[Blessone]

diss battle
no more than 4 bars
flipping allowed
2 rounds
yah yah yah that stuff, ok lets do this.

your name is sutley? well you obviously don't know me/
I'm the kid that'll give you more shots than the lakers give kobe//
the scars i'm about to leave on you wont heal/
you'll miss every time like shaquille o neal//
the deal is sealed, you've eaten your last meal/
do you feel the real pain that my flow reveals//
me versus sutley is like cannons versus guns/
it's no fun, because it's too easy, and this dude's done//

[Blessone]

and i meant 3 rounds

[Sutley]

Like the Jewish "Blessed One," you're doomed to be crucified,
But you ain't him, I see your pic; the wrong head's circumcised.
I won't plan this shit, you're just the second notch on my belt,
A hydro-"cannon" whose spit couldn't make the wicked witch melt.
I got enough problems, no time for an insignificant tick,
Who figures losing to me will still boost his image.
But you've got a very fitting name, fancy that, I agree,
You'd have to get blessed after that trashy rap you just sneezed.

[Blessone]

sorry i sneezed, i'm allergic to stupid rhymes/
got me dissin you during lunch, man you're wastin my stupid time//
speakin of sneezes, I spread like a flu from a swine/
why don't you stay quiet, like you was a mime//
sutley got nothin on me, you're spittin crap, that's the truth/
what does sutley mean anyway? is that some brazillian fruit?//
i spit a million truths, you're just all lies,/
you don't have a picture of yourself because your face harms all eyes//

[Sutley]

If you're allergic to stupid rhymes, stop delivering them,
You're like a diabetic masochist binging on insulin.
I can't believe how easily I tear your rhyme scheme apart,
How you're eager to compare with disease that came from a farm.
Sutley will never be quiet, like a famous opera star,
I could shriek and watch your glass jaw break into shards.
I've never read lamer bars, except for maybe Bizzare's,
Yeah, I said it, like him, you're a disgrace to the art.

[Blessone]

do i look like bizzare? please, i'm ten times the lyricist/
while i was lookin at your rhymes, i couldn't keep my face serious//
you rhyme hysterical, beating me is a miracle/
you can take a stand like urinals, but you'll still drown like cereal//
I compared myself to a deadly flu, but you compare yourself to a fat lady?/
well she's singing for you right now, and your rhymes lookin lazy//
Im crazy like slim shady, do you hear that sound?/
it's the sound of me beatin down this rap clown in three rounds//

[Sutley]

Bizzare? You look like comedy, and you wrote like nothing serious,
'Cause you're a fucking joke named after your mother's period.
Her "monthly blessing," picked after the beating you just had,
'Cause I just left you bloodier than a used Maxi Pad.
I got my shots, I'm immune to any flu you'd let loose,
But I'll make you puke from the fumes of the fat lady's douche.
I got the lynch mob ready, now your throat goes through the noose,
So hold this pinata steady, we're going to recreate "Roots."

[Sutley]

Bless, dude, you've definitely improved, man. You're leagues ahead of when you battled Biz.

[Blessone]

thanks dude, honestly when i went up against Biz i underestimated the people on this site, but no excuses, I'm comin harder now. you did great yourself.

People vote please.

[RingerINC]

Vote for sutley. He dominated.

Bless you have to focus more on insulting people and take your time with verses and work out what you're going to say in each line, focus on something you want to insult and make it clever, and do NOT let the rhyme determine what you say. Newer people always have the "i said this in the first line" then "shit i cant think of anything to rhyme so i'll say something shit" problem, avoid that by thinking.

Sutley, work on your wording and stuff. It sounds plenty awkward. And that last verse had a little to much bloody vagina talk... on the reals. But really you're sounding pretty good, just keep on working at it and you'll get more creative with lines and work out how to make them harder hitting and how to improve your rhymeschemes.

Anyways, battle was halfway decent for newer members.

[SpellBound]

That exchange after the battle was cute :P

Bless

First Verse - I still feel like your verses aren't battle verses. They seem like you're rhyming just to rhyme instead of being direct disses to him. A lot of the bars seem like self promo as well.

Second Verse - Played punches, mime references are old and saying you're sick then listing a disease is quite played as well. Flow on your closer fell off hard. Had you worded it better it could've been a decent punch

Third Verse - You went back to rhyming just to rhyme. Drown like cereal is so wack. Opera flip was alright but the closer was weak.

Sutley

First Verse - Your opener was pretty dope but the rest of your bars failed to match. They were decent punches just nothing that really caught my eye.

Second Verse - You were so close with that opener. If you'd just flipped the lines it would've been a lot better. It was like you had the punchline and then the setup. Name dropping Biz was kinda weak but overall another solid verse.

Third Verse - Wasn't feeling this verse as much as the other two. Overused the vagina references and I didn't get the closer but that's just me.

Vote goes to Sutley. Overall he owned this battle

[brknckgrl2010]

Originally Posted by SpellBound That exchange after the battle was cute :P Bless First Verse - I still feel like your verses aren't battle verses. They seem like you're rhyming just to rhyme instead of being direct disses to him. A lot of the bars seem like self promo as well. Second Verse - Played punches, mime references are old and saying you're sick then listing a disease is quite played as well. Flow on your closer fell off hard. Had you worded it better it could've been a decent punch Third Verse - You went back to rhyming just to rhyme. Drown like cereal is so wack. Opera flip was alright but the closer was weak. Sutley First Verse - Your opener was pretty dope but the rest of your bars failed to match. They were decent punches just nothing that really caught my eye. Second Verse - You were so close with that opener. If you'd just flipped the lines it would've been a lot better. It was like you had the punchline and then the setup. Name dropping Biz was kinda weak but overall another solid verse. Third Verse - Wasn't feeling this verse as much as the other two. Overused the vagina references and I didn't get the closer but that's just me. Vote goes to Sutley. Overall he owned this battle

My vote lies closest to what Spellbound clearly explained.
As he'd said (for Sutley), it just seemed like you had everything
switched around; it was really just arrangement issue. You were dope though!

Blessone;

I saw some lines in there that really caught my attention.
Like that Brazilian fruit line cracked me up, lol. But also, that's just
it, there were certain lines. As Spellbound also pretty much said,
if you just came a bit harder with it
that would've brought more to attention. GJ

Sutley overall gets my vote, but both of you guys had good moments! ^_^

[Transcendent]

3-0 KO for Sutley.

Doesn't matter now, but my vote also goes for him.

[Sutley]

Whoa, so I actually finished a battle? Please lock it up, mods!