heavyhitta Vs. K1llaCam

heavyhitta · **heavyhitta Vs. K1llaCam -** 02-07-2005, 10:47 PM

I spit... 12 lines = 6 bars

No feeding
No biting
No bitch votes

Wordplay and skript play is aloud... this is a text battle... Wordplay counts... we do not have to spit lines that we can only rap on audio and face to face... wordplay counts

Drop on wednesday night max

heavyhitta · 02:58 PM

Yo, if you see a wack verse, it's probably his
And shit, you are a challenge... Mentally that is
So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what your craving
I bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings!
And we know its comin, Ya know your words be all bitten
So I'll collect enough "chips" from ya teeth, to play poker with em
And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so "remote", ya shit could change channels
So dumb...surround your damn neck with a tight harness
Wanna be Royalty,so ya lines should get "throne" in the garbage
With punches, could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground

Word......Top that if you can

K1lla... edit your verse with one vote...
http://www.bboy.org/forums/showthrea...159#post525159

K1llaCam · 02-08-2005, 10:23 PM

He’s well versed in copy and pasting. You know who you facin foo?
Of course Heavy knows ‘better’…and he bit from him too
damn that's a lotta flipped concepts. You sure you gonna win it?
I'd take your verse personally...but wasn't any personals in it
Hit a search engine and found his punchlines and advice 2 take 2 heart
"If you gonna do a prewritten at least say opponent's name, retard "
Heavy hitter? Nigga please, only thing phat about him is in his arteries
Shud change his name to systole cuz he gettin dropped in a heartbeat
Back off before you get slapped up, fake ass drug dealer, try and act up
Dukes you couldn't push key's of coke if you spilled soda on your laptop

I voted in that battle with flobotics...peace

mothafunky · 02-08-2005, 11:37 PM

aight aight, well, there was more in this battle than i was expecting.

heavy:
lots of wordplay. fav one was the remote line, nice shit. some stuff wasn't so cool though, like you were like "i bet i know what youre cravin" or whatever, then didn't say anything bout what he was cravin. there were one or two more lines like that, pretty messed up. overall not bad though.

killacam:
came nice with wordplay too. loved that "i'd take your verse personally" line. is "better" part of someones rap name or something? if not, that line kinda sucks. other than that one line, which could be good or bad, came pretty consistent.

vote: killacam, came more solid. heavy woulda been closer if he didn't throw in those messed up lines.

heavyhitta · 05:59 PM

Your whole verse was about fake personels, my lines weren't bitten, I don't needa say your name, it woulda just strecthed my lines... and gave me bad structure, but one line or 2 bars like that woulda been cool, but your whole verse... on all fake personel... wt/v though good luck...
P.S.

Well I bet I know what your craving< he's craving to beat me
And we know its coming < means i'm gonna win
And now the win is mine < see how it says it's coming I drop a hot line, and then say now it's over I win... all my shit my whole verse went together... so how did I bite...? I just I just hope people don't actually believe your verse... but wt/v I'm sounding like a bitch so i'll shutup

K1llaCam · 02-09-2005, 10:59 PM

lol...good job tryinga sway loser...Hey I jsut call it how i see it, I saw that you aint mention my name, and that your "verse" could've been for anybody on the site, so I keyed up a respone right quick. Stop bitching and let the people vote...Name one personal in your entire verse that is REMOTELY TRUE!!!thot so mufucka

www.bboy.org/ · **The Tigger Report -** 02-09-2005, 11:23 PM

heavyhitta

Yo, if you see a wack verse, it's probably his
And shit, you are a challenge... Mentally that is

flow was on point, coulda been more interesting, first line was pretty much filler, second was decent, ok wordplay, punch coulda been more direct

So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what your craving
I bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings!

flow fell off a little, wordplay was weak no matter what you think wordplay wont win it all, you need to actually punch with it not just play with all ya words, pretty weak bar, punch really dint hit right

And we know its comin, Ya know your words be all bitten
So I'll collect enough "chips" from ya teeth, to play poker with em

flow was decent, punch was ok, woulda hit much harder if he actually ever bit anything on this site, which he hasn't, not bad, but not particularly great either

And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so "remote", ya shit could change channels

can anybody say 'played', i;ve seen this punch used so many times on other sites, flow was on but this was just a throwaway bar because its been done so much before

So dumb...surround your damn neck with a tight harness
Wanna be Royalty,so ya lines should get "throne" in the garbage

flow was aite seemed to fall slightly in the second line, punch was nice, i digged ya wordplay on this made it a pretty direct punch

With punches, could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground

no offense but this bar was fuckin wack, it was far below the rest of ya verse, flow was choppy, punch was weak, basically it was filler

flow - on point for the most part but pretty basic stuff, try working on multies and shit to make it a little more interesting, u can flow on point, now add some style - 3/5

punches - couple of decent ones in here, no personals, some filler, not bad, not great. - 3/5

wordplay - some of it was tight, some was played, good concepts, sometimes well delivered. 3.5/5

creativity - not bad, but you have used some played out shit there and ya closer was wack - 3/5

overall 12.5/20

k1llacam

He’s well versed in copy and pasting. You know who you facin foo?
Of course Heavy knows ‘better’…and he bit from him too

nice flow, you definately added more style here than i've seen from you before, nice punch, came pretty direct.

damn that's a lotta flipped concepts. You sure you gonna win it?
I'd take your verse personally...but wasn't any personals in it

again nice flow, nice punch too, decent personal/flip, props

Hit a search engine and found his punchlines and advice 2 take 2 heart
"If you gonna do a prewritten at least say opponent's name, retard "

flwo in the first line was stretched, pulled it back with the second, good punch came good and direct as they should

Heavy hitter? Nigga please, only thing phat about him is in his arteries
Shud change his name to systole cuz he gettin dropped in a heartbeat

flow coulda be tighter but thepunch was on, nice and direct again, makes me wonder why the hell you dropped what u did against me

Back off before you get slapped up, fake ass drug dealer, try and act up
Dukes you couldn't push key's of coke if you spilled soda on your laptop

finally u showed u can flow, this was easily the best i;ve seen your actual rapping skill, ok wordplay, nice punch

flow - pretty decent, fell off some, but you had some ok multies towards the end which made it much more fun to read - 3.5/5

punches - took this category easily, some nice concepts delivered well - 4/5

wordplay - not the best wordplay but decent still - 3/5

creativity enjoyed ya concepts in this battle, showed you can flow whilst keepin ya content in there - 4/5

overall 14.5/20

my vote - k1llacam

p.s. heavyhitta, posting after someone has voted to try and convinve other vters that you won makes you look like a complete dick, dont do it,

peace

mothafunky · 02-09-2005, 11:51 PM

heavyhitta,"i'm sounding like a bitch so i'll shut up"

good call. but i'd say more like a fuckin dumb ass. i guess whatever floats your boat though.

flobotopics · 02-10-2005, 08:22 AM

ok both these cats voted against me in my topical so there is no way i am out to help either. just playin guys

heavyhitta-- your verse did flow and had some nice wordplay. you didn't have any good punches at him. the whole verse seemed like you wrote it before you even had anyone to battle. like it was mad generic. you coulda said something creative with his name or something. seriously it seemed like this was mad prewritten.

k1llacam--your verse had some aight flow game to it the wordplay wasn't as hard as heavy's, but ya puches were very on point. you really showed in your verse how he didn't really come at you. i could definitally tell ya wrote this towards him. i liked how, even though its overplayed, you told him straight up he had not one personal in it. it was so true.

on account of better battle verse overall i give this to k1llacam.

3-0 KO K1llacam wins

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