[B-Girl BaLi]

2 verses
10 bar minimum 20 bar max
NO FLIPPING THE SCRIPT ON THE FIRST VERSE....
second is no holds barred

since jroc is a pussy.. ill post first

[B-Girl BaLi]

Not even with a pen could you leave yor mark/
Aint on point, you just a stab in the dark/
looks like the humble fairy finally said enough/
and sprinkeled you head to toe with "shut the fuck up" dust/
See, Im dangerous to fuck with like a dick with scars/
Roc raps like common claps i KNOW im sicker by far/
Prayin ill trip as i rip verbs nows an adjectives/
like beatin up on rerun i'll smack ya back to "whats happenin"/
Im back again to put Jroc in his place/
all up in his face as i deal him disgrace/
Couldnt keep the game on lock if ya swallowed the key/
only in ya wildest dreams pigs fly an ya beatin me/
call me the undertake cuz im takin the Roc unda/
strike Quick, lightning bolt an clap of thunda/
Not EVEN if you were Wayne Brady you couldn't choke this bitch/
gettin worse with each tap of shift, Jroc's unravlin stitch by stitch/
out of place on bd like richardson on the clippers/
an seein a shootin star offa the big dipper/
bow at the alter and pay ya last respects/
cuz if your not careful ya funeral is NEXT!

[Bboy Jroc]

who says Bali is wack? them niggas is crazy,
she's worse than empty paint cans tryna 'spray' me.
cats push daisies while some smoke trees,
ya can't push ya self 'cause ya big as an SUV.
lying is to deny it, some niggas have seen you,
ya can't fit in park rides made for two people.
she calls me baby like she's close with the man,
can't stand such endearment 'cause ya look like a man.
no intention to insult ya, i'm just clearly outspoken,
you're an insult to the game and that's truth in the open.
it's obvious these facts got ya tongue-tied,
call me Teddy Roosevelt for such a 'rough ride'.
mood's way mellow so ya need to be strangled,
ya 'flaws' way longer than the Texas panhandle.
if i come too offensive, just tell me straight up,
i'll come back with "you an overweight, double-z cup".
fools rush into things that don't even make sense,
just hush 'cause ya raps don't even make 'two cents'.
ballpark average? ya the definition of amateur,
ya caused so much shame even 2pac is 'mad at ya'.

[B-Girl BaLi]

even said ya self my lines were hotness,* ya rhymin on here cuz ya ass is jobless/
its a sign of the times, compared to you every line i rhyme is flawless/
took awe's punch an said that im fat,only thing big's my punches knockin ya flat/
envy how i act, thats a fact: the sight has respect for bali an think "the roc is wack/
said im a "insult to the game" but when you look it up, nextdoors ya name/
do ya even have half a brain? thinkin strangled and panhandle rhyme, thats insane/
if i look like a man that explains why you'd date me why bedroom door closed ya dropped ya pants an yelled "rape me"/
verbal assited suicide dont hate me, you squirmin like a worm,screamin bate me/
ran out of shit to say so ya told me "whats comin next": the same wack lines with no rhyme in ya text/
12 punches at me and half dont make sence, the other half repeat ya self self is that ya best?/
used tha word nigga but ya ass is Pinoy* boy,libal to get gang banged jus like a graff toy/
ya "rhyme exploits" exagerated worse than Rob roy* shut tha fuck up an go eat some soy/
readin my last verse, way sicker than your first,ya zombied like a islander got ya soul cursed*/
drop smelling bad it was SHIT couldnt smell worse, finished reading my post face scrunched an pursed/
know you lost from the start of the term, gotta get ya mommie to calm ya down like a bad perm/
couldnt impregnate anything with ya sperm, ya retarded head to toe, when this kid gonna learn?/
dont fuck with me cuz your not on my level, i got ya scared to hell like my name was the "DEVIL"/
rhymes unorganized an half assed, this aint the past an ya lines STILL dissheveled/
sending ya home hersed up,look that girl's gone and done it/
the sites lovin it,ya never drop ya last verse? its still unanimous, ive won it/

*first line of his verse is "who says bali is wack? them niggas is crazy"
* Filipino
*noted Highland outlaw whose reputation as a Scottish Robin Hood was exaggerated in Sir Walter Scott's novel Rob Roy (1818) and in some passages in the poems of William Wordsworth
*people in the carribiean tell stories of people having their souls taken from them and them becoming zombies b/c of voodoo

[Bboy Jroc]

apology pardoned, but no excuse to lose 'dearly departed',
you the DEVIL in Eden's garden belly-crawlin', disheartened.
i'm GOD embodied, aint nobody bold to hold the cold ether,
blood in my veins it kills ya, and when the time is up i send ya to hell and seal ya.
enough biblical scriptures i'll fix ya, envious of me so ya takin' my picture,
sweet smilin' as i pinch ya and watch ya explode like a nitrous lamp fixture.
i guzzle soy to build muscle, don't throw punches i throw knuckles,
put ya in a car with loose buckles and cut the brakes while i chuckle.
laugh at this, laugh at that... i'm like pandora holdin' a gat,
open a pine box and take shots 'cause the graveyard is where ya be at.
i'll put ya in a ditch bitch, straight confused when the spit switch,
flip the script where the verse sits, sold half o' my ass* to get rich.
sleight of the fingertips, slide an AK clip make it come out of paper,
it's not that i hate ya but ya seem so 'empty' like bitin' on wafer.
harder than ever, long behold ya thought wrong sayin' i aint better,
my mom's calmin' me down while yours comin' to town so i could pet her.
oh shit, i'm surprisin' my self like i was Donald Rums-feld,
jealous of my 'wealth' so i beat ya to death with Donald Trump's-belt.
amazin' aint it? how the ROC made it with a victory grossly painted.
ya talent aint costly nor celebrated 'cause it won't grow if ya patiently waited.
i'm kickin' it like Asics, met all basics as i step into the matrix,
i did it with a half a brain while yours is scattered in many places.**
face it, the only dead sperm is mine drippin' from ya lips,
my mind spittin' electric hits while ya stay 'faked' as an Iraqi wired to his 'pits.

*she said i was "half assed"
**her location says Atlanta, Norfolk, etc.

[Mode]

Bali - flow was on an off for the most part.. some forced bars.. wordplay was aight, punches were aight, but needed to focus more.. there was alot of self promotion lines in there.. but some good punches..

2nd - first thing i thought was 'what the hell?' damn long.. a last ditch effort.. flows were better than the first, but your stretched bars threw it off a fair bit.. i feel that there is some personals people will not understand here that are between you an jroc.. punches were a little better.. some just plain strange (*noted Highland outlaw whose reputation as a Scottish Robin Hood was exaggerated in Sir Walter Scott's novel Rob Roy (1818) and in some passages in the poems of William Wordsworth) - wtf? wordplay was better in this one..


Jroc - fat punches against bali are kinda played.. flows were good, fell off only a little.. wordplay was good.. other than the fat ones your punchlines were decent..

2nd - flows started a bit off, after half way your flows picked up nice, as did the punchlines an wordplay.. you picked it up for this verse.


overall my vote has to go to Jroc on account of comming a little better with flows/wordplay punches.. bali you had some creative lines an need to work on flows a little, jroc's punches came a little harder an his flows were a bit steadier, ya'll both on a near even level so was a close battle..

[razorbrain]

lol what a waste of space this battle is.. i still think this should have been one yall could have handled outside of this site, but fuck it:

bali... dont know what mode was talkin but thought you came hard on this one.. good punches, decent flow, wordplay was ok good job...closer was kinda blah


jroc

dude. you really gotta start tryin to do somethign original.. first the multi thing a while back..then the flow biting(in my opinion atleast) or razzle, now this.. enough of the fat jokes man. these are more played out than anything...awe-dio, mode,etc. please try something new my friend... flow was ok.. teddy rosevelt? come on dude, half the kids on this site dont even know anything about him.. punches that werent played were ok.. closer wasnt

round 2

bali...flow was off and on.. first half was decent punches were ok.. liked what you were saying, just lines looked kind funnybut not bad..from the rob roy line on it wasnt so hot..lines were kinda weak and flow was off.. ok verse


jroc


..alittle more variety this timebut ultimately not much better.. flow was good..punches were few but funny..departed and disheartened dont flow that well to me and seal ya and ether dont rhyme buddy.. thoguht you'd have overcome that by now.. upon readin once i thought ya verse in the first half more resembled a verbal violence than a actual battle verse..not bad..not great either.


final vote- ill say this and i have said it before: if you gotta explain ya punch, then dont use it..this was overal bland battle..but then again nether of you battle regularly...and SOMEONE just ghosts all the time like its cool jp lol.. if i had to give it to someone, i say BALI....she had more punches and was over all better.. ya had a decent flow roc but ulimatley ya really wasnt sayin much..i aint feel it,,, good luck to yall

[newBreaker19]

NICE BATTLE GUYS!!
1st round:
bali: your first verse got some nice meaning and nice flow i loved it, it just didnt have enough punches. You could of replaced some of the lines to punches then you could of come on top. this is what i like from this verse...
Not even with a pen could you leave yor mark/
Aint on point, you just a stab in the dark/
and...
Couldnt keep the game on lock if ya swallowed the key/
only in ya wildest dreams pigs fly an ya beatin me/
all nice but yuo cold of gotten more punches...

jroc: Ok you didnt have much flow here but your punches were all funny as hell and i felt them pretty hard.
cats push daisies while some smoke trees,
ya can't push ya self 'cause ya big as an SUV.
lying is to deny it, some niggas have seen you,
ya can't fit in park rides made for two people.
if i come too offensive, just tell me straight up,
i'll come back with "you an overweight, double-z cup".

2nd verse
bali: nice bali way better then the first, your flow was nice as fuck and you had some nice punches on this one too, if your first was as good this battle would of been way harder to decide.
if i look like a man that explains why you'd date me why bedroom door closed ya dropped ya pants an yelled "rape me"/
verbal assited suicide dont hate me, you squirmin like a worm,screamin bate me/
ran out of shit to say so ya told me "whats comin next": the same wack lines with no rhyme in ya text/
12 punches at me and half dont make sence, the other half repeat ya self self is that ya best?/
LOL nice personals!!!

jroc:lol kept the fat jokes alive and kept your cool that ws nice. your verese came with more flow on this one i liked it but the first one made me cry of loughter. This one was good tooo mad props to both of you. yoru wordplay was better as well as your style. i aint gonna post my fav parts couse i dont wanna make this longer than it is

my vote: overall my vote goes toJ-roc for best punches and best wordplay in this match. Bali you did great is nice seeing you in battles again. If you could of made some more punches you could of taken this one. You probably concentrated more on flow and switching scripts then to get personal on this kid.

peace~

[STIFF_UK]

Just a note before I get started...
I think the reasoning behind the votes for all previous with the exception of Razor was a bit off to say the least.
"kept your cool" ?
Of course he kept his cool - he had hours to come up with the rhyme. This isn't face to face in a club y'know.


Bali
Rd1.
I've seen and heard better from you, but there were some good points in this.
Was definately feeling lines 3 to 6
"Wayne Brady" and "stitch by stich" bar I liked
Overall I thought it was lacking something but had some good hits to it.
Decent flow here too.


Rd2.
I did think some of the punches were a little too complex. If you hadn't have explained Rob Roy, I'd have needed an encyclopedia - lol. And I'm a Brit !
I was liking the structure on the first two lines. I read all this shit aloud and it rolled off the tongue nicely. Props on that one.

The two lines with : Date me / Rape me / Hate me / Bate me//
OUCH!
Gotta say that was a fucking good punch in my books.
Followed it up with 2 good lines too.

Finished up with a good punch too. Liked it.

The flow seemed to wander a bit through the verse. Times it was spot on, other times I needed to look to find it.




J-Roc
Rd1.
I see where you were going with the paint cans line, but to me it didn't seem to come off.
Ditto with the trees/SUV rhyme.
Doubled up on a rhyme of "man". - Some people dig this kinda thing - but it honestly bugs the shit outta me.

Outspoken / open - yea, liked that.

On the whole it seemed like you had two jokes in your arsenal. Fat and Ugly. That's like pre-school stuff man.


Rd2.
The switch/rich lines had a NICE ring to them. Definately felt it - except - is it REALLY a good thing to sell your ass???
There wasn't a great deal that stood out in this one.
A lot of your limes seemed kinda general, you weren't going for her as much as you could/should have.

"pet her"
'yo momma' stuff man - old too. I know bali used momma - but it was very different - this was just a straight up "yo momma" gag - and that shit's done.

There were a few good lines and rhymes in this verse, but some stuff still don't make snese to me even after having a chance to think.



My winner came harder.
Had harder punches.
In my book a better flow and a much more advanced structure.

I'm voting BALI

[Subject]

not much time but i thought i'd vote on this..

first off.. weak battle, you guys should have just done this in diss the previous guy or something. and when does Stiff UK vote on FRS battles?

bali.. flow was on and off in your verse.. seemed somewhat forced in places, i agree with mode about the self promotion lines, i thought you could have put some more effort into most punches. had some nice ones (original), and your wordplay was good.

jroc.. you had decent flow but like razorbrain, mode and stiff said, fat/ugly punches are played.. but you only had a few lines like that, the other punches were decent, more blunt/to the point so they hit harder kinda thing.. wordplay was alright.

round 2

bali.. was ok, flow wasn't happening for me, seemed off more than on.. there's alot in your verse that could have been taken out to improve the flows.. punches were ok, nothing that really stood out.. not feeling the rob roy line.. was like you were trying a bit hard.

jroc.. you picked it up for round two, still nothing overly amazing.. flow was decent for the most part.. couple played punchlines but the rest were good/funny.. like razor said, a bit more variety, was an alright drop.

i am giving my vote to Jroc because i thought he overall came better with flows and punchlines.. both of you came pretty weak and this was a tough vote. but jrocs schemes stood out a bit more than bali. both of you keep elevating.

[Zeke1]

i have to say something on this...i wasn't going to vote, but then i read the other votes....so


Roc....yo, some nice shit...you fell off a little since a while back when you were eatin kats all the time....i don't care what these fools think, fat jokes are hilarious, and as long as the punch it's self is original, fat punch or not...it still hits! but the fact that you didn't stay on it helped ya...flow was on point...i like the way you started in the second verse......overall, not bad, but you have done way better



Bali...i've seen so much better from you....your first verse was ok, flowed nice and not really any corney lines, but your second verse was full of corney shit.....those explained punches need to go, if you have to explain a punch like that, there's no point in even using it....in my opinion that hurt you alot...
"said im a "insult to the game" but when you look it up, nextdoors ya name"......nextdoor's ya name??? nah!!....it's lines like that that make your verse sound dumb....stretched lines hurt the flow alot



vote...JROC....his punches were harder and he kept a decent flow through both verses with content and punches....plus, bali's second verse killed herself....i read it like 4 times....sorry girl, not good

[b-boy sobber]

Originally posted by Zeke1
...i don't care what these fools think, fat jokes are hilarious,

lmao ima drop a vote once i read the both verses just had to laught at that

[Aura]

I thought this battle was totally inconsistent with punches and flow on both sides.

Bali's first verse came with an "I'm better then you" theme which was alright. Her second came alot harder with some very personal personals which is fine if it hurts him and some people know the deal... then it works, but some of your punches were too wordy and researched.

Jrocs first verse came off with the "your fat" theme and his second seemed like he was holding back shit he REALLY wanted to say with HIS version of "I'm better then you" .

All in all the variations kinda mucked the whole shit up on both sides. I didn't know what the hell you guys were trying to get at most of the time. Real forced it seemed.

You guys battled before right? In my opinion I would call a rematch cuz I couldn't decide a winner and I did try. Just my .02

Round one.

Bali - the flow was, tight throughout, i read it through over and over to try and fault it but i really couldnt. wordplay was alrite but nothin really stood out. I liked the punches throughout especially looks like the humble fairy finally said enough/
and sprinkeled you head to toe with "shut the fuck up" dust/

Jroc - again the flow was tight, i liked the rythym. wordplay was alrite again nothin really stood out, thought ur punches were too focused on fat jokes woulda liked more variety in there.

round two

Bali - thought u lost your flow a little at the begining got it back at the end, wordplay again nothin stood out. punches, damn some o that shit woulda gone way over my head if you hadnt explained it, i really liked this line tho "if i look like a man that explains why you'd date me why bedroom door closed ya dropped ya pants an yelled "rape me"/"

Jroc - ur flow was ill in this round the rythym was well put together and u could just feel the way it flowed. wordplay was better in this round, punches were far better i especially liked "harder than ever, long behold ya thought wrong sayin' i aint better,
my mom's calmin' me down while yours comin' to town so i could pet her." and also "enough biblical scriptures i'll fix ya, envious of me so ya takin' my picture,
sweet smilin' as i pinch ya and watch ya explode like a nitrous lamp fixture." this and ur closing bar did it for me.


my vote = Jroc

[Bboy Jroc]

ROC, 5-2. closing thread.