[XxNameLessxX]

Aight, Amp challenged me to a battle. . . Here's rules:

VERSES: Two each
LINES: 20-25
VOTES: 5 = win; 3-0 = knockout (anyone can vote)

Challenger goes first; that would be Amp. I'll be waitin' for heat.

[Amputationz]

This battle gon’ be easy, the skills are long gone on this dyke
Verbally rape you so bad I gotta slip a condom on the mic

You aint better than me, but not many are, so its O.K son
Only way you’ll become fuckin heavyweight is if you add an ‘f’ to your location (K.F.C)

Stick a double barrel between ya lips, choke you with it to stop ya screaming
Send a shot through ya roof like I don’t like the ceiling

Face it, spittin verses is something ya wack at g
Only be as good as me if he spat my verse back at me

Slit ya throat with ya collar bone, stick it back in to stop the bleeding
Now he’s only nameless as he lost his memory to forget this beating

Take AIM at this bitch, and let the blood rain*
Ya aint for real, A 9mm leaves this dud slain

Nameless sucks so much dick he aint got gaps between his teeth
Set ya alight, now ya listeners finally feeling heat

Merc (merk) this bitch, convert his spine to benz (bends)**
Bludgeon you with a mirror so you can see ya life end

Claret splatters on the glass, you can tell this is serious
Fist through face gives ya brain an out-of-body experience

Like ya delirious, on an LSD trip
Cant claim to be the best no more, just the illest G ripped


*his AIM is bloodrayn some number
** as in mercedes benz

[XxNameLessxX]

Talk about takin' AIM, there's a 187 in progress/*
I'm lyrically killin' you if you can catch the concepts/
I'll attack you at any odds, whether it's fair or not/
It's not I don't wanna, I'm jus' too scared to stop/
NOT! I do it for the pleasure to cause ya pain/
An' I'll hand you ya head so fast that ya drop ya brain/
9mm? You could carry umbrellas an' still not stop the rain/*
It's no joke, but ya ass is jus' funny as fuck/
Duck an' then run, but couldn't dodge me if god gave ya some luck/
If the devil was a jester, you'd still be wacker than Hell/
I'm like ya girlfriends cunt, cause I'm bad for ya health/**
I dropped Amp like a mirror an' shattered his pieces/
This shit comes from my brain so quick, you could say I have telekinesis/
I'll help Em wit' his thesis an' smash the Amp to pieces/***
I light this mic like a bomb 'fore I blew ya to pieces/
An' cut the fragments so small, people get you confused for Reese's/****
You couldn't "turn this battle around" if we went from 'facin' to 'back-to-back'/
This bitch's so queer he got faggot's stoppin' to grab they ass/
You bein' my bitch is the only way you could have 'da man'/****
An' you could grow 2 quarters of a dick an' STILL not be "half a man"/

* = Jus' my way to flip his line about my AIM name (bloodrayn187)

** = Jus' saying his girlfriend's a disease infested bitch wit' AIDs

*** = In Eminem's song Infinite (on his first CD, Infinite), one line goes, ". . . wit' telekinesis, my thesis'll smash a stereo to pieces". That, added with the fact his name is Amp, makes the whole punch line/word play

**** = Reese's Pieces. Do I need to explain more?

***** = 'da man' sound's almost identical to 'demand'

[Amputationz]

Stick a hand to a throat and let a bitch choke
Cremate the body and hey presto, nameless got smoked

Toke on the ashes while at ya funeral
Its ironic, considerin how ya only flows are urinal
That I use ya open casket as a toilet cubicle
Like ya PO’d body, lines must be satan the way fury falls*

Fuck a pussy up after I apprehend this kid
After this battle I’m on the sex offenders list**

Amputationz, emcee rapist at ya service
I still don’t go anal, cuz nameless has a cervix

So keep spittin bout half-penises to make yaself feel better
Give yaself a spit polish, lil nameless will finally get wetter

I got this on lock, for once you aint surgin from behind***
You’re a virgin to typin lines, who else rhymes pieces three times?

You demonstrated that you gotta lack of vocab
Break some weetos, ya opponents still wont think ‘O snap’

Find it funny you talking bout sex, only jack off when masturbated
The girl that does it is like the terms ‘saint louie’ and ‘incest’, you both related

Hollow ya mouth out wit punches, grab ya tongue and leave ya lickin beats
At first I thought I double posted, but you just spit about the same shit as me****

Get fucked up by unoriginal bitches, it proves lack of skill is venereal
Buy out a fabric store, this bitch still couldn’t use his own material


* he got pissed on (PO) but the normal meaning of PO is pissed off. Hence the fury bit
**im saying I raped him so that’s why im on the list
*** surgin from behind as in gay sex as well as the comeback meaning
**** hes got lines about mirrors, 9mm being used with something about rain… just like my spit

[XxNameLessxX]

You could amputate my arms off, an' I could still hold the stage/
'Cause I'll hit you so hard, this bitch'll swallow my shoulder blades/
I can think o' rhymes so fast, I got time to procrastinate it/
An' I spit lyrics into ya head so quick, you end up decapitated/
Talk about me postin' your shit; dumb-ass hypocritical faggot/
Check the "Diss" thread; I already did a spit about ashes/*
Piss in a urinal? Dawg, I flow like Niagra/
Rape me? You couldn't get an erection if you overdosed on Viagra/
Don't act gangsta, bitch; you ain't even felt the street life/
Let you out after hours, ya ass'd be cowerin' under a street light/
Until you learn to write rhymes, don't think your original/
But it's so hard for you to beat me, niggaz think I'm invincible/
I said it before: It's like I'm so hot, it's like Hell is wit me/
You got schooled for two rounds, ya skill's still elementary/**
I could sow ya mouth shut, ya couldn't flow tighter/
An' you couldn't be my equal if I was ya ghost-writer/
Bring ya whole crew; It'll be me verse all ya/
Cause I raise the roof so high, ya think the Earth was fallin'/
Ten bucks says I get a knock-out wit' three votes/
The only dick you got is the one that ya deep throat/



VOTE PEEPZ!!! lol

* = I already rapped to Sovrin about rollin' an' smokin' her ashes/
** = gettin' schooled is a figure of speech for gettin' beat. School, elementary. It should be explanatory.

[flobotopics]

aight this battle was kool. ya both came out swinging. and i liked some of the punches. heres the breakdown

AMP---your first verse was nice. but keep your lines together. ya shouldn't break ya verse into bars. but it still flowed.

Slit ya throat with ya collar bone, stick it back in to stop the bleeding
Now he’s only nameless as he lost his memory to forget this beating--best punch from first verse

your second verse was straight on point. i really enjoyed reading it except you split it up into bars again.

I got this on lock, for once you aint surgin from behind***
You’re a virgin to typin lines, who else rhymes pieces three times?---flowed nice

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nameless-your first verse started a lil slow but picked up at the end. was aight all together

You bein' my bitch is the only way you could have 'da man'/****
An' you could grow 2 quarters of a dick an' STILL not be "half a man---good line

your second also came much better than your first. flows and punches were just much better than your first.

I could sow ya mouth shut, ya couldn't flow tighter/
An' you couldn't be my equal if I was ya ghost-writer---tight bar


well over all i like AMPUTATIONZ verses better. just felt better over all....peas

[Tytan MC]

OK, for the feedbackz:


Amputationz:

1st Verse
Some nice and violent verses I saw there, which flowed ok. Some great punches indeed, making you opponent feel embarrassed.

2nd Verse
Got even more violent and perverted there, making better punches. Started out a bit slower but regained pace. But the flow was OK overall.

Anyway, nice freestyling from u! 8/10

XxNameLessxX:

1st Verse
The flow is ok, starting off a bit slower than at the end. Some nice lines there. OK overall.

2nd Verse
The flow had improved in comparison to the 1st verse and there were better punches with more violence in them:
Piss in a urinal? Dawg, I flow like Niagra/
Rape me? You couldn't get an erection if you overdosed on Viagra/ -Nice line

Not bad. The 1st verse pulled you down a bit, it simpley could've had better flow and harder punches. 7/10

Conclusion:
It was a nice battle. Both you fellaz did some nice freestyling, but however, I felt that AMP was a bigger monster than Nameless having the most "painful" punches.

Vote = AMP
2 : 0

Peace out

Tytan MC

[Mode]

amp - flows were pretty nice in your bars.. got a grip of the multies.. punches were aight, verse came across more violent, which would be good if this was a VV battle.. not bad though.

2nd - really upped it, had some real nice quotable lines.. less violence an some more harder punches, flipped it pretty well too, really feelin the closer..


nameless - flows were pretty good i thought, wordplay was nice, you flipped it aight.. punches were decent.. nice closer

2nd - not bad, kinda more self promotional at times, some decent punches in there but.. wordplay was on point. good drop.

overall, i think it was a close battle, but i'ma have to vote nameless.. if amp had've come harder in the first verse 'n focused on more direct punches i think he woulda took it 'cos he rocked it with the second verse.. nameless kept it persistent with both verses 'n didn't slip so yeah, my vote - nameless.

amp - first verse i really wasnt feelin, even if you would have put ya bars together (i did it in notepad to see how it flowed better) it seems like ya bars didnt actually flow together as one verse, on their own each bar was pretty decent, as a verse i felt it didnt flow.

second verse was far better the flow was on, the punches were on, mad improvement on the first.

nameless - first verse flowed well, tried to flip some shit and didnt do to bad but coulda been better, punches were aite/

second verse again came pretty well an the flow was on, stayed pretty consistent with the first.

my vote = nameless

[Reflekt]

let's finish off this battle. ppl should post....

Amp - yeh, like previously stated from Dobb, as a bar it was good, yet when put together it didn't flow very nicely. your punches were good, and i really got into it bout half way.

second: straight to the point it seemed on this one. some nice punches indeed and it did have less violence which was better.
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Nameless: sorta like Amp's first in my opinion, how it started off a lil' slow, yet was good towards the end.

second - i was liking this line alot

"Until you learn to write rhymes, don't think your original/
But it's so hard for you to beat me, niggaz think I'm invincible/"

your flow in your second was also better i reckon.

Overall: both of you guys put up a nice fight. However, i'm really not a fan of the "gay punches" sorta thing. too common, don't hit as hard. I hope i'm making sense. But yeh, my vote is going Nameless, because i think it was more consistent throughout.

[did i do this right? sorry y'all - first timer]
peace

[Abstrakt-FLR]

Amp - your first verse wasn't bad at all... flow was aight and punches were decent, wordplay was average... overall a good verse... second verse was a lil worse i thought... punches didn't come as hard as well as wordplay but ya flow was on point still...

Nameless - first verse was nice... punches came pretty hard and ya wordplay wasn't bad at all... flowed well... also a good verse overall.. second verse was hott... punches were real good and ya wordplay was nice, maybe flowed even better than your first verse...

Vote - NameLess

[mothafunky]

aighty then, let's do this

amputationz:
i was feelin your wordplay (some of it seemed a lil forced, but overall pretty nice) and your flow on this one. had some nice creativity, some clever ish. i thought your second was a lil harder than your first, but both came pretty good. came out in the first verse with a nice opener, got it started off good.

fav. bar:
I got this on lock, for once you aint surgin from behind***
You’re a virgin to typin lines, who else rhymes pieces three times?

also liked the "sex offenders list" line.

nameless:
flow was flyin in an out. sometimes seemed real nice, sometimes didn't feel it as much. IMO when you repeat little phrases in certain spots, like "...it's like i'm so hot, it's like" it chops up the flow a lot. second verse wasn't as bad for explanations, but sort of overdid explanations in first verse (not that that affects the verse really though). as far as wordplay, thought it was ok, had some really nice wordplay. and some not so nice wordplay.

fav. bar:
Talk about me postin' your shit; dumb-ass hypocritical faggot/
Check the "Diss" thread; I already did a spit about ashes/*

nice flip on that man.

overall: i think amputationz sort of took it on all of flow, wordplay and creativity, but nameless came pretty good too. i enjoyed reading this one, keep doin this up guys, but my vote is for amputationz.

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[syndrohm]

amp:

"Amputationz, emcee rapist at ya service
I still don’t go anal, cuz nameless has a cervix"
damn i like that line

"Take AIM at this bitch, and let the blood rain*
Ya aint for real, A 9mm leaves this dud slain"
nice play on his aim name


nameless

"You could amputate my arms off, an' I could still hold the stage/
'Cause I'll hit you so hard, this bitch'll swallow my shoulder blades/"
nice nice

" said it before: It's like I'm so hot, it's like Hell is wit me/
You got schooled for two rounds, ya skill's still elementary/"
tight i love this line

****Vote = Nameless****

Both ya had some good wordplay, i think nameless had some better punches overall and thats what pulled him ahead on this one. Good battle

[Reflekt]

Nameless you win. Props!

[Bboy Jroc]

nameless wins, 5-3. closing thread.