[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

diss battle
No more than 7 bars
Flip on
3 rounds
First to 5 votes 3/0 KO
I'll start...



My mind is like a self-operated triple core processor
That binds me to be rated as the number one successor
of Ares,making me a migrated type of war professor
Adding to my arsenal a lyrical vigour surpresser
Of energy,that encouraged me to spill ill raps
In my youth hip hop bit me like a vampire bat
Making me into an MC with true talent like that
So im using my skills to continue this legacy crap
Of a lyrical diss invulnerable teenage psychopat,
A highest quality poet that rhymes holding a gat
And ready to tear through with words even my dad...yeah!
Hip hop made me into it,so I decided i should pursue it
The goal of all goals,the point of all points,review it
Obviously being true to yourself,battling me you blew it!



Im turning in....I'll have my 2nd verse 1st thing in the mornin'...

[Sutley]

Your monologue's a disaster and you're pretending to be a master,
With acting sadder than Keanu Reeves' in the movie you're named after.
Why you blabbin' 'bout vampire bats and teenagers in a rhyme fight?
I came here to rap, not read your favourite chapter of Twilight.
You get it, you fuckin' pathetic discredit to rhetoric?
Bitch changed the rules and broke etiquette, that's why his shit's edited.
So my message is this, Eastern Europe has no shame,
And no one representin' Bulgaria's worth knowing anyway.
But for the record, you win in the gay department, champ,
This psycho's pattin' his dad's gat and I ain't gonna "beat" that,
If I gave in, I'll end up one of his pets chained in shackles,
'Cause I'm cagey and that's the only way I'd take a Step backwards.
"But fuck" that, I'll get the aid of 50 cent and Eminem,
Who are "Patiently Waitin'" to vote for me at the end.

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

You talk about 50 and Em but yo lame,you are merely their fan
While I'm writing this verse your preparing to defend
You talk bout Bulgaria but never been in it so dont offend
Canada represent?This country so fucking damned
you beaver!you can only pretend to be champ,and stand
around in forums,postin shit you'd soon really repent
Your verse rhyme so bad,you need years to mend
it to make it even a slight amount dope,i know that and
Know that you know it too bitch,so bend over and hand
Me the fuckin vibrator cuz I know u fend to be gay,hey
don't expect no aid from noone Sutley,cuz u gonna pay
Cuz what you say is what you say,but yo skills gonna betray
You man u getting creamed this time,so go ahead and stay
around for a 3rd verse,prepare for a tough beating today

[Sutley]

Your cheerleader's comment seems to have put me in awe,
"Peed you rock," is that really what you'd rather be called?
Or did you steal that after hearin' you were conceived in a stall?
There was no semen involved; someone Peed in his mom.
SPEED must be an acronym meaning this bitch's skills are missin',
'Cause his Simple Phonetics Ending Every Diss are a given.
This newbie's green with easy Sesame Street rhymes, he's Oscar man,
Livin' in Bulgaria, the world's toxic waste garbage can.
And I don't believe for a second that you actually bboy,
This kid's more awkward in dance battles than Leonard Nimoy.
Face facts, you're an embarrassment to the concept of rap,
Head-first into every hit like a drug dog sniffin' for crack,
So I guess you ain't so speedy, you're just a lying phony prick,
Which is fitting since you demanded a vibrating fake dick.

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

You seem not to get the rhymes that I spit
And whacha know about Bulgaria,not 1 bit
The vibrating dick was for your ass prick
And it's still stuck in it like a fucking tick
Know what,you doubt my dancing skills
But you ain't never seen me do mills
Sutley you must be on some fucked up pills
Calling me kid but wake up bitch you totally spilled
I electrify you with dis like one hundred eels
Hurt ya so bad that your skin fucking peels
Oh and how's the bottom of Niagara Falls
Cuz I know you flippin from there your jaws
Maybe it's why your verses have so many flaws
Cuz u like a fucking poser,cant help but pose

[Sutley]

I'm a winner, I capitalize on my greatness for fame,
You're a loser, lower caste like the vowels in your name.
You got nothin' but bluffs to cover your weakness and shame,
Might as well go buck naked with a pair of Speedos on your face.
Your boring twenty-one bars have got me sleepy as fuck,
And could make an insomniac coffee-addict hibernate for months.
Is this seriously the best FRS could deliver?
An Engrish-speaking douchebag with a mousepad for a picture?
You're the one who needs medicine, pop those pills en masse,
'Cause you haven't dropped a verse yet, that was an asthma attack.
Yo where the challengers at? Fuck this shit I'm hungry,
And I won't be satisfied by chewing up this lyrical training dummy.
This kid is full of shit and I've still got an empty stomache,
'Cause Speed is nothin' but a gimmick, with no soul, depth, or substance.

[Sutley]

Please vote before Speedy here changes everything else I dissed him about, like his picture. Takes two seconds, promise.

Also, with regard to my second verse, someone's post was deleted that read "peed u rock man :P"

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

Man get real,if u have that much of a problem with me changin my pic,i'll change it back and i never deleted that post so please quit bitchin...

[Sutley]

Holy shit^. Overreaction.

[BBOYAnimal]

Is this seriously the best FRS could deliver?
An Engrish-speaking douchebag with a mousepad for a picture?


Haha i Lol'ed out loud lmao. What a line.

[skillzdatkill]

sutley gets my vote speed just threw randoms stuff out there nothin really unique or personal and try to grab his vibrator? that makes you sound as gay as him

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

Sutley 1
Please people vote up just to finish this up (though im pretty sure Ima lose )

[Transcendent]

My vote goes to Sutley.

Step didn't even diss in his first verse and when he did start to diss, all of them were either lame, overused, or both. Like usual, Sutley came with pretty creative shit.

2-0, Sutley.

[istolicee]

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vote sluty

speed ya gotta lot to work on, but don't let these votes deter you from continuing with rhyming (i seen it done a bunch of times, a newb to the site gets destroyed and never seen again)......because this is a text battle ya gotta work on more complexity, in a audio you might get away with liks like what you posted, because in audio delivery can make a weak written to a decent verse.......your writtens were not decent they were poor.......if ya need more help with the complexity issue, id suggest reading reflexion's guide......he explains everything you need to drop a dope verse......

slut, good job, some good ideas, some nice lines, some good play.......what id like to see more from you is more inner rhymes throughout the verse......i can sense the aggression in your verses, just gotta clean it up a little bit more......i know you didn't need to try much in this battle, but try to stay consistent with the hard punches, there were a bunch of weak punches then a good punch then weak then good.......keep it banging with more solid punches........i think your strongest verse was your 3rd, started slow but at the mousepad line it got stronger and ended pretty well........

i liked this.....

"SPEED must be an acronym meaning this bitch's skills are missin',
'Cause his Simple Phonetics Ending Every Diss are a given."
-a little off on flow, but i like the play

[BBoYsPeeDsTeP]

Sooo 3 0 Sutley wins,not intendin to give up actually im more motivated...uhm well good battle sutley