[K1llaCam]

5 bars
no flipping/dr/biting/recycling/bullshit
1 verse battle
drop asap


Aight those are the rules you wanted. You gotta have 10 posts to vote. And no crew votes

[K1llaCam]

I read this Manchester red devil’s prose, much like his user title it b.l.o.w.s
Dobbs couldn’t be signed to a label if his mom sewed his name in his clothes
Can’t concentrate. I think this that site is wrong for him, let me elaborate…
…He keeps going to the B-boy Hook-Up forum… to score a hot date
So you made words rhyme? It’s forced and fake, flow is easy to create
Watch me demonstrate with these 2 bars & make text emanate and salivate
Oh brother I tell a dude he’s wack and get ambushed by his insecure lover
I’d put part of my foot up GrandMoron’s ass, but Dobbs got 3 inches covered


Yea i just went 8, i got better shit to do. How soon is ASAP for you????

ayo killacam, bitch you sure its mode you iller than?*
jus' read ya verse on reflekt'n that shit was pure filler man*
call me garbage man, coz i'm takin out this trash
spittin with class, call me dildo, coz i'm rippin this kids ass
like natural disasters in malaysia, i'm flowin rapid shit to phase ya
rocked this cunt like i blocked his funk'n shocked with a verbal tazer
sorry if my words amazed ya, coz it's obvious you rhyme poor
cheap rhymes'n weak lines, you buy ya skills from a dime store?
if so, take them back, coz they aint even worth that
biting verses from cats with dope raps is the only time this nerd's phat


* - he said he was better than mode, and his verse against reklekt was one of the worst verses i've ever seen in a battle on the frs.

[Mode]

killacam - this was pretty good.. had some nice lines in there.. label one was good.. closer was nice personal too.. others were mediocre.. the emenate 'n alivate line seemed just like filler.. flows were pretty good in this one though..

dobb - killed it with flows, they was nice.. some funny lines 'n good quotables.. punches kinda lacked oomph near the end though.. but kept steady 'n was a nice drop..

overall.. i aint hatin on you killacam 'cos i also voted against you in the other battle.. but i'ma have to give this one to dobb killacam had a couple nice punches.. but thats it, dobb had a couple nice ones too, but also more normal ones.. dobb also had better flows.. killacam had better wordplay though.

DOBB

peace.

[Reflekt]

def not a hate or dickride vote. it is meerly my strongest opinion with regards who won this due to best drop

killacam : again, this was pretty decent, you came harder in this battle than in mine for some reason. flow was better, and so were punches.

fav line:

I’d put part of my foot up GrandMoron’s ass, but Dobbs got 3 inches covered

nice typa personal.

dobb : you came alot stronger in this battle than killa. like previously mentioned, dope flow and some nice lines indeed. some good punches, but was actually expectin something a tad harder tho.

fav line:

rocked this cunt like i blocked his funk'n shocked with a verbal tazer

it had great flow, tho it wasn't a real hard hitter.

overall, good battle. but my vote goes to Dobb purely coz his verse was stronger.

peace

thanx for the votes guys, 2-0. and reflekt, i woulda come harder but i saw his drop at u and thought 'what's the point in tryin?' so i keyed this in like 30 secs or somethin.

[Reflexion]

KillaCam - Came pretty good with the punches but shit needs to be shaved madly. I mean ya could have said what you wanted to say in 1/2 the text and you could have made it more cohesive as a verse on the whole.

The first bar was alright and the clothes line was nice but it was way too sloppily delivered. Also, it set a high standard for the rest of your verse which you more or less stayed true to, which was good. But, the rest of your verse was too wordy also.

I'm not trying to trash you but give you critical analyzing so you can improve. You have the right ideas down and I can see a style developing, but you just have to work on your articulation and wording. I mean I can see the personals and good concepts but they have to be fleshed out to make a strong verse. I recommend reading over my beginner's guide with special attention to the power wording part. You have something there kid, you just have to be pointed in the right direction.

Dobb - Seen way better from you before in the punches department but you flowed well. The concepts need some work because they were all very rudimentary. Some of the ending rhymes didn't completely flow well in light of the previous words, but it was generally decent. You've improved flow no doubt but i'm still seeing the same level of punches that i've seen from you way back. I'd recommend trying to say the same thing in different ways to see what is most effective and that could help you generate better concepts possibly. I'd try to work your flow out of a slick concept rather than compromise anything for multis and such.

Vote- If Killa the concepts of power wording down and just some touches of flow, I would definately give it to him but dobb just outclassed him with the overall delivery. Killa had better concepts but dobb had better communication. Take a look over the guides Killa and I really think you can use you skills valuably. With better concepts dobb and a bit more dynamic articulation, you'd be able to rival mode.

Dobb

[Reflexion]

dobb 3-0 k-o