rules

15 bars
1 verse
simultaneous drop - J just let me know when ya ready.

my last vote = Audio Tourney Final

J, what can i say? you suck cock like a hoover/
glued to your foreskin ur lips need stain remover/
get rid of ur sweaty cum stains, self gratification's lame/
why ya frontin as a rapper? deep throatins ya game/
its the same, feel the strain, ya got skills? hardly/
humiliate you more than the time you battled bali*/
y'knew that shit, ya dated her and still ya punches sucked/
ya dirty tricks**, ya made me sick, ya wack-assed flow was fucked/
i've looked, but i can't find a rapper with a slower mind/
get a mirror, look hard, a retard, who fell behind/
in a game where he's "gra-matic-ally ill"*** in fa the kill/
i'ma spill, the truth is kid, you got NO skill/
no appeal, fa real, ya ability is lackin/
im stackin roc, i'll knock him down, his fantasy is crackin/
wanna play with the big boys, ya belong with the shit toys/
when it comes to frees, ya possibly the guy with the worst joy/
fa sure ya can ryhme, there aint no question/
but ya lines been played more than "spaghetti westerns"
jroc's got his cock so far up his rectum/
broke his own cherry, girls the fucker rejects'em/
dreamin bout himself****, tosses off to his own pic/
cavity search j, and you'll find his fuckin dick/
d'you-know, juno thinks he got mad battle tricks?/
rides his own dick, thinks he owns this, joint, j's a prick/
missed a trick, he thinks hes slick, but j's another fake/
still waitin to hear him rap, does he have a claim to stake?/
a tip-off, ya slipped off, roc get a fuckin clue/
actin like a big-man when every fucker hates you?/
gonna give you a hand, man, you're final repremand/
check it peeps i owned this fool, jrocs final stand/

*rocs recent battle with bali he got skooled.
**made an out of order comment about bali's family
***above his avvy
****his sig

[Bboy Jroc]

i feel bad doing this, each click is a stab at you,
only time ya got 'flows' is when females throw 'pads' at you.
i laugh at you, it's a shame to hold it back,
as far as ya future tracks, just hold 'em back.
matter o' fact don't spit at all, i'm serious,
like paraplegics in bathroom stalls, ya shit's delirious.
ya outta ya mind, suicidal to battle me,
it only takes an infant to 'shake 'n rattle' thee.
i spit precise, ya aint nice, fuck manchester,
fuck this fag who be cryin' since his boy left her.
that's right, you a lady and it disgust me,
get off my dick, i'll cut ya hands before ya 'bust me'.
rough and cuss me, frankly it's not an issue,
so ya sick huh? fine bitch, here's a tissue.
wipe ya tears while ya it, someone help this kid,
ever heard of bustin' caps? son, i just popped ya lid.
and ya didn't even know, god, what an imbecile,
musta failed the third grade, talk 'bout early dismissal.
no guns, no knives, ya get violated tremendously,
someone call the paramedics, ya need to mend those free's.
check it d, you in a position where losing is inevitable,
i swallow this bitch whole 'cause cats see him as edible.
ya clutched man, gasp for air, mercy's on it's way,
on second thought, i'd rather beat this rag doll everyday.
thirteen bars, ya need luck to have ya mind function,
ya 'brain dead' like a blow job without the suction.

[Reflexion]

Dobb - pretty good flow.. started off aight but fell off a bit as it went along.. could have used some more wordplay.. it seems like u were setting up for some big punches but didnt really deliver.. i mean, the style of ya stuff was aight for a bit but i think it went to long and could have had more hard hitting punches mixed in.. better than the first time i peeped u though

Jroc - flow was also pretty nice.. had some nice punches in his battle and it was pretty evident that you were on a higher level.. wordplay was aight but could have been harder and punches could have been a bit harder, but ya stuff was above his easily I think


Again, I'ma give this to J cuz I think he has overall better stuff.. dobb, ya did pretty good and ya flow's workin fine, i'd just concentrate on getting better concepts for ya punches and practicin more wordplay.. gj all

vote- Jroc

[Enkore]

[dobb]
Punches: 2/5
Flow: 4/5
Wordplay: 2/5
Multies: 1/5
Overall: 9/20

overall it wasnt a bad drop, jus needs some real pollishing, work on multies to improve your' flow, but ur flow's already workin pretty damn well. u dun really pack effective multies, maybe a couple lines had multies...wordplay needs work as most of it jus had a gay reference to them, and not even a complex gay reference lol....

now punches is the main portion of a battle, and emphasis is put there, i feel u didnt come hard enuff, to make a real impact with this battle.

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[roc]
Punches: 3/5
Flow: 3/5
Wordplay: 3/5
Multies: 3/5
Overall: 12/20

overall it was a well balanced verse, flow was decent, punches were decent, etc. etc., nuthing really stood out as like "wow" na' mean? some nice punches were there, and they actually hit, could have hit harder.

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[both]
not a great battle, both showed some experience in the battle field and had some real nice flow to 'em. gotta agree on whut flex sed "i'd jus concentrate on getting better concepts for ya punches and practicin more wordplay".

Vote - Jroc

thanx for the votes guys, good feed from both, i appreciate it

[bboyarfen]

dobb...flow was nice, but you were lackin punches...overall decent drop...

jroc...better punches...you came harder than dobb and had better wordplay...

vote - jroc...he came harder and that won it for him...flow was basically even with both of you, but dobb lacked punches and jroc had them...jroc also had better wordplay...

[Bboy Jroc]

good battle dobb.

i win by KO. closing thread.