close...

sorry if i wasnt suppose to go, but o well, i have time now, and there...hit it up...peace

zeke - you came damn good here man, it seems everytime i read ya spits they have elevated loads, tore the ass off this topic, crazy ass flow and interestin twist. - 9/10

goddi - was really diggin the flows, i liked how you used the topic, gives us a little insight into what you about, kinda a little messiah-like for me even tho you are the anti-hero in the conclusion - 8/10

aura - took a while to read, flows were basic but on point, liked the combination of humour and emotion in here, nice use of the topic fa real - 8.5/10

pl - i really digged this man, flows were hot as was the shit you put in it, i think this is my fave rhyme you ever did, some nice imagery'n shit - 8.5/10

zeke'n aura - 17.5/20

pl'n goddi - 16.5/0

my vote = zeke'n arau

[Anaktix]

zake:

i was feelin ya flow fa sho, seems like what you put mosta ya energy into. I was feelin the topic that was given 'n was lookin for a good coherant story but since you put so much energy into ya rhyme scheme i feel like it took away from ya story........had a cool lil twist n errything but since you were so focused on flow it took away from the continuity 'n coherance of the story.

goddi:

i was feelin this verse, liked the story 'n direction ya verse headed. flow was pretty chill, nuttin jaw droppn but errything fit together nicely, i was feelin it.

aura:

liked the story in this verse alot. it was pretty long so it woulda been easier to read if you woulda broke it up into a couple smaller parts but nevertheless, i got into it fa sho. pretty descriptive 'n i like the way you ended it alot. flow was pretty chill, good all around.

puerto:

honestly i havent been feelin ya verses much lately homie, too much violence 'n shit.......that havin been said, this was a refreshing change. thought you had a chance ta show ya skills alot more. like the way you took the topic, especially liked this bar:

"i try not to let them stray to the ways of my brother satan
but free will is something i have and thats what i gave them"

that bar was solid.........but yeah this verse flowed nicely 'n i liked the free will concept........thought you brought it alot better than you been doin lately, keep at it yo.


this was a good battle, thought there were some quality verses in here. Thought goddis 'n auras verses were bout on the same level.......tho zekes flow was off the chains 'n the way he took the topic was creative, i wasnt feelin the overall presentation enuff, if this was a cypher battle yes, a topical, not so much.......so.......

my vote: goddi 'n puerto.

peace.

[nzameleznzobody]

So here it goes
first PUERTO great job on the topic

Zeke you didn't just open this, you tore it apart, the flow was sick, for a little bit I was disturbed, then you pulled out the ending, and I was like, yeah I can relate

pressure to great for a chess plate glass figure
fall to my knees, turn a gun on myslef.......and pull the trigger

sometimes the pressure ta save the world just to much


FLobo

you had an upbeat perspective I like that you gave us a little comedy to deal with the shit in the world like the line about bush and abortino dude I am still laughing about that. Good narrative


Aura

started of a little slow but really got strong at the end, I started to get more and more into it I felt you put your self into this topical the most, quality investment


Puerto

I just didn't feel it as much as the others, usually the last people in the topical have the hardest time. the main verse was the best, the two samller parts wer not as strong

i walk the streets like i own them cause the fact is i made it
descended from heaven just to watch the loved and the hated

I f you had opened with this I think that might have been the strongest opening of all of them




OVERALL


ZEKE and Aura took it

close though

[Reflexion]

Zeke - came real nice, you've maaddd improved since you first came here man, definately someone to be reckon with. I think you started the battle off well and set a nice standard.. my fave bar:

there was a sound, a flash of light'n it all started
my marriage with normal life has dearly departed

and i really like the ending.. fitting for ya verse and i think you did really well, good job.


flobot - was feelin ya verse, flow could have been a bit better but you brought it nice overall.. some good concepts and it stayed consistant with your whole chillin'-persona.. my fave part:

i realize this worlds become cold, and global warming ain't the answer
the plague of poverty seems much worse than cancer
so i use my devine mind to rewind time and give a lil push
i'm no advocate for abortion but here i made an exception for george w. bush

ahha nice! i really like that cold-warming part and the bush one was just funny

overall, good job everyone, i think it was a bit better than zeke's, though ya both brought it nice


Aura - like other people were saying.. a bit long and slow to start but it started to pick up later.. spacing would have helped and it could have been cut down, but i was really feelin your concepts a lot.. the ending was just amazing, i REALLY really loved that whole ending part:

I looked in the mirror, my "aura's" still beautiful,
I guess being human is just as suitable
I can still change the world with smiles and words,
I can't rule the world but I can still settle nerves
So its back to life's clock with its greedy hours,
back to being Superwoman without the special powers~

that's so dope girl, i love it. overall, it was a real awesome verse.


PL - came alright, i 've seen you come better.. flow was pretty good and had some decent concepts but you could have upped things at times with a bit more time.. not too bad, some nice parts. my fav part:

and this is true, i made this city for the weak and the meager
look what ive raised, an army of soldiers who've submerged from ether

overall, it could have been a bit more strong with consistence, but not too bad man.

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Overall, I think zeke and aura combined came a bit better than flobo and PL combined, and there was a lot of great things in this battle.. a lot of surprisingly dope stuff and i think everyone did well in this battle.. room for improvement, but awesome overall guys


Vote - Zeke and Aura

peace

[Mode]

zeke - killed it with flows.. stuck to the topic nice, as flex said you set a nice standard for the following verses.. good use of descriptions and vocab.

flobot - good verse, flows seemed smooth, stuck to topic.. as always you bring it a little different with idea's which makes it more interesting.. some nice quotables..

aura - like flex also said, slow to start, but picked it up real nice, i thought it'd be a daunting read 'cos it's long but it kept me wantin more etc.. halfway to the end is where you really shined, hot verse sarah bee..

PL - pretty nice, was awaitin your drop 'cos you chose the topic so thought you had some masterful thingy in mind.. your flows was nice, decent concepts 'n shit.. godo use of vocab 'n shit an stuck to topic..


overall i think it was a pretty hot battle.. an it's a rough choice.. but i think i'ma have to vote for zeke 'n aura.. zeke killed the flows 'n brought a unique twist on topic.. an aura was nice 'n deef standard aura topical quality.. flobot was nice on par with aura.. PL was nice too, but zeke 'n aura complimented eachothers verses when put together if that makes sense? anyway yeah, props to ya'll..

my vote - zeke 'n aura

[flobotopics]

thye win 4-1.....good job all. and thanx for all who voted