[Blessone]

2 rounds
8 bars maximum
flipping
3-ko, or first to 5

I had to rush this so if there are any spelling mistakes, my bad.

J must stand for joke because that's exactly what you are/
I can rip you on the mic by only spittin one bar//
your rap game needs work because your style will get you merked/
I'm not being a jerk, I'm just spittin the facts and they hurt//
I'll take over your turf and then take over the Earth/
when I'm done with you, you'll get to heaven faster than kirk//
only if you get to heaven, you'll probably go to hell and get burnt/
I'll leave red on your shirt, after you'll get more shots than dirk//
I'll choke you to death and have your face more blue than a smurfs/
people will be searchin for you but your body will be covered with dirt//
there's no chance of you defeating me, you shouldn't even try/
I would tell you good match but that would be a lie//
I won't leave you seein stars, I'll leave you seein mars/
in fact I'll leave you seein bars, you're an animal in a farm//
I'm a beast in the wild, you rap like a child/
you can travel inch by inch but I'm ahead of you in miles//

[JRod]

o yeah and i used some personals in the battle
but i dont like to point them out with stars and shit
if your voting you should be smart enoughh to figure it out


ready to scorch the conscience of this mess called bless/
pummel him with lyrical breath till his face resembles mesh//
i dont need eight bars to make fun of this rapping retard/
this shits gonna be one sided like a childs broken see saw//
hit you with raidens hammer with a sub zero type flow/
why did i agree to battle with a wannabe dr seuse clone//
get demoted like pluto when i push you around like sumo/
get mangled and snapped in half like uncooked noodles//
battling me, you must be drunk off of champain drinking/
giving out head shots like im booth and your abe lincoln//
what where you thinking, do you like getting schooled/
so you might want to come a little harder for round two//

[Blessone]

You've got nothing after I start spittin an idiom phrase/
How can I battle with someone who references video games//
I spit lyrical miracles that'll make your head spin/
I'll murder you with rhymes until you're just bones with red skin//
Medicine won't heal you, I don't spit, I vomit like I have malaria/
Your rhymes are messy and soft, they come out like Diarrhea//
I cause hysteria, you couldn't throw up a rhyme if you were bulimic/
Believe it, you want to picture yourself beating me but you couldn’t even dream it//
you can't see it, you can't see me like Stevie/
I wonder why you try to beat me, all you can do is retreat//
Beating me like French military victories, it’s just not gonna happen/
I’m like a one man army when I start rappin//
I got my artillery and ammo and I’ll be shootin J like Mike/
Jrod may get stabbed if we get into a gun fight//
You’re gonna call me Dr. Seuss? Well at least I can rhyme/
you say you don’t need 8 bars when You couldn’t beat me with nine//

[JRod]

*sigh*

you got a stupid ass dialect that dont make sense/
your lines dont rhyme, you sad excuse for a reject//
could inject you with talent just by you hearing me spit/
even if you caught swine flu you still wouldnt be sick//
its a gift, just to have a chance to battle against me/
trying to shine but you cant last like some fake jewelery//
aint fooling me or anybody else by saying you got talent/
you got judged and booed off the stage with apollos malice//
cant just step into the ring when your out of you weight class/
ready to destroy dude to your molecules with a biblical blast//
your futur is looking shady in this waterloos battle aftermath/
thats what you get when a puny mortal goes against my wrath//

[Backfire]

Jrod takes it by a mile.

Blessone: flows really off on some lines, check ur sylablles. but you had some better ideas than your other battles, malaria and diarreah don't really rhyme and i wasn't feeling that vomiting idea too much either. You also used the shoot/shot like (insert bball player) twice. Could've done better flips aswell.

Favorite line:
I won't leave you seein stars, I'll leave you seein mars/
in fact I'll leave you seein bars, you're an animal in a farm//(good concept, creative)

Jrod: good flow, creative flips and disses. Don't really know what the rhyme scheme of the first bar was. It was almost a callback, but not quite lol, flowed perfectly though. could've finished stronger in both verses.

ready to destroy dude to your molecules with a biblical blast//-that didn't make sense to me

Favorite line(i got many to choose from):
ready to scorch the conscience of this mess called bless/
pummel him with lyrical breath till his face resembles mesh//(liked how it flowed and the concept)

Hope i did a good job.

Peace. Respect.

[JKLS]

TLDR, vote for JRod.

I'm going to vote with this account, because I'm tired of seeing these unfinished battles. JRod, do me a favour after this and vote in one of the other unfinished battles, please.

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Blessone, first verse:

The thing that I notice when I read your verse through is that there are no personal attacks present. The closest thing is,

J must stand for joke because that's exactly what you are/
I can rip you on the mic by only spittin one bar//

... and let's face it, all you did was use the first letter of JRod's name. Also, I feel like a lot of your disses aren't really disses at all.

I'll choke you to death and have your face more blue than a smurfs/
people will be searchin for you but your body will be covered with dirt//

That's just a death threat, it's not a diss. I think you should pick out specific pieces of information about JRod and exploit them as weaknesses, develop some kind of clever way to play on what the bboy.org public knows about him.

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JRod, first verse:

My chief concern with your first verse is that some of it does not make sense.

ready to scorch the conscience of this mess called bless/
pummel him with lyrical breath till his face resembles mesh/

I think you may mean consciousness here? Conscience is the little angel that sits on your shoulder and tells you when you're doing something immoral. You picked it because that's his rap name, but it doesn't make sense. Also, how do you pummel someone with lyrical breath? Are you panting on his face? Why would his face look like mesh afterward?

i dont need eight bars to make fun of this rapping retard/
this shits gonna be one sided like a childs broken see saw//

Terrific bar, totally unplayed concept, I love it.

hit you with raidens hammer with a sub zero type flow/
why did i agree to battle with a wannabe dr seuse clone//

Okay, okay, Mortal Kombat theme here, but a sub zero flow would be ice, and ice doesn't flow very well at all, JRod. Props for Dr. Seuss diss.

what where you thinking, do you like getting schooled/
so you might want to come a little harder for round two//

WEAK.

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Blessone, second verse:

You've got nothing after I start spittin an idiom phrase/
How can I battle with someone who references video games//

You took my advice! Nice flip.


Medicine won't heal you, I don't spit, I vomit like I have malaria/
Your rhymes are messy and soft, they come out like Diarrhea//

The vomit thing is no go, Bless. That's not something someone can do victoriously, not to mention the weak rhyme.

you can't see it, you can't see me like Stevie/
I wonder why you try to beat me, all you can do is retreat//

Super-played and obvious concept.

Beating me like French military victories, it’s just not gonna happen/
I’m like a one man army when I start rappin//

Speaking of super-played...

You’re gonna call me Dr. Seuss? Well at least I can rhyme/
you say you don’t need 8 bars when You couldn’t beat me with nine//

I actually like this closer. It's not particularly clever or hard-hitting, but it's solid.

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JRod, second verse:

you got a stupid ass dialect that dont make sense/
your lines dont rhyme, you sad excuse for a reject//

I like it, a flip on the malaria/diarrhea thing? It's good.

could inject you with talent just by you hearing me spit/
even if you caught swine flu you still wouldnt be sick//

Swine flu's getting old, fast. Nevertheless, very, very good execution here.

aint fooling me or anybody else by saying you got talent/
you got judged and booed off the stage with apollos malice//

WTF? Apollo's malice here seems arbitrary.

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Positives:

Blessone, you seem consistent in making sense, and most of the time your flow works although there are some syllable/beat issues in a couple spots. However, you need to work on making your bars into disses as well as being more creative.

JRod, like I said, I don't think it all makes sense. That said, your range is expansive, you snag ideas/concepts for bars from everywhere, and I love that. I totally felt most of your stuff, and the flow was definitely strong throughout.

It's clear JRod takes this, but I would never say it was a blowout.

Vote: JRod.

[JRod]

i will go vote on you battle in a minute sutley but first i got to clear some things up for you in my rhymes.

ready to scorch the conscience of this mess called bless/
pummel him with lyrical breath till his face resembles mesh/

I think you may mean consciousness here? Conscience is the little angel that sits on your shoulder and tells you when you're doing something immoral. You picked it because that's his rap name, but it doesn't make sense. Also, how do you pummel someone with lyrical breath? Are you panting on his face? Why would his face look like mesh afterward?

yeah i meant what i said. like you said about the angel, the opposite would be the devil on the other shoulder. thats why i said scorch his conscience. ya get it?
now with lyrical breath i mean hurt not by using physical means but by using my rhymes or words.

with the apollo punchline, i was taking you guys judging this thread and the apollo theatre which was know for booing people off stage if they didnt like your act. hope that cleared everything up!!!!!

[JKLS]

Apollo theatre, never heard of it. That one's my fault. The others, eh, they're a stretch. No disrespect meant.

[RingerINC]

Vote for jrod.

my keyboard is screwing up a little so I'
ll keep this brief. I couldn't backspace that for some reason...

bless read as very rhyme driven and dancing around the point, never really got in there and hit hard with focused lines. JRod had some nice stuff, seen better from you and a few lines were iffey like sutley said, but overall a decent drop.

So IMO JRod took it pretty clearly, and sorry for not voting on this one earlier.

[SpellBound]

I'm already tired of voting so this is going to be short and sweet.

Bless

Work on punches because as far as I can tell you didn't have any. It seemed like you rhymed a couple words together, said some things about being violent and that's it. Also, if you're just bones with red skin than you're not just bones are you? Unless you're making a metaphor to the blood being skin. I tend to think you aren't.

JRod

First verse was more self promo than anything. Had a couple weak punches in there but that's about it. Also, why would you want a sub zero type flow? Sub-Zero uses ice and if water is frozen it doesn't flow...

Second verse had too many played punches. The swine flu punch is played to shit. Also, I know what the Apollo Theatre is but the way you worded it is just confusing. It makes it seem like you're referencing the god Apollo and not the theatre.

Anyway, vote goes to JRod. Wasn't really that close

[istolicee]

5-0 jrod.