[Roc]

2 verses, normal ish...

last vote: kaiz vs. arfen

i got first...

[Roc]

look son, i don't know what ya frontin' me for,
maybe ya back-less 'n can't 'stand up' to a lord,
i'm ill to the core, arfen couldn't be sicker,
kid goes unnoticed like green party stickers,
all ya do is bicker, 'bout how ya raw 'n shit,
face me 'n realize how ya mauled real quick,
the flow is thick, yours is sensitive like thin ice,
i'm 'eatin this coward' like he's 'chicken fried rice',
sliced 'n diced, ya thoughts can't shower mine,
it's like a 'brain-storm' 'n ya just lost ya mind,
i'm the type ta shine, get burned like i'm the sun,
you the type with no heat like unloaded guns,
get clapped fa fun, ya battle like ya don't see me,
the thread's title is the only time ya get near me,
weak 'n leary, that's how arfen is known as,
it aint a surprise that he often get blown past,
'n shown class, by cats ya try ta battle,
face a paraplegic 'n still be the one grappled,
steady baffled, like kids stuck on a rubix,
ya suck bitch, 'n ya rhymes need a new fix...

[bboyarfen]

wow, if I was retarded I'd say ya dropped pure hotness,
but I think ya should drop the mic, go back to ya chopsticks,
I'm fuckin hot shit, you not it, ya got this, just stop it,
man, you could drop ya greatest verse...I'd top it!!!
fuck this waste of life, when it comes ta style ya tastes impaired,
like steak my skills rare, ya shits useless like outdated software,
fuck jroc, I won't just burn this bitch, I'll fuckin light her,
you really gonna 'maul' me?!? are you a rapper or a tiger?!?!?
anyway, are you crippled or plain dumb... I'm just wonderin,
cuz ya said you a parapalegic... isn't that somethin??
ya numbers past, I'd have ripped ya ass If I had the time,
I'm "leary"? leary's a scientist, now thats a wack ass line!*

*there was a scientist named leary...i pretty sure its not a word

[Mode]

Jroc - flows were on point throughout.. had some decent punches, not much on the personal front.. some aight wordplay, overall decent verse.

Arfen - hahaha @ opener, that was good, you had some niec lines in there man an pretty good wordplay.. flows were pretty nice too..

my vote is gonna have to go to arfen, overall, his verse was more creative an he had some nice quotables.. J came nice with the flows etc, but punches fell a little short compared to arfens.

vote - arfen

peace.

[Tanga]

Jroc - Good wordplay, had a nice flow too it... yea you didn't really get personal with arfen as much but I liked some of the wordplay. Like the party stickers and the chicken fried rice haha

Arfen - Flow fell off at a few parts kinda hard to tell, since it depends how you pronounce some words... good wordplay and played on stuff Jroc was on. Good stuff (chopstix) here other then:

"I'm "leary"? leary's a scientist, now thats a wack ass line!*"

seems forced just to be included + you had to explain it for us to get it as well, I just felt it wasn't necessary.


Vote - Jroc

[Mantic]

ima have to agree on mode with this one. Jroc had his classic wordplay and flow on da spot and all but arfen had the punches and the personals coming in hard, especially on the opener.

wow, if I was retarded I'd say ya dropped pure hotness,
but I think ya should drop the mic, go back to ya chopsticks,


to me that hit pretty hard lol


my vote arfen

[G.H.B]

both dudes where ok i guess but you gotta give to jroc he's got this one, he put a bit more creativity and structured his flows better to get his point across as well

jroc

flow was nice, punches came good throughout not many personals tho, nice wordplay

arfen

tight flow, punches were good, flipped well, wordplay was aite

my vote = jroc i thought his verse hit a little harder

[flobotopics]

hey yall. check it. i thought both verses had some tight things in em.

j-roc---yours flowed much better. i think it was just an easier read and the punches were there.

arfen--i just think your didn't roll off the tounge as well as j's. the outdated software was a kool line. i just think j's was better

vote-j-roc

[puertolumbian]

jroc: nice flow, but you didnt really hit that hard on yuh punches. wordplayage and everything was there...but still, didnt quite hit that hard.

arfen: ima have to say....damn. lol. if this was live...on stage and everything, i could picture some emcee sayin that and the crowd like "OOOOOOO!!". lol. nice opener, and you kept wit the punches throughout, niceness man.


vote: ARFEN

3-4

[mothafunky]

hey, at first my decision wasn't as clear on this, so i went through it again. i dunno, both have some lines that i'm not really fond of, but overally an alright battle.

jroc:
good flow, some nice punches. didn't like a bunch of lines in this, but you made up for those with a few decent ones. liked the brain-storm line, but you got hit back with that "leary" line (and you were correct with that arfen. spelled leery, then it's a word, but doesn't make any sense in that spot). overall came alright.

arfen:
flow was decent. on and off. a little too much off, like tryin to flip that "mauled" line, didn't work out at all. you had some clever stuff in there though.

both came alright, but i'm gonna give this one to jroc. if arfen was a little more consistent with his then it woulda gone to him.

[Mode]

Jroc won this one also.. your ona roll man, closing thread.

again, apologies flobotopics. hahahaha CLOSED


it is closed mode.........hahaha i can edit your post sweet