[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

We can do this Text or if you actually got real flow and skills
we can do this audio...
i'll battle to your choosing

2 spits each
aint no bar limit
no time limit just fuckin handle ya biz
normal voting rules

holla

and when i whoop ya ass dont go talkin shit that people dick rydin n shit cause im from this site
peoples her vote shit straight always so lets roll

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

aight man g'luck to you
just keep shit simple and keep shit hip hop
Holla



Whatchu bout to witness, is similar to,
David n Goliath, im heavily defiant,
You aint even breached a radar yet N im a giant,
I been through alotta cats, alot of them hotter than you,
only deadly vision here, is reading ya text dude,
Dont need no evidence, its evident ya wack as shit,
I'll murder ya sweet, dead in ya sleep n under the sleet,
You packin titties n a puss is the ONLY way,
you on the level to even fuck with me,
Cause Dv is a Homo Yo, WIth no flow ya need to go home,
Cause you takin a crap, is the only way you' can sit on a throne,
I got verb's that'll leave ya whole face misshaped n displaced,
your skills sound as fake as a thread coming from bigchase,
and fuck this nonsense, I'll serve both of you,
exile two fuckin idiots cause you had the nerve to do,
questions our skills? with no heat to back up ya claims,
thats like walking into a gun fight with a weaponless gang,
who the fuck is you mayne, i tried to maintain,
but i dont give a fuck about no drama,
always death before dishonor, that can put you in a trauma,
send you cryin to ya fat mama, cause thats the way im bomb ya,
6 to 12 lines, means you aint got shit to say,
you could be named bowser and still aint spittin heat my way,
your fuckin gay, and like mtv you just aint tuff enough,
to me this was pleasent, to tell you peasents to shut the fuck up

[deadlyvision]

Verse 1.

Asshole| you merely an angel, ima god, pounding this wimp
Net thug| if you read something wack, well just consider it written by him!
Garbage| 25 lines, lmao, structure worse then the fucking twin towers
N' if you hear someone going, ohhh! ahhh!
..............................................It aint his fans, it's him in the shower!
Watch as this beating takes shape, is it my birthday? this a piece of cake
E-Thug| kid just look at your name, tryna run away but you can't E-'Scape'!
Lyricaly wack| get smacked, like a ho without dough
Putting a price on ya head like punching bar codes!
Spark n tangle, n' leave his bark mangled, then use his halo to strangle
Slice ya body spread it on a rainbow so you can really be a arch-angel!
I'm mean, fuck you up and lyrically destroy your dreams
Check the letters in blue and find out what his name really means!

Twin towers are broken and demolished and shit.
Scape is his other name. E-thug is internet thug. Think bout it.
Dough=money, ho's get smacked when they don't bring money to they pimps

[deadlyvision]

Verse 2.

Strapped with gats, killing cats, leave 80 holes in ya back spelling dv was here
I'll clip this angel's wings and have him falling faster then his career!
Leave your head spinning like two wheels on a bike
I fucking strangle dikes with the fucking wire of my mic!
You spitting dope? ya right, seriously, that's doubted highly
Cuz everytime peeps see his drops, they make like a smiley
Kid come on, I mean did you honestly think that you'd win?
This faggots so poor he has to put alarms on his garbage bin!
But fo' real, call me wack, see my verse, and admitt to getting sonned?
Damn i'd call you 'two faced', but then why would you wear that one?!
Fucking pussy <.... exactly what you'll never be doing! and I aint tryin be funny
Because the real comedy is that people break into his house and leave money!

Done........................ good luck

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

Ok wait, dude im confuzed now you talkin bout guns in ya rap,
were'nt you the one that said Gangsta rap was wack? c'mon black,
In fact your more like a rappin steve urkle?
Claim to be the best...but the only fan you pulled so far
is the one spinnin in a circle,
Only way you ride, is when i put you in a herse n all, splitted
Who the fuck are you talking to? ya verse aint got a personal in it,
first colors, now he's using pictures and shit to win it?
Go back to RV and tell em a BBOY gotchu ripped again,
listen freind,
you like a mummy getchu rapped up then put away,
noone even tryin to discover ya wack ass today
even this fagg couldnt manage a shout out by DJ Kay Slay...Holla


Now yall can vote

[flobotopics]

ANGEL---well angels first verse was good. seen some better flow from him before, or it could be i'm all perced out now. like chase said the deadly vision is his text was good. your second man. i like alot of lines in that but thought it coulda been peiced together better. the fan line man had me rollin. i liked splitted....personal in it line too. overall pretty nice.

DV--- i think you hurt your flow tryin to get the first letters in his name at the begining of each line. i never caught the flo, but then again i ain't read many of ya rhymes to get ya style. but like y a opener didn't rhyme at all and i said it a million times to see if i could get it to. but i liked the bar code line alot. i got the flow a lil better in your second verse though. it was like 2 different styles. i like ya second style better. easier to read and get the flow. some aight punches in it too. i was expecting alot more from ya dude.


VOTE=ANGEL, cause i really didn't like dv's first drop at all......keep it up and if ya got time vote on mines and j's VV PLEASE...ANYONE

[Enkore]

okay since i need 1 more post to be happy and this shitz been slept on like mattresses...

Angel: been a while since u dropped a battle verse on here, same style though. flow was pretty damn nice, few spots it fell, some nice punches, and general disses. lacked complexity though, and that was crucial to ur line lengths.

[2nd verse] fuckin stepped it up yo, for a short piece it was pretty damn hot cuz of the personals and multies u had in it. flow was tight too, even better cuz of the multies. only thing it really lacked was a strong closer, i felt ur closer was jus too weak to have an effect on the battle.

Deadlyvision: for 'original vets' i must say i was surprised. ur style is def textbased and being an ex-text head from other boards i can say that ur shit isnt very uncommon, but to be honest that would never work in a real situation. some nice lines here and there, lacked complexity like angel's first verse too. ur blue letter wordplay wasnt workin, to be honest, u jus didnt do it right. a large break and repeated 'thug' in 2 letters, jus didnt work.

[2nd verse] again, stepped it up, got rid of the mad gay text play and hit with some decent wordplay and punches. flow was a lot better on this one, but even though u did step up ur wordplay, it jus wasnt too hard.

Fave Lines:
You packin titties n a puss is the ONLY way,
you on the level to even fuck with me,
Cause Dv is a Homo Yo, WIth no flow ya need to go home,
Cause you takin a crap, is the only way you' can sit on a throne, - Angel

N' if you hear someone going, ohhh! ahhh!
..............................................It aint his fans, it's him in the shower! - DV

Only way you ride, is when i put you in a herse n all, splitted
Who the fuck are you talking to? ya verse aint got a personal in it, - Angel

But fo' real, call me wack, see my verse, and admitt to getting sonned?
Damn i'd call you 'two faced', but then why would you wear that one?! - DV

Final Words:
I'mma have to give this to Angel, though i found it a lot closer than i had previously expected. DV's style jus doesnt work in an actual sense and it killed him in the first verse, whereas in the second verse when he got rid of everything and dropped, he hit Angel with some generally nice shit. But like i said i'mma give this to Angel on account of more constant flow and hard hitting verses.

angel - first verse was below you, i know it an so do u, some ok disses but no clever punchlines really, flow was on point but basic, blah. second verse came much harder, used some multes, better delivery in ya punches, and good personals.

deadly vision - first verse was wack, why the fuck did u waste ya time with all the textplay bullshit i'll never know, coz damn, that aint emceein son, it aint even rappin, shit its like readin poetry for the retarded or somethin. second verse was decent, u actually wrote a decent rap verse, but for someone with all the punchlines u musta misplaced them in favor of played generic/the type of punches 14 yr old kids use and think they kick arse at rap typa shit.

my vote = Angel, basically, he owned it. K-motherfuckin-O'ed punk.

[flobotopics]

ANGEL WINS by KO


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