[lil'kiwi]

My vote:
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Mothafunky vs J'roc
Mode vs Arfen

Rules:
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15-20 lines
no dateline
First to 3 votes win

As promised,I'll drop first.

[lil'kiwi]

Triple-gore,as I give this little whore my daily chore,
Crack ur jaw,stab ur tongue raw,u spit blood in this brawl,
I silence u with my lyrics fluency,decap u with words supremacy,
Kiwi playing the villian against "angel" in ur world of lunacy,
See,I dun need to fuck wit cops to be their biggest target,
Coz when I drop,my words so fast,cop gives me speeding ticket,
Ur rap coming so slow,or u got stuck in ur flow?
Which is it,dude,realize,learn and get to know,
Get help,is this the reason ur avatar blink and glow?,
Wow,doin R&B,that must be some romantic shit u got there,
Well,romantic enuff to sing luv songs to little girls in funfair,
For u,I think R&B stand for rear and back,same as ur aim at rap,
At this game u sucks at,kissing ppl rear just to get me back,
Now,its game over for ya,I already got u defeated,
Nothing to take cover for ya,ur resources are depleted,
Spit me back,bitch,if u ever got the itch,
As u an angel,I will hang ya too on the crucifix..

Job done!

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

wow... can you people not find anything new to diss on besides the fact I can sing..
its all hood


I step into a ring, i known for killin victims,
But now im splittin fruit? dawg you gotta be kiddin,
ya verse seems cool, but how...
how you gonna perform these bloody actions,
you fake wanna be thuggin re-inactment,
Show me Action, with ill rhymes and sick flow,
or is it that appearent your lacking both of those,
come on Yo, trying to go toe to toe, to dethrone me? NO!
I eat little bitches and now I eat fruit, doing it literally,
Im servin this bitch sliced diced gourmet, you gotta be kiddin me,
Simple syllable's and wack phrases, how gay this lame is,
he can never be a big man, no matter what size his "lil" name is,
ya shameless, ya wack son of a bitch,
how many times a day are you heavy suckin a dick,
ya cum drippin lips ejected is the only way you can spit...
something fluid n twisted,
cause if you thought rappin was ya hope...
who the FUCK told you, you was gifted?
And how the fuck you gonna diss, yo name is most femenine,
and basic drum taps and claps shatter his whole skeleton,
so who needs a clue is you, you villian? you aint no felon 'N..
realize on this site, you get ate up more than kids do kiwi gelatin

[lil'kiwi]

Kiwi gelatin?take it easy,G,I'm so tuff u might choke wit it,
Couldn't swallow a whole,a common problem wit bitch suckin ur dick,
So Fuckin short,even my nick "lil" get away wit it!,
Spittin heavily on my nick,take a look at urself,freak,
Naming urself angel,pffft,he musta need a miracle to win this battle,
In heaven,God will take ur halo off just ta' behead ya',
Smash ya' down under just for satan to devour ya',
Yeah,who da' fuck told me I was gifted?u silly bastard,
Hold on...Who da' fuck need talent to get ur mind all twisted?,
Standing tall against me,I suggest u get emergencies back up,
In case I'm too hot to handle,and u never get the hell up,
Bitch,try to ignite me,but u just haven't got the right key,
U can't answer me,just like the case of tupac and biggie,
To be fair,I doin R&B to serve ya,straight Rape ya' & Bruised ya',
Stomp ya' face with ma' "Nike",its easy,no mercy,I "Just Do It",
U dun need "weed" to get high now,as u got "crack" on ya' face!

Good Luck,Boy!

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

I think dobb voting for me, got this cat straight shook,
cause this will be the lengh of a hook, and you still get took,
this is about composing lines and puttin in rhymes,
Your verse did niether, cept when you took mine!
dogg re -read ya verse...none of it makes sense
WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING TO, kiwi is too dense,
ya too tense, fuck tryin, I already got the win,
go back to ya pen and pad n just start wrttin again,

Votes please

[flobotopics]

kiwi--you came out strong with the first verse. i really got down to it. it had some flow, and a couple good punches. it was unfortunatly followed by your second verse. your second jawn didn't rhyme or have too much sense in it.

Angel--i like the fruit refrences. good flow. some places in the first verse ya stretched to make words rhyme. but over all the first verse was dope. the second was a lil short as you know. it was ok but like two more bars woulda been nice.

vote---angel

[Mode]

no contest really.. angel took this, some of the best stuff i've seen from kiwi though (your elevatin man) kiwi was actually pretty good with the first verse, but second killed itself.. angel came with some nice punches 'n wordplay, second verse was a letdown though.. bad sportsmanship yo.. shoulda still dropped a proper verse, angel took this overall though.

my vote - angel.

[mothafunky]

ok, i guess i don't have much to say, but here goes anyway.

kiwi:
round 1:
i liked the last line in your closer. you do a lot with half-rhymes an stuff, i dunno, every once in a while it makes a nice twist, but i think you do it too much, throws off your flow.

round 2:
feels like this whole verse is slant rhyme. wasn't feelin much flow at all. punches were minimal.

angel:
round one:
idunno man, i think you played heavy on his name, specially cuz you keep callin people on playin on yours. but you had some creative punches and wordplay.

round 2:
short, to the point. had some alright punches. i think to make a short verse have impact you need HARD punches though, to make the statement work. woulda been nicer if it was longer, but i disagree w/ the sportsmanship think though. back in the day there were lots of talks about a verse shouldn't be judged on its length, but on what's in it.

vote: angel, all around came nicer.

[Bboy Jroc]

angel wins. closing thread.