[s0fiztik8ed]

Max 20 lines
2 verses
First to 3 votes or best outta 5
3 days to reply between each post or notice of inactiveness (look at mode and jroc lol)

all the best bro.. im out.. i'll hit you back asap
im sure people wont dick ride here.. laters good luck man

EDIT MODE - i'm just letting these dudes battle without votes 'cos there has been no battles to vote on in recent times, so it's cool aight. peace.

[c_flux]

Nailing this dame with sophistication leaving your membrane delaying,
This complicated bar will lay your brain fading an' painstaking
ta comprehend what I'm saying, blamin Flux cuz on spot you get that stage fright,
The kids' insane enough ta play himself cuz he can't spell his name right,
Maiming this type, battlin me and I'll leave you scarred an charred bitch,
Must've come "hard with wastes" cause youre "fucking garbage",
With raw spits, when I drop it my hocks explode like a verbal rocket,
Try ta top this.. it'll knock ya bitch, corrodin ya circle of knowledge,
Stoppin ya, cuz your scripts fading an'shits dated..the meaning of s0fiztik8ed,
Check-mated, the games you feign is mad lame.. that even kids have degraded it,
Since youre hated I'll take fated label and knock that eight to its side,*
And you've got the number of tries you would take ta elevate to ma'tide,
Claiming your life since sofizs' spits' fucked, leavin you zipped up,
Turnin you twisted, insipid as a living.. a given gift when I ripped ya,
Still rehearsin fa his verse fa me to churn through, ma'words will hurt you,
They'll alert you, I'd splurge more but I heard this kid's gotta curfew...

* Knock '8' to its side, and you've got infinity

Note.. some lines you gotta say it with no breaks, etc. so it beats in time

Peace

[s0fiztik8ed]

i flow like h2o just to let you know, i "corroded" his rhymes to sand/
i'll vanquish his 'drops', can't 'c_flux'* dispite how hard he comes to 'land'//
flux is 'influxible'* and incapable of dropping PHAT rhymes as it seems/
closest you'd get to PHAT is a life time supply of 'chrispy kremes'*//
his fluxion is obstructed from the lyrical defense i had constructed/
can't flow like 'flux'* says, if his life was on the line and was abducted//
flux's fuked as i deconstruct his worthless 'bars' into decomposition/
destroyed his desolated and discrete rhymes in this lyrical demolition//
your rhymes needs education, stop wastin' your time in this situation/
go back to play kids games, because i'll bring you to 'total annihilation'*//
i'll surpass the votes fast, in a single blast, shattering you like glass/
your head is as thick as the white pages and accurate as the weather forecast//
can't adimit he can't spit, flux should quit rather than submit his hit/
i spit explicit shit and watch him perish coz my rhymes make his brain split//
i'll drop bombs that will straightly detonate your rhymes at an alarming rate/
await as the radiation kills you again, like my punches to your mental state//
it aint fair to kill you in the first verse, so i'll let you drop a second one/
you'll give up your second because you know i killed it in my first 'won'*// (one)

* c_flux - see flux
* 'influxible' - inflexible
* chrispy kremes - his names chris and its a donut product (hella fattening)
* flux - a flow or discharge
* 'total annihilation'- old school kids game

umm.. to all the judges.. sorry i love ta add em star thingys lol
even though some of the disses are pretty dam obvious..
sorry there are so many symbols and icons that tha bars go uneven sometimes

bro, i thought ya would of took corroded of yo name before we started tha battle
o welps.. no hatin' intended

[c_flux]

Advancing towards this vandal and crashing his wack scandals,
S0fiz is packing more idiocy than what ten blondes can handle,
Example, kid turned holy.. so the church could bless his lines
An' his minds low-key.. enough ta use ma name seven times,
So a lesson in mind, decease your frees with its cheesy structure,
Or I leave you fucked up half-breathin like diseases struck ya,
Rocking your world when I blurt words you ain't never heard of yet,
You'd try ta learn ma verse but ya brain's be over-surging it,
The nerd's affected when I leave him neckless fa detectives,
Ta inspect it, I ain't perfect but to you I'm fuckin wreck-less,
Step up ta this, being defeated is perceived as one of your features,
So teach us how to act spastic complete with freaky-ass seizures,
But we need ya, need practice on insipid kids who cant think fa shit,
You preaching wackness so I'm spittin this so you'll slit ya wrists,
Miss you kid, don't have ta go battle me, stop weepin and stay seated,
Beamin ta reach defeat so after readin' this his post's deleted..

Should be all easy to understand..
Peace

[s0fiztik8ed]

second verse is just as worst, leaving you dehydrated of lyrical thirst/
can't take the heat, im elite, he grew weak to speak when he saw my first//
my heat got him incinerated, can't spit and choked because he hyperventilated/
's0fiztik8ed' burnt yah to the point where even your atoms disintegrated//
you couldn't wordplay with words if you had a scrabble game in your han'*/ (hand)
in primary school you never done crosswords or knew how to play hangman//
knock ya more spastic than peepz at raves peakin on E's, ravin constantly/
my drug is a nartural remedy, 'Mc Donalds' is the closest you'll get to MC//
your diss bounce of me like hydros, similar like kids playing on a trampoline/
deadly addictive like a fourteen year old hooked on nicotine and caffine//
my bars are more destructive than nukes, only thing coming out for you is puke/
burst your ear drums like 'sub's'* on max blast hitting a high tone on a flute//
make your ears bleed, and the ground shake and blow your speakers in pieces/
when i release more and more rhymes the chances of you losing increases//
i came strong, the winner is always right, so in this case your in the wrong/
its over, i won, know your place and the newbie threads is where you belong/
you should start instead trying to write R&B songs//

* sub's - sub woofer

not much.. scared my comp will freeze.. better post.. better than nothin'..

[s0fiztik8ed]

alright were done.. y'all can vote now..

i wonder who mode is gonna vote for..
since he encouraged both of us to battle.. ahahaha

[bboyarfen]

C_flux

1st round
I'm lovin your flow, liked the closer, and ya had some good punches and wordplay in there...

Maiming this type, battlin me and I'll leave you scarred an charred bitch,
Must've come "hard with wastes" cause youre "fucking garbage",

ta comprehend what I'm saying, blamin Flux cuz on spot you get that stage fright,
The kids' insane enough ta play himself cuz he can't spell his name right,

2nd round
Had some funny punches an ya kept the flow up.

Advancing towards this vandal and crashing his wack scandals,
S0fiz is packing more idiocy than what ten blondes can handle,

The nerd's affected when I leave him neckless fa detectives,
Ta inspect it, I ain't perfect but to you I'm fuckin wreck-less,

Sofiz

1st round
Pretty good flow some ok punches here an there. It seemed like ya really tryed to step up the wordplay...some of it was good but some was lame. I've also heard some of this stuff before from you...

i'll surpass the votes fast, in a single blast, shattering you like glass/
your head is as thick as the white pages and accurate as the weather forecast//

flux is 'influxible'* and incapable of dropping PHAT rhymes as it seems/
closest you'd get to PHAT is a life time supply of 'chrispy kremes'*//
^wasn't feelin the influxible thing but I liked the krispy kreme...

2nd round
Good flow...got better around the middle of the verse. Some of your wording was wack, and it woulda made your verse alot better if you woulda fixed it...some punches here an there, but I wasn't feelin the closer...

knock ya more spastic than peepz at raves peakin on E's, ravin constantly/
my drug is a nartural remedy, 'Mc Donalds' is the closest you'll get to MC//

Overall...I vote C_flux. He had better punches, better flow, and just more originality with his wordplay and punches. Just overall better drops.

[Mode]

c_flux - 1st - i'm liking your style, good use of inners an nice flow. good wordplay in your verse.

ta comprehend what I'm saying, blamin Flux cuz on spot you get that stage fright,
The kids' insane enough ta play himself cuz he can't spell his name right,
Maiming this type, battlin me and I'll leave you scarred an charred bitch,
Must've come "hard with wastes" cause youre "fucking garbage",

2nd - lol @ your opener.. upped your flow for this one, nice multies an inners etc, some nice punches.

Advancing towards this vandal and crashing his wack scandals,
S0fiz is packing more idiocy than what ten blondes can handle,


sofiz - 1st - flow was alright, there were parts where you didn't need some words in there which threw off your flow. some nice wordplay an punches.

i'll surpass the votes fast, in a single blast, shattering you like glass/
your head is as thick as the white pages and accurate as the weather forecast//

2nd - again flow was alright, some nice punches in there an wordplay.. need some power wording though. an foolish has used that Mcdonalds line before.

make your ears bleed, and the ground shake and blow your speakers in pieces/
when i release more and more rhymes the chances of you losing increases//

overall was a nice battle, you two both got nice skills, i don't like voting 'cos i know you both reasonably well but i'ma have to vote for c_flux on account of better flow an punches, ya'll both had nice wordplay.

peace.

[sjv]

im goin wit s0fiztik8ed

hes just a better mc i reckon

[c_flux]

Thanks for the votes.
But sjv bro, you gotta provide an explanation fa it to be valid

[s0fiztik8ed]

* sighz-.. like i said.. i knew you were gonna win bro.. ahahha
like i said on msn.. they look at flows and stuff not just punches.. your flows just killed it, my flow was just like.. dead..

dammit.. i've reconencted to the net like 6 times just to read this thread.. =/

stupid comp.. !!


EDIT: comp froze.. so i posted what i can hahaha

hmm.. im hungry..

[mothafunky]

heeeere we go...

1st round:
flux-i kinda disagree w/ mode and arfen about your flow. at least, they make it sound really good, i liked it after about 1/3 of the way until the end, but in the beginning it came and went in my opinion. closer made me kinda laugh, good stuff man. had some good punches and wordplay all around:

"ta comprehend what I'm saying, blamin Flux cuz on spot you get that stage fright"

"Still rehearsin fa his verse fa me to churn through, ma'words will hurt you,
They'll alert you, I'd splurge more but I heard this kid's gotta curfew..."

sophistik8ted-flow came and left. it wasn't great, but i've seen worse. had some good punches, but also had some not so good punches. liked:

"i'll surpass the votes fast, in a single blast, shattering you like glass/
your head is as thick as the white pages and accurate as the weather forecast//"

round 2:
flux-liked your flow a lot in this round. went real slick the whole way through. also kept bringin good punches and shit.

Advancing towards this vandal and crashing his wack scandals,
S0fiz is packing more idiocy than what ten blondes can handle,
Example, kid turned holy.. so the church could bless his lines
An' his minds low-key.. enough ta use ma name seven times"

liked that whole piece right there, funny shit.

sophistik8ted-same deal w/ the flow, it was alright, came and went. i think you upped it a little on punches. oh, just something i think, for flow anyway, when you say "couldn't wordplay with words" it sounds redundant and kinda breaks your flow up a little i think.

"my heat got him incinerated, can't spit and choked because he hyperventilated/
's0fiztik8ed' burnt yah to the point where even your atoms disintegrated//"

overall, i gotta vote for flux

[Mode]

c_flux wins by KO. good battle ya'll, look forward to more.

closing thread.