 Amputationz VS. Zeke1 |
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Posts: 1,594
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: fun town, usa
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Amputationz VS. Zeke1 -
02-14-2005, 06:02 PM
...ok ok....you can go first if you want...i wont post till tomorrow morning...as long as you want, just no novels....you said 1 verse, let me know if you wanna go for more...
go for it kid...
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BK gave me syphilis
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02-15-2005, 10:57 AM
Ah look, new phex’s bitch, when ya get dissed you cry out for help?
And whats the deal with your custom title, is that a reminder to self?
So here’s a heartfelt plea, check the dude with the nooj avatar
Theres a few things you need, theres two he has fer ya*
Dumb fuck, aint winning this battle on dumb luck
You’ll be like a telephone sliced twice – quartered and hung up.
Get real there zeke, you ready to feel defeat
I guess you think you can win though… you livin in a field-of-dreams
Even amputees get mean, slap you with a stump
And spit on this fake bitch as he spits about crunk
Ya see, im what you crew stands for, so they cull you, reject
It’s pathetic, and my line's impacts becomes the sole ‘new ephect’.
*razorbrain has an avatar of nooj, the guy in zeke's avatar got a shitty beard (fetch the norelco) and he needs a brain too.
good luck man, drop in the next few days, aight?
he's not nice, rips out eyes, he is satan in disguise, oh yes it's Barney!!!
Did you ever see a llama kiss a llama on the llama? Llama's llama tastes of llama llama llama duck.
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Location: fun town, usa
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02-15-2005, 11:50 AM
watch this new-phex exect disect this insect
no arms and no legs? what do you expect to get from insest
your mothers your aunt and your father's your brother
its the only love shared from one sibling to another
seazin baby mc's with ease, as i shake, strangle and smother
this dude isnt straight or bi, he's just a fag undercover
are you kissin me or dissin me, those tries are just pathetic
while yur cryin and upset kid ill still beat ya with yur prostetic
i wont regret it, winnin this battle, you might as well forget it
givin out loses, nah, just your servin up STD's
even if i was made out of latex, you still couldn't fuck with me....
you can drop again if you want...if not...this is ready for votes
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BK gave me syphilis
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02-15-2005, 12:02 PM
nah, in the battle box i said just one round, so... yeah, votes can come in. I aint seen ya battle before, but that verse was pretty dope man, keep it up. *hopes to be like zeke* haha.
*makes new-tards crew and wonders why nobody joins*
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02-15-2005, 12:11 PM
haha, you're a strange dude, but you got some skill...keep at it....and new-phex isn't some internet thing, we've been a crew for over 5 years now....we dont chill as much anymore cuz life gets crazy as age increases, but we still rep...
so this is ready for votes....
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the great
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02-15-2005, 04:37 PM
yo im in his crew but we still vote fair... if you dont believe me buy the eastcoast overdose 2 dvd when it comes out and you will see that he booed me infront of like 500 ppl .....lol damn i suck
and way it was a so so battle...
Amputationz... first time im reading your shit .. not bad flow was their, punches realy didnt hit hard but were their .. it was just an average verse little waterd down ... i liked it but nothing stood out as HOTT!!... keep it up
zekel matter... ya shit is getting nice for who spitts one or two times a year lol.. shit was decent .. can see you like tellin stories.. i was feelin it
ima have to give it to zeke ...... and just remember homosexuals are gay
fool got big faces like mount rushmore
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The Tigger Report -
02-15-2005, 09:26 PM
Amp
Ah look, new phex’s bitch, when ya get dissed you cry out for help?
And whats the deal with your custom title, is that a reminder to self?
flow was aite coulda been crisper, punch was aite, decent opener
So here’s a heartfelt plea, check the dude with the nooj avatar
Theres a few things you need, theres two he has fer ya*
pretty weak bar, flow was choppy and the punch took too much explaining to have any impact
Dumb fuck, aint winning this battle on dumb luck
You’ll be like a telephone sliced twice – quartered and hung up.
ooooo i liked this punch, nice wordplay, good flow. props
Get real there zeke, you ready to feel defeat
I guess you think you can win though… you livin in a field-of-dreams
not bad, good concept but u coulda used it better, flow was a lil off i felt
Even amputees get mean, slap you with a stump
And spit on this fake bitch as he spits about crunk
fow was aite but again the punch aint hit right for me
Ya see, im what you crew stands for, so they cull you, reject
It’s pathetic, and my line's impacts becomes the sole ‘new ephect’.
not a bad multie but not a great one, pretty weak closer imo
flow - not bad not great 2.5/5
punches - couple of personal atempts, one really nice bar 3/5
wordplay = not bad, digged the phone thing 3/5
creativity = pretty good u used ya head here 3.5/5
overall 12/20
zeke
watch this new-phex exect disect this insect
no arms and no legs? what do you expect to get from insest
flow was nice, funny punch, good opener
your mothers your aunt and your father's your brother
its the only love shared from one sibling to another
lmao u funny fuck, nice punch made me laugh flow was tight again
seazin baby mc's with ease, as i shake, strangle and smother
this dude isnt straight or bi, he's just a fag undercover
played punch (gay jokes been done more than a 5 buck whore) flow was tight
are you kissin me or dissin me, those tries are just pathetic
while yur cryin and upset kid ill still beat ya with yur prostetic
wasnt diggin this punch as much, and the flow fell of in the second line to me
i wont regret it, winnin this battle, you might as well forget it
filler
givin out loses, nah, just your servin up STD's
even if i was made out of latex, you still couldn't fuck with me....
picked it up again, nice punch, right flow, dope closer
flow = pretty solid throughout but nothing too special - 3.5/5
punches - couple of gems, couple not so great but pretty good throughout - 4/5
wordplay - not much really coulda been better - 2/5
creativity - some funny, clever shit right here - 4/5
overall 13.5/20
my vote - zeke
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atomic element
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Join Date: May 2003
Location: Australia
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Mode Vote -
02-15-2005, 10:38 PM
amp - not bad at all, your def elevatin.. punches ranged from nice to ok, some good wordplay in there.. wasn't feelin the nooj line though.. too obscure.. flows were on point for the most part.. solid effort.
zeke - i liked it, thought it was pretty hot man.. some funny ass lines 'n good wordplay.. solid hits with some good personals too.. flows were smooth too, nice drop.
i'ma have to vote for zeke on this one, i feel he took it pretty easy, but amp you surprised me with your shit, was real good, your elevatin nicely, props man.. anyway yeah, zeke gets my vote.. thats 3-0 KO
closing thread.
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