[Bboy Jroc]

Deadline: Sunday, February 27th

"..so seize the day you’re given and give all you can get
and walk the path you’ve chosen to your very last breath.." - Hangman

[puertolumbian]

"..so seize the day you’re given and give all you can get
and walk the path you’ve chosen to your very last breath.." - Hangman

cause aint no doubt about it, yuh breath gon be gone
like me spittin a couple bars to the end of this song
if you said it, you wrong, lemme prove it to you
whatever description i find and i see suitable for you duke
bring my crew too, with us theres no question of skill
cause we blessin the fields and flocks of fans, we stretchin to feel
whatever the cost is man, we be raisin the standards
dont matter whos the enemy, pros or amateurs we sure to damage yuh
stop by, see yuh man is done, you wack, got a fan of "1"
naw, matter fact, the only fan you got is the one yuh ceilin kid
yuh breath is stopped, like infested cocks, yuh rhymes...no one's feelin it....

[Zeke1]

"naw, matter fact, the only fan you got is the one yuh ceilin kid
yuh breath is stopped, like infested cocks, yuh rhymes...no one's feelin it...."

impress the rest with a lift of my lid, im straight revealin wit
like a sewage land gamblin man, puertos just dealin shit
he stays concealin it, got time to pull a drive by on one wheel and shit
but for real this shit, got me goin crazy, at work all hazy
been diggin snow all morning and this fucks trys ta play me
I aint no game B, this cat up in my car, a fuckin lame G
“Why’d you step inside, this ain’t your ride, what are you claiming!”
this muthafucker all stutterin, cant explain why hes runnin in
words blurrd absurd, this nerd, all I can think about is jumpin him
ratchet in hand, ima bout to smack this man, wtf was his plan
ready ta beat this kid to more colors than Toucan Sam
“Nah son, there aint no reason to be mad at me!”
He screams tragically, “I just wanted to buy your battery!!”
Thief, he had ta be, got blood up my arm, too late for flattery
It’s a tragedy, Now he’s a snow covered lump ta pee on
All over some parts in a beat’up Dodge Neon

[b-boy sobber]

It’s a tragedy, Now he’s a snow covered lump ta pee on
All over some parts in a beat’up Dodge Neon - zeke


that cat was gone, corps was layed on the lawn for like 3 days
then at dawn we all when for drinks at bj's
all getting dazed we split the check three ways
dudes come up wanna battle me blazed
zeke walks up says fool let me play
he start to spit, damn he straight ripping shit
kids steped up and got smacked quick
learn some tac kid you little wack bitch
the crew got tactics any man step on get burnt like match tips


im sorry for the wack lines above

[Mantic]

learn some tac kid you little wack bitch
the crew got tactics any man step on get burnt like match tips - bboy sobber

this life's shit when mc's kill and feel the life tips, with a broken leg i walk crips,
like a shoe un-tied theyre walk trips, like getting a girl pregnet, the life shifts,
so we set to this set, cypher out our best to expend memory passages,
life damages that hurt all of us like sobbers loved friend pass's,
but we move on grow strong threw this cypher we move long its true son,
got zeke lifting his peek, for a moment we're all stun'd, know my rhymes begun,
Feelin off puertolombian, starting this whole round cypher, know im on the mic,
4th to strike, i got peeps ears bombin like re-fried "dreams" in the night, (beans)
My styles are tight, l got this cypher poppin like a virgin thats fine,
feelin my lines, the unique ness in mine, even the sun say's im more likely to shine,
dont bother sobber that verse was dope, time itself is foolish to drag,
we trick then keep our own shit, store it then disopse it, explode the bag,
i end this verse like no other, haters on the back give a cold shoulder,
they hate, we never over-ate Mc's we just serve them and store them in our book folder,

[Reflexion]

aight..

PL - i liked how you were starting and all but the transition of themes in your verses didn't seem to fit well on the whole.. . ya flow has much improved since the last time I read ya shit so that was pretty good, but i think you could have been more consistent with the theme


zeke- flow has improved since ya old days man and that's good, and i liked some of your lines, esp at the starting.. the whole car scenerio was a bit shady to me and i didnt think it fit it too well but you managed to pull it off aight


sobber- the flow was pretty good but there just seemed to be a needing for more substance in there ya know? if ya dropped with a bit more coherence in ya thematics, combined with some flow, your verse would be more dope


newb- I liked your theme and consistency most of all but your lines were a bit too stretched.. try to work on ya power wording and all, but you had some good concepts (they just didnt come out all to succintly)


overall, I think zeke and newb together brought it a bit better than PL and sobber in this instance.. y'all have improved flow from what I've seen (though newb has to work on it a bit more) but there is some room for improvement in other areas.. good luck

vote - zeke and newb

ps.

Originally posted by puertolumbian
naw, matter fact, the only fan you got is the one yuh ceilin kid

that is straight bitten from Jinn from freestyle fridays

[jonnyz]

Peurto - Nah I dont think that ceilin line is bit. Shit is mad played... I seen it in like 10 different places. But yeah, I didnt like how the lines you had to flow off were cool and had a nice topic, but your verse ended up as the cliched self glorification kind of cypher verse. Flow was good though. Could have thrown in a bit more wordplay or something for the kind of verse that you did. But it wasnt bad, it just wasnt groundbreaking either.

Zeke - I liked this verse actually. You kept flowin well with the theme off of peurtos verse and then changed it up somewhat. The speech you used helped with the flow also towards the end of the verse. I liked these lines in particular:

“Nah son, there aint no reason to be mad at me!”
He screams tragically, “I just wanted to buy your battery!!”
Thief, he had ta be, got blood up my arm, too late for flattery

But overall was a good verse.

Sobber - Came off of zeke well. But This verse seemed kind of... more basic than the others. You know? It just lacked something. Vocab most likely. But the best lines were the last two.

Mantic - It was a nice verse. Flow slightly stretched at times.. But the concepts were there. You could make it a lot better by re-wording the whole thing. But yo, dont get me wrong. There was nice lines in there it wasnt wack. It was nice.


overall - Zeke and Mantic took this as a team. Peurto and sobber just came weaker together, in my eyes. Shit was shaky. Zeke and Mantic both came solid.

V/ ZEKE & MANTIC

[flobotopics]

aight the long awaited vote


puerto---ya came off the line above well. which is a major part of cyphering to me. the flow was so so. like some lines that rhymed we reaches to get it to rhyme. that fan line was a lil played. but over it was an ok verse. nothing too special for me.

Zeke---also the begining was a good flo off the last line. good job there. but i don't know if ya were dissin puerto wit that one line, and if so thats weak. cause the ctphers are all about love not punches at each other. i liked where ya went with it cause it was somewhat a true story. i just didn't get the transition too much. but loved the story man. flows were there too.

Sobber---i dug ya flow alot. but it was too short and simple. man like 2 more bars woulda been sweet. like the others said. ya just needed something else. i felt unfinished after reading it.

Mantic---ya first three words came off sobber well. but i didn't get the end of the first line. i like the longer lines, so i got the flow and all. a lil stretched for some lines, but overall i liked ya verse some.


well it was hard cause they were sorta closely matched. but imma have to give it to ZEKE AND MANTIC for overall just being a better team.

[Zeke1]

thats 3-0 KO...its over...time for the next round