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dobb vs tao - 05-17-2004, 03:17 PM

7 bars, 2 verses, y'already know ur droppin first.

my last vote: jroc and tek
 

TaO
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Dobbs Hope you enjoy bro - 05-17-2004, 04:00 PM

Ima start this off slow and hit ya hard the 2nd verse
I haven't even seen ya drop ya but ya leavin in a herse
Bboy dobbs ya slob Knobs eat em up like corn cobs
Ya think ya rhymns be the ish just another shit on the kabobs
I spit and flow with ease I rhymn words like a breeze
Im consistent persistent try hittin me with punches please
Dobbs you can't even write rhymes you just mimic mine
Anazlying the situation u got me facin and ima come out fine
Take your gloves off you spit so slothful ya rhymns be awful
irefully ya readin my rhymn tearfully your regrettin distainful
The only way your gonna win is if you get jroc and anatix
Im smoothe spit with finesse ya spit like a crack fanatics
Just remember this is the begining get ready for the reckoning
My 2nd verse will rip ya corpse in two and i'll come out reigning

Peace Nothin But Respect

<.Cryptic Hieroglyphic mythic.>
Rain Drops of acid create collateral passage
Visionary Dreams occur undisturbed
Restless Mystic Floating around on updrafts
I reach for the castle in the sky
Clouds converge and obscure my view
What used to be is just an aparition
Of my Faded vision Sight lost
Darkness surrounds Im blind once more
 
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05-17-2004, 04:33 PM

fool, y'shoulda run not taken the challenge i gave/
im the slick-bitch-hittin ya pin-dick-lickin ass t' tha grave/
y'say ya the devil*, ya tha pits belong in the abyss/
miss-every-dis, piss-on-ya-spits, reminisce/
over all the shit, you posted, tao ya ass has been roasted/
toasted, on a spit, like a pig, d'ya feel it?/
come over t'utah, dress y'in a bra make ya dance like a tit/
lookin-a-fool,suckin-a-tool, boy ya ass has has been lit/
like th' end of my blunt-cunt-front is all y'can do/
recognize,realize that im better than you/
mimic a faker? i wouldnt bite from a fool/
cool? more like lukewarm, a false claim staker/
crush ya cryptic mythic*, with a style so prolific/
make ya style look dated and ya rymes neolithic*/

*see nebie thread
*his sig
*stone age

peace bro
 

TaO
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05-17-2004, 05:37 PM

Dobbs thats right your a bitch sippin slick prick/
You gotta chew to spew rhymns limp dick/
Abyss shit ya rhymns belong in pandora's box/
You couldn't spit a good rhymn through an equinox/
I'm not even close to being roasted i just coasted/
Tryin to spit like ya got skills but none to be boasted/
Prolifically cynical ya rhymns be stereotypical/
Everything ya spit is contradictory strictly hypocritical/
My rhymns be intagible Ya spits be insufflate/
You read my rhymn and got off whilst you masterbate/
You lulled me into a state of boredom and distortion/
Maybe ya mom was wrong not to have an abortion/
Devistation of your shitty creation during enebreation/
I can smell testosterone cummin from ya sperm reverberation/

Hope You Enjoy Nothin But the best Bro

<.Cryptic Hieroglyphic mythic.>
Rain Drops of acid create collateral passage
Visionary Dreams occur undisturbed
Restless Mystic Floating around on updrafts
I reach for the castle in the sky
Clouds converge and obscure my view
What used to be is just an aparition
Of my Faded vision Sight lost
Darkness surrounds Im blind once more
 
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05-17-2004, 06:17 PM

time-to-evacuate,my,ryhme-will-eradicate ya fo' ya'distancy/
emasculate this inmate, incarcerate ya fo' ya inadequacy/
and radically, ill impress, my distress, on ya lack of ability/
why bother t'spit at all if ya style aint got verility?
"protectin ryhmes like the caped crusader"*,im darth vader, slice ya with my lightsaber/
"use the force", but of course, what could wack-man do to this space invader?/
tear ya throat, an scrote makin tao-pie, eat it later/
master-baitor, tryin t' snare me, i wont fall for ya dote/
question my sincerity, but my shit is heartfelt/
question ya masculinty, is that a skirt held by ya belt?/
i masturbate, it reverberates, but urs's'so small it quivers/
i shiver, t' think what its like to have a cock that cant deliver/
a payload, sorry son u been bought and sold/
while you're spittin water, im flowin liquid gold/



*tao's msn sign in.


peace bro, chat soon.
 

bquip
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05-18-2004, 10:03 PM

my thoughts...

ROUND 1

tao - this verse was a little slow, it flowed well but fell off a few times. your punches werent very hard but there was some good lines there. I liked the inners you used there a few times. it would have been better if you could have don a little more of that. great finish.

dobbs - i loked your opening it came over very hard with the use of multi's. the flow, i was feeling, just the way you used the inners made this verse. i like the way you refer to verses that tao has already done. In most of your evrses i've seen i find you always use masturbating and ejacutaling as a punch. My advise is to not use those kind of punches too much because people might get impressions of you. Good verse though

ROUND 2

tao - you hit much harder in this verse, it was faster and your opening hit heaps harder than your first verse. you've tried to flip some of his lines i see which is always good. the flow on this one was much better than the first, as i said bfore it was a lot faster. better verse ths round.

dobb - your flow is always pretty tight although in this verse the flow fell off a few times in here. your punches were very hard and i likes the use of multi's in the beggining. this made the verse very hard hitting and the unches through out were good.

overall my vote DOBB just because his hits were harder and the verses were read with more power than tao's, and the speed of each verse was faster. good battle though, i enjoyed it.

next time tao and congrats dobb

peace
 

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05-21-2004, 01:54 PM

[Tao] - Round 1
Came slow as u sed, the flow wasnt bad, good use of inners. punches werent too great but like quip sed u fell off on a couple parts on flow as well. u would def benefit from some stronger lines.

FAVE. BAR:
I spit and flow with ease I rhymn words like a breeze
Im consistent persistent try hittin me with punches please
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Great flow

[Dobb] - Round 1
Opener was fire, u came bustin out multies and inners and bunch of other shit, it was crazy. Good use of personals in ur verse, could have come harder on the punches though. I haven’t checked out any other battles u’ve done but this one’s a pretty evenly matched battle.

FAVE. BAR:
fool, y'shoulda run not taken the challenge i gave/
im the slick-bitch-hittin ya pin-dick-lickin ass t' tha grave/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Good flow, inners and overall punch.
---------------------------------------------------~>

[Tao] – Round 2
*Taken from bquip’z vote: you hit much harder in this verse, it was faster and your opening hit heaps harder than your first verse. you've tried to flip some of his lines i see which is always good. the flow on this one was much better than the first, as i said bfore it was a lot faster. better verse ths round Says it all

FAVE. BAR:
Prolifically cynical ya rhymns be stereotypical/
Everything ya spit is contradictory strictly hypocritical/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I like dat, good use of multie-inners.

[Dobb] – Round 2
The opener was insane, punches were all over the place. Good personals, flow wasn’t bad. Good verse overall.

FAVE. BAR:
time-to-evacuate,my,ryhme-will-eradicate ya fo' ya'distancy/
emasculate this inmate, incarcerate ya fo' ya inadequacy/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Awesome bar, good punch, mad multie-inners. Best bar I’ve seen from you…or one of them.

[VOTE] Bboy Dobb

He jus took it, he put up a better verse. It was a semi-difficult battle to vote on becuz of the similarity in quality but in the end Dobb jus took it. Good job to both of u though.

..::SONS OF LIBERTY::..

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then i'ma give you an Enkore.....how much more can i say??
i'm dope as fuck like that one cat, aka Dorian Gray......


Originally posted by Mode
...your presence, flow 'n all that shit is on point, reminded me why your my fave emcee on bboy yooo..
 

Roc
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05-23-2004, 07:09 PM

i wouldn't explain much since bquip and enkore already did most of that. quick rundown though...

flow-wise, both of y'all weren't so stellar. decent, but could be better... na'mean?

as far as punches, i'd agree that dobb did take it... specially in round two. it seemed as if tao tried to go "deep", thus makin' him not come across as hard as he prolly could've. thanks for the name drop on round one though...

The only way your gonna win is if you get jroc and anatix

vote: bboy dobb

dobb wins by KO. closing thread.

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