[Bboy Jroc]

2 verses each
3-0 = KO, first to 5 otherwise
unlimited bars

drop it.

[Mode]

J's back, the same fact remains that J's games wack,
make ya brain lapse, ya lame ass is gettin maimed fast,
i aint a joker, but i'm attackin ya verse with a bat man,
bring ya heat, you'll burn out 'cos ya don't have fans,
ya raps bland, just look at his av, J-roc's a poser,
'ghost' all ya like, you'll still feel my punches 'crossing over',
my verse weighs a tonne, ya couldn't come precise with a laser gun,
can't phase us none, i'm more shocking than tasers son,
my minds scheme ta drop killer lines like crime scenes,
i strike fiends, ya couldn't appear bright with high beams,
thanks for the battle, i need a bitch ta practice on,
the fact is son, it wasn't until i joined that mental tactics won,
i'm hot with flow, why else would J wanna roc with mode?
the top with prose i drop this hoe, ta me ya aint got shit bro,
fuck your bitch ass, yo fuck every one a this posin hoes rhymes,
the only hood you 'hang-in' is on the clothes line..

peace. your up bro.

[Bboy Jroc]

come on guys, y'all know me better than that...

watch me spit when i skip contemplation,
mode's wack so i got contempt for australians.
get a journalist, this battle should make the headlines,
"mode disqualified 'cause he gave head for punchlines".
fall behind from the likes of a sensation,
ya just too dumb to make sense of this asian.
never sober, i'll squash ya like apple turnovers,
you'll be pissin' juice when my turn's over.
get the facts straight, my diss integrates,
do the same and see ya self disintegrate.
the truth is ya don't know how to be lyrical,
ya still won't get it right if ya joined a lyric cult.
ya lyrics sulk, hopeless like bisexual irishmen,
i'll step dance on ya face even if i aint irish man.

[Mode]

sure took ya time, how long did it take you,
jroc’s slow to pick up like his mum in a date room,
let it be known, mode brings hell to ya dome,
damn son, you out of my range like a cellular phone,
forget it bro, see my hit flow rip ya spits,
i'ma fuck up ya head like nympho hypnotist's,
ya shit to diss, there aint no teachin this slob,
you a door salesman.. always reachin fa knobs,
like santa clause son, I'm bringin the nice wraps,
ya couldn’t drop slick shit with dihorrea on icecaps,
i'm tellin ya now, i lost patience this dame is a nuisence,
an outcast to rap, to most places asians are tourists,
ya famous ta losers, i'm a damn master with rhymes,
now quit stallin an drop a little faster this time..

peace bro, your up.

edit - some people don't get it so..

an outcast to rap, to most places asians are tourists, = this means he's a tourist to rap.

[Bboy Jroc]

i'm a tourist, tell me 'bout australia,
is that the origin of gay paraphernalia*?
don't negate me, it's unrighteous to speak lies,
in a battle like this, only the weak dies.
mode's deceased, kid's 'flat-lined' like an iron crease,
lose the heat 'cause ya won't spur it as ya please.
see, round one was just a warm up,
but like weary bitches ya always have ya arms up.
scared of my hits, dawg... stop shakin',
ya try too hard like takin' grease offa bacon.
fuck it, i'll go merciless on this pig,
stylin' weaves is his idea of splittin' wigs.
reality is, ya can't beat me... that's a period,
on a scale of 1 to 10, you're zero to inferior.
it's a blackout, how's this for fast?
the closest you'll get to me is sniffin' my ass.

* stuff, things, etc.

votes please.

[c_flux]

1st Verse

Mode
I liked the closer, overall good flow. Just before midway, the flow kinda edged off, but it wasn't too bad. Multies and inners were intact, and the wordplay was nice.

'ghost' all ya like, you'll still feel my punches 'crossing over'

can't phase us none, i'm more shocking than tasers son,
my minds scheme ta drop killer lines like crime scenes,
i strike fiends, ya couldn't appear bright with high beams,

Jroc
Haha.. the opener kinda made me snicker, but the closer was so-so. The flow definately there, but I wasn't feelin the wordplay. An' I wasn't feeling the use of words either at the end of your lines.

watch me spit when i skip contemplation,
mode's wack so i got contempt for australians.



2nd Verse

Mode
Upped your wordplay on this one.. funny shit. The wordplay (and a bit of personals) def upped it. Use of multis weren't as efficient as the first, but the flow is still intact.

damn son, you out of my range like a cellular phone,

like santa clause son, I'm bringin the nice wraps,
ya couldn’t drop slick shit with dihorrea on icecaps,

Jroc
Feelin your wordplay here.. some inners here an' there, and the flow is nice. Wasn't feelin the closer tho. But consistent all the way.. damn.. I don't see the resemblence between this and the first one at all.. nice work bro.

in a battle like this, only the weak dies.
mode's deceased, kid's 'flat-lined' like an iron crease,

ya try too hard like takin' grease offa bacon.
fuck it, i'll go merciless on this pig,



Overall
I'd hafta vote for Mode on this one - he was more consistent with the flow, the use of multies and wordplay was nice.. just overall it remained flat out tight.

[bboyarfen]

Mode

1st round
Good flow, thought it coulda used an extra word here an there, but still dope with inners an multis. Some wordplay and punches scattered throughout. Pretty dope verse overall.

thanks for the battle, i need a bitch ta practice on,
the fact is son, it wasn't until i joined that mental tactics won,

ya raps bland, just look at his av, J-roc's a poser,
'ghost' all ya like, you'll still feel my punches 'crossing over',

J's back, the same fact remains that J's games wack,
make ya brain lapse, ya lame ass is gettin maimed fast,

2nd round
Some funny shit...good wordplay and punches on this one. Kept consistent with flow.

ya shit to diss, there aint no teachin this slob,
you a door salesman.. always reachin fa knobs,
like santa clause son, I'm bringin the nice wraps,
ya couldn’t drop slick shit with dihorrea on icecaps,

let it be known, mode brings hell to ya dome,
damn son, you out of my range like a cellular phone,

Jroc

1st round
I didn't like this drop. Flow woulda been nice if you had better rhymes at the end of your lines. Some good punches, but thats all I was really feelin.

get a journalist, this battle should make the headlines,
"mode disqualified 'cause he gave head for punchlines".

2nd round
the closer was kind of funny. Definatley better in every aspect than your first verse. Like the wordplay...

i'm a tourist, tell me 'bout australia,
is that the origin of gay paraphernalia*?

fuck it, i'll go merciless on this pig,
stylin' weaves is his idea of splittin' wigs.


Overall
I vote Mode. He kept the flow and punches consistant throughout and Jroc was lackin on the first verse...

[blamma]

be easy on the kid, this is my first time voting

Round 1

mode_ ya schemes were tight, da verse had a fluent sense of flow in a fast paced type of way. the opener was good, but my favorite was

im hot with flow, why else would J wanna roc with mode

I enjoyed the wordplay use on his name. made you seem superior.

jroc_ i felt that your flow was dragged out like it was taking alot of words to say what you were saying. and you re-used the same words to ryme wit a few times which doesnt show alot of versitility. truthfully wasnt really anything in that round i liked.

round 2

mode_ the flow remained steady and your punches were humorous. i think that the way someone opens and closes a verse is extremely important and you do that very well here.

jroc_the same as the other voters

modes deceased, kids "flat lined" like an iron crease

that was an intresting punchline, and i give you dap for that
but besides that you really arent saying much and you seem on the defense in the second verse talking about him speaking lies and calling you a tourist.

i know this is a little lop sided but thats just perception the battle
my vote goes to


mode

[Bboy Jroc]

no versatility? on the defense? i shouldn't go easy on ya kid... ya obviously don't know how to vote, or choose your words for this matter.

ever heard of trying different rhyme schemes to obtain versatility? ever heard of flipping-the-script? ah, why bother explaining... i'm done.

peace.

[Mode]

word up jroc, i thought you came nice.. anyway i look forward to seein more of your stuff, at least you aint been slackin while you were away.

peace an thanks for the battle.