[bboyarfen]

20 line max
I'll drop first...
was thinkin 2 verses...if thats cool with you...
3-0 ko...or 1st to 5
my votes are dobb vs. mode and aura vs. mc unlimited

[bboyarfen]

here it is, y'all better fear my shit, battle mode? fuck his spits,
sucks at this, I could roast mode if he weren't a half retarded bitch,
whys he startin shit, he mad cuz hes gay or retarded, I can't tell,
but the way he starts beef with bali...he should work at taco bell,
mode can't write punches, his brain must be lined with false statements,
if this was VV i'd have to take his mind outta the gutter to smash it on the pavement,
ya lame shit sucks, looks like ya with flux now, I'd be embarrassed,
I'm kind of confused though, since when did australia allow gay marriage?,
a pair of bitches, makes me laugh at ya wack spits even more,
i'll impair ya wishes, cuz I'm gonna desecrate mode...and his whore,(flux)
rhyme brokers...hah, more like broken rhymes, I'll smoke ya lines,
ya couldn't 'deal' me in for anything, ya wack ass should be fined,
couldn't beat mine, this star wars obsessed computer nerd wants to be heard,
but how can he do that when what he types are his only words?,
fuck this lowly faggot, all he can do is slowly hack it, droppin shit,
guess its cuz of all those battles, he's just to busy gettin ripped...

grar...

[Mode]

i rip clowns, bitch just sit down an admit defeat,
'cos like a diretic colon, man ya shit is weak,
arfens wack, has been since the day that he started,
ya wouldn't have punches if i removed 'gay' an 'retarded',
check this, i mess kids an sayin i'm wack is ya best diss,
ya texts shit, an last time we battled.. didn't you get ripped?
watch ya mouth son, only makin yaself sound dumb,
get beaten down, clubbed an it's only round one,
all ya songs are shit, you'll find nothin wrong with this,
arfen learnt my last diss so he could sing along with it,
i sock fools, drop jewels, this jock just got schooled,
arfens like his location, the guys just not cool,
my punches ahead of ya time, you'll feel the pain a week late,
arfen gets pushed back more than video game release dates,
ya lame ya schemes fake, damn i flame ya hardcore,
my game is past raw, only props ya got were made of cardboard,
let me gore a freak, ya punchlines are bored an weak,
i can't be called a geek when your online more than me,
don't lie to yourself man, here's a tip before we go,
no matter how hard ya try, you'll never be like awedio..*

*a while ago he said somethin how he thought he sounded like awedio (in the BS thread).

[bboyarfen]

man, this bitch can't think he's ill, this lost nerd deserves to be not heard,
i'm readin about colons an clowns, am I battlin a circus freak or a doctor?,
fuck this aussie rapper...he just keeps gettin wacker, I mean this,
you finally realized I think your 'gay' and 'retarded', AREN"T YOU A GENIOUS!!!,
onto the next bit, mode couldn't text shit he's just out gettin his text bit,
you called me wack in your third line...I can't beleive it, mode just bit my best shit!,
the rest of this don't matter, modes shattered by my first 3 bars,
cuz like 'professional golfers'...mode's shit is just 'below par',
this hos scared i'll leave ya nose chared cuz I'm spittin heat thats runnin free,
sing along vids for me?, since when did mode work the disney company?,
like a rickety house mode's gonna fall over, when he's losin he pouts,
mode should know by now...punches don't sound hard comin from mickey the mouse,
i'll discard this retard and leave him beaten an crushed, eatin my dust,
leavin mode ta rust, just like bad books...no one's readin ya stuff,
this fake just bluffs an I hate his stuff, i'll knock mode into slow retreat,
modes flows are beat, like kids with distrophy everyone knows hes weak,
i'll show this freak, i rip fast an i'll slit this bitch quick, mode spits trash,
this battle an ya last track both show...that pussies spit last...

[Mode]

look at this bitch startin a fued, get split in half with a tune,
we all laughin at you, arfen it's true.. i am smarter than you,
a disaster ya knew, battlin me when ya can't drop properly,
ya could spit from a burning house an still not be hot property,
yo i'm doper than a pharmacist arfen isn't hard ta diss,
blast a bitch, on audio he more off beat than a heartless kid,
i mastered this, the pussy's spit last 'cos i come hard with this,
an lastin with the fastest shit that straight tear apart ya spits,
your wack son, ya spits more staler than manaquins,
you an me like nerds an beaches, you pale in comparison,
ya styles comedic, an i'm gon' eat it as a snack right,
a wack sight, wouldn't be hot if you was hades in a past life,
got my game face on 'cos i'm ace'n this with tastful spits,
ya drop wasteful scripts, ya shits ugly, like failed facial lifts,
ya punches cheap, like tearin my verse, i'm rippin with skill,
like pelicans eatin watermelons, arfen aint fittin the bill,
i'll tell you now, arfen really sucks when he flows,
an his concepts are more played than reality tv shows..

peace, lets get some votes please.

Arfen

Round 1

Flow was pretty decent fell off a little bit in places. Some of the punches were good, but i think u played the flux lines a bit much. wordplay was ok.

Flow: 3/5
Punches: 3.5/5
Wordplay: 3/5

Round 2

I think u came much better in this round, punches were good, flow fell off a little, wordplay was much better.

Flow:3/5
Punches:4/5
Wordplay:4/5

Rating:20.5/30

Mode

Round 1

Flow was on point. Punches came pretty hard flipped some ish. wordplay was good.

Flow:4.5/5
Punches:4/5
Wordplay:4/5

Round 2

Flow was tight man, some interesting rhythms. Punches still hard. Wordplay was decent.

Flow:5/5
Punches:4/5
Wordplay:4/5

Rating:24.5/30

my vote gos to Mode i thought he was just a little better overall than arfen, good job guys. speak to u both soon

Peace

[lil'kiwi]

Bboy_arfen
1st bout:
Dissing flux,workin in taco bell....there are already two bad impression u leave in ur rap.First of all,stick to dissin mode,and so what if he works in taco bell?..doesn't make sense.
And move on to wordplay,it is it is plain and doesnt penetrate too much.
Rhyme,yes,ur rap did rhyme but some of ur lines are stretching,so many words between the first word and the last word that rhymes.
Punches,only the last few lines really move me...nice touch and a nice ending.

2nd bout:
Wow,wat can I say....this is a different story..
Wordplay,tend to be sarcastic and funny....and it work...good job on this!
Rhyme,improved but still like the first one,a little bit stretched.And some are the words that rhyme are copied from mode like "weak" and "freak"...not good man.
Punches,man,u making me luff!I luv ur punches on this one....disney,clowns,arent u a genius,...need i say more?

Mode
1st bout:
The first thing that impress me is the rhymes...every lines of urs rhymes and flow smoothly...thumbs up
Punches...very precise and deep
Wordplay....not many,but once it is played,it is meaningful and senseful.
As usual....u did a good job.

2nd bout:
Not much different from the first one....smooth and flawless rhymes,punches are there to do its job and wordplay are fantastic.
Like the way u counter arfen....it is yet again,precise!

Conclusion:
Mode kept his cool and does wat he does best with his rhymes and wordplay.
bboy_arfen,thought u can pull off surprises and u almost did with ur second rap,simply luv it!And wat a good effort that was!man,u deserved some respect...props to ya' man!

Vote:
Mode.B'coz he was almost flawless and didn't make any room for the opponent to turn the shit on him.

[Aura]

Arfen 1st:
"ya lame shit sucks, looks like ya with flux now, I'd be embarrassed,
I'm kind of confused though, since when did australia allow gay marriage?"

hahahahahahah that was funny.

Overall I thought you came pretty nice but it needed something more intimidating.

Arfen 2nd:
"like a rickety house mode's gonna fall over, when he's losin he pouts,
mode should know by now...punches don't sound hard comin from mickey the mouse,"<---nice

The taco bell bali line was a good personal.

I think you came pretty nice but I just felt too much of it was filler. You did kinda play out the gay and retarded shit. More peronsals woulda cleaned it up.

You've definitely elevated Arfen. Props for that.

Mode 1st:
Decent. I say that cuz I've seen better from you but your flow was on point. Your closer was good, I remember that shit hahahaha.

Mode 2nd:
You laced analogies and personals nicely.

"yo i'm doper than a pharmacist arfen isn't hard ta diss,
blast a bitch, on audio he more off beat than a heartless kid,"

Flow was even better second time around.

Vote: Mode on account of personals and use of analogies/similes.