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Razz Vs. Mode - 07-31-2004, 07:22 PM

arite arite let's jump back into this shit.

you know the rules man, 2 rounds, blah blah.

i don't care who spits first, you decide.
lol first battle in a while..
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lol first battle in a while.. - 08-01-2004, 09:08 PM

as a child, razz wrapped in jackets to say he's born from hoods,
ya raps are wack, razz is back? we thought he was "gone for good!!",
a rap catastrophe attack the wackest geeks this kat is bashed 'n weak,
actually, ya tracks wouldn't be dope if ya mic was stashed with weed,
so mash the keys an naturally ya crap aint no match ta me,
the facts are freak, my text reads ill like signs for cancer week,
face it ya basic, so what you gotta be a nusiance for?
a useless bore, razzle get dropped faster than newtons law,
abuse ya jaw, razz can't make sense without a presidents face,
like takin sedatives 8, ya rhymes are tired it's evident mate,
i'm settin the mood, ya only spit from the dome givin head to a dude,
ya gettin the fued? damn bro, william hung is better than you,
more off beat than autistic musicians, got nothin in sync an,
ya chances of winnin are worse than saddam becomin a christian,
i could sit here all day, dissin on razzle 'n straight harrassin him,
'cos fact is, like playin truth or dare, ya games embarrassin..

peace, your up bro.




"ya'll can read it 'n weep like love letters.." - celph


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08-03-2004, 02:02 AM

i've stomped vets, droppin complex strong text to shake cats like bomb threats
so it ain't no contest when we conk heads, cuz after i spit it's disaster n' shit for anyone who's on next.

in context, i'm smokin n' fly, my opener alone got you chokin and hopin to die
mode really loves me, cuz even in battle he can't stop quotin my lines.
n' you must've broken your spine, cuz the way you rap, you even make wack dudes wanna up and smack you.
i mean, if i had my head that far up my ass i'd have broken my back too.
now that's through, but ya verse still has us dazed and confused
not that it's amazingly cool, but some parts are deranged and subdued and need to be rearranged and renewed.
And i can name you a few, i should smack ya cheek for the phrase 'facts are freak'
n' for ya first line you should get capped in the back with a gatt for a week.
my attacks are unique, and even the wackest emcees would have to agree
that half of the crap that you happen to speack is shattered and weak
i mean, mode's a lump in the system like the two caps of you knee
and fuck breakfast, i eat kids like you as a snack before sleep.
fag'll get cracked in the teeth, got him hopin to quit. shit why'd we even get this poser to spit.
so before ya get lost in the outback next time work on your piece of shit closer a bit.
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08-07-2004, 05:08 AM

i'm burnin ya son, still ya returnin the love buy quotin my spit,
claim ya doper than this when ya knowin ya shit kid focus a bit,
nice 'n i'm raw, wanna be violent, i'll stick a knife in ya jaw,
this is a battle, why say shit you've said in VV's an cyphers before?
dicin a whore, ya need to settle with the edible prattle,
an illegible battles, hell ya only wordplay involved medical babble,*
ya nursery verses get worse with each post, beat mode? please bro,
i leave ya feet cold, geez ya speech blows so hot i speak toast,
a weak joke, razzles commin up short, like when he holla at migets,
but i gotta forgive it, ya couldn't drop dirty at 5 dollars a minute,
razz has to come hard 'cos my styles arousing, fuck ya sound kid,
i'm down fa poundin a round a loud clips into this clowns shit,
leave this bitch ta medics, spits like 6 ripped schitzophrenics,
all over the place knocked into nova 'n space the kids shits hysteric,
what i'm bumpin is hard, ya record must hunger fa scars,
an razz must frequent homo clubs, he always spits under a bar..**

*mode's a lump in the system like the two caps of you knee
** he spits a bar before he does his verse..

your up bro, peace.

Last edited by Mode : 08-07-2004 at 05:13 AM.
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08-14-2004, 02:43 AM

expect ya back to get hit with blasts from the hip when this cat razz get back in the mix
cuz i'll be trashin this kid, when i jump in the fastest of whips where the passengers sit
while one a the homeboy's gassin it n' laughin a bit
we strapped to the tits with gats and with clips to clap at this kid
while we passin his ave in a fit of click clackity-clicks
this fag'll get capped in the hip while he's flappin his lips
actin like his raps are the shit when half is prewritten, and the other half of it's bit.
battle with this? ha, i think this fag would rather plop his ass on a dick
but i guess i should give him a break, it's his time of the month and his pad's in a twist
yall got the wackest of kids to attack me with hits that ain't even scratch me a bit
man, this is just my opener, now try n' get ya wack raps together n' get back at this, bitch.

rattlin clips, why yall always got me battlin kids? i've had enough of this cat n' his name.
let me ask you again. why is it in every FUCKIN battle our verses look exactly the same?
and if that's too bad to explain, try backin the fuck up 'fore i turn these words into war
already pointed it out, but each one of your lines, i've already said in the verse before yours
oh, remember our last battle? i'll have you lookin worse than before, with ya body parts popped in a truck
and i'd dice ya flow up too, but damn, that shit's already choppy as fuck
you ain't cocky, you suck. ain't got the nuts to scoff with a vet
only time you dropped science was when the textbook fell off a the desk
couple of hacks n' it's off with ya neck, there goes another newb in the game.
stupid and lame, mode speaks toast? man, i'm guessin that's news to ya brain
now i got ya lickin ya warts, scared to get on the court. you lookin whiter than the shit that you snort
how u gon' talk about wordplay when ya only decent punch involved the words 'midgets' and 'short'?
i rip bitches for sport, take a good look at mode, kids. that's what you call a disgrace
n' i'd drop recycled lines too, but if i stooped to your level i'd have balls in my face.


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08-18-2004, 09:43 PM

round 1

MODE

Flow : really nice flow, lots of multies and inners to make it interesting, was on point throughout
rating 4.5/5

punches: came pretty solid throughout, some were funny, some were clever some were both, good job.

rating 4.5/5

wordplay: pretty nice, the opener was good, as was the dropped/newton line

rating 4/5

creativity: some good thinkin went into this verse i really like it

rating 4.5/5

fave bar

face it ya basic, so what you gotta be a nusiance for?
a useless bore, razzle get dropped faster than newtons law,


total : 17.5/20

RAZZ

flow : dope flow, really nice and kept it movin at a fast pace on point.
rating 5/5

punches: not bad coulda come harder i thought, some nice lines but not as consistent as modes verse.
rating 4/5

wordplay: was lackin a little, i didnt really see much use of clever wordplay in there unfortunately, coulda been better.
rating 3/5

creativity: pretty decent, very nice rhyme scheme in fact awesome rhyme scheme
rating 4.5/5

fave bar

now that's through, but ya verse still has us dazed and confused
not that it's amazingly cool, but some parts are deranged and subdued and need to be rearranged and renewed

total : 16.5/20

Round 2

MODE

flow : really nice flow kept it at a hard pace throughout
rating 5/5

punches: not as good as ya first round i though, some were dope, but some were a bit daft i thought
rating 4/5

wordplay: ok, again not s good as round one, the closer was nice, i like that made me laugh
rating 3.5/5

creativity: again pretty decent man some nice stuff in there and the rhymin was nuts

ratin 4.5/5

fave bar

what i'm bumpin is hard, ya record must hunger fa scars,
an razz must frequent homo clubs, he always spits under a bar..**

total: 17/20

RAZZ

flow : fuck man, u got some serious skill in ya spits, i loved the flow in this verse too
ratin 5/5

punches: really nice man some were VV but u more than made up for it i thought with some really funny disses

ratin 4/5

wordplay: some better stuff than ya last verse but still not awesome
ratin 3.5/5

creativity: again really creative rhyme scheme and more creativity on ya punches this round
ratin 5/5

fave bar

but i guess i should give him a break, it's his time of the month and his pad's in a twist
yall got the wackest of kids to attack me with hits that ain't even scratch me a bit

total: 17.5/20

mode : 34.5/40

Razz: 34/20

my vote = MODE

really nice guys
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08-19-2004, 04:31 AM

verse 1

Mode- Came nice with the flow, punches medium to pretty good and some aight wordplay. I felt that you could have dropped some stronger wordplay or made the punches a bit less obvious, but a nice drop overall.

Razz- came pretty tight with the flow, some parts could be reworked, but still nice, punches and wordplay weren't that great and it coudl have been a little more creative.

verse 2

Mode- pretty tight flow, kicked it up a bit from the first verse, punches could have been a bit harder and wordplay a bit more effectively used, but good.. on par with ur first verse


Razz- Kicked it up a lot overall in this first.. better punches and wordplay, flow was staying tops. Again, a bit more cleverness would be apprecated, but nice again overall.


Vote- Hmm.. i think Mode took it from Razz first round but Razz came really strong the second round.. and both of Razz's verses seemed to come a bit ahead of mode here, I'ma give this one to Razzle

Vote- Razzle

gj all


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08-19-2004, 09:10 AM

wow crazy battle i must say...razz said to vote in the FRS game thread lol....so lemme try this....

*added word* i found it so hard to vote on this battle i actually started yesterday and will be finishing with my overall thought 2day lol...

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[Mode] 1st Verse

came pretty nice with wordplay, damn nice flow, opener was good, personal. multies and multie-inners in practically every bar. the only thing i hated was the played line 'sense - presidents face', iono too used for my liking but not a big deal on the overall piece.

FAVE LINES:
a rap catastrophe attack the wackest geeks this kat is bashed 'n weak,
actually, ya tracks wouldn't be dope if ya mic was stashed with weed,
^^nice, flowed so beautifully lol

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[Razzle Dazzle] 1st Verse

not really feelin this verse too much. u came hard with multies and ur flow was on point, but u lacked consistant wordplay so ur punches werent as hard. funny, yes, effective, not so much. Mulites and multie-inners throughout jus like mode's verse. Opener was fire though and def some quotables...

FAVE LINES:
in context, i'm smokin n' fly, my opener alone got you chokin and hopin to die
mode really loves me, cuz even in battle he can't stop quotin my lines.
^^funny, and personal

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[Mode] 2nd Verse

honestly i see u step down with this verse, opener wasnt as hard, less wordplay and seemed more concerned with flow. Becuz of less wordplay it also lead to less punches or weaker ones. some personals but personals came with each verse anyway.

FAVE LINES:
dicin a whore, ya need to settle with the edible prattle,
an illegible battles, hell ya only wordplay involved medical babble,*
^^nice personal and hard punch

what i'm bumpin is hard, ya record must hunger fa scars,
an razz must frequent homo clubs, he always spits under a bar..**
^^hahahahahhaa, good ish

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[Razzle Dazzle] 2nd Verse

ur opener was longer but it didnt hit as hard as most of it was jus gun talk and blastin clips and shit, not very original besides the length and the multies. now the opening bar of the verse was hard since it's pretty much true lol. Funny as shit and mad quotables honestly...lots of funny shit....i think it's a step up from ur last...

FAVE LINES:
rattlin clips, why yall always got me battlin kids? i've had enough of this cat n' his name.
let me ask you again. why is it in every FUCKIN battle our verses look exactly the same?


and if that's too bad to explain, try backin the fuck up 'fore i turn these words into war
already pointed it out, but each one of your lines, i've already said in the verse before yours

now i got ya lickin ya warts, scared to get on the court. you lookin whiter than the shit that you snort
how u gon' talk about wordplay when ya only decent punch involved the words 'midgets' and 'short'?

i rip bitches for sport, take a good look at mode, kids. that's what you call a disgrace
n' i'd drop recycled lines too, but if i stooped to your level i'd have balls in my face.
^^looks like practically half ur verse...well it is...it had me crackin up like mad....

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Vote - Razz.

i'mma have to give it to Razz on account of harder punches and jus overall enjoyment. it was a real close battle and it come could to either one of u...

but i'mma be honest, i've been switching my decision back and forth tryin to find the 'right' answer...oh well there it is, good battle to u both brings me back to when i started lol....




..::SONS OF LIBERTY::..

Originally posted by Anaktix
then i'ma give you an Enkore.....how much more can i say??
i'm dope as fuck like that one cat, aka Dorian Gray......


Originally posted by Mode
...your presence, flow 'n all that shit is on point, reminded me why your my fave emcee on bboy yooo..
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09-07-2004, 03:52 PM

Round 1:
Mode:Very nice flow, decent wordplay, heavy punches. I liked a lotta them cuz they were pretty damn original, despite what Razz claimes. 9/10

Razz:Your flow was a bit drawn out and at times repetitive. Work on that and youll be one of the best textcees on here. Your punches were incredibly good and personal, you had very nice use of multis, and lotsa wordplay. Very nicely done... if not for the flow it would be a 9, but id give it 8.5/10 still.

VOTE:Mode

Round 2:
Mode: didnt seem like he could rebound as well. The punches got a lot weaker then round 1, his worldplay got a lil better, and his flow remained consistent. I value battles on punches and creativity though, so overall im gonna have to give a lower vote. 7.5/10

Razz: That was insanely hard and brutal at the end. The beginning was kinda iffy (reusing words and fillers) but still did the job quite nicely. As you progressed you got really original and seemed to completly tear out the guy in responce to his seemingly half-assed post. To me it was like watching mike tyson box a house cat to the death. No contest. 9,5/10

Vote:RAZZ

Overall:RAZZ




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09-16-2004, 02:42 PM

aight, let's break this shit down"

round one
Mode:
came pretty hot. flow was pretty good. loved these lines
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actually, ya tracks wouldn't be dope if ya mic was stashed with weed,
so mash the keys an naturally ya crap aint no match ta me,
the facts are freak, my text reads ill like signs for cancer week,

a useless bore, razzle get dropped faster than newtons law
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i was feelin the opener a lot, but not so much the closer. overall real nice.

razzle:
nice son. your opener didn't do much for a battle verse, but it was ill. punches were pretty decent for the most part, but there was some shit i wasn't feelin as much.

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not that it's amazingly cool, but some parts are deranged and subdued and need to be rearranged and renewed.
And i can name you a few, i should smack ya cheek for the phrase 'facts are freak'
n' for ya first line you should get capped in the back with a gatt for a week.

fag'll get cracked in the teeth, got him hopin to quit. shit why'd we even get this poser to spit.
so before ya get lost in the outback next time work on your piece of shit closer a bit.
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that closer was tight. came good, but i gotta give the first round to mode. close shit.

round 2
mode:
sorta slipped in this round man. opener was off.
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razz has to come hard 'cos my styles arousing, fuck ya sound kid

what i'm bumpin is hard, ya record must hunger fa scars,
an razz must frequent homo clubs, he always spits under a bar..**
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came alright, but i know you can come a lot harder

razzle:
nice. damn nice.
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actin like his raps are the shit when half is prewritten, and the other half of it's bit.
battle with this? ha, i think this fag would rather plop his ass on a dick
but i guess i should give him a break, it's his time of the month and his pad's in a twist
yall got the wackest of kids to attack me with hits that ain't even scratch me a bit
man, this is just my opener, now try n' get ya wack raps together n' get back at this, bitch.

oh, remember our last battle? i'll have you lookin worse than before, with ya body parts popped in a truck
and i'd dice ya flow up too, but damn, that shit's already choppy as fuck(had me laughin)
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closer was pretty dope too man.

mode took the first round but razz came crazy hard in the second.
props to both a yall, but overall vote is for razz




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09-16-2004, 09:55 PM

aight.. i see a pattern developing.. i'ma give it to you razz lol, nice battle, you wont be so lucky next time (i hope)

you came dope bro, deserved it. peace.
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