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BboySomeDay
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How does this look? - 11-18-2007, 03:04 AM

I saw another thread with the same moves(indian step and the 6 step)so since im just beginning i decided to see what you guys think i can improve on.
top rock




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on the 2nd i messed up bad when trying to start from the crab position so ignore that lol


I was gonna add more videos of front kicking but they were way worse lol
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11-18-2007, 04:01 AM

hard to see...too dark...maybe turn ur lights on?




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11-18-2007, 10:59 AM

Pretty good.

-Speed up your toprock and try to hit the beats more.
-Your six step is good but you dont need to raise your arms so much and it would look cleaner and easier to do if you used your fingers when doing footwork.
-Whats the song on the 1st and 3rd vid? I WANT IT xD. Been looking for it but didnt know the names :x.




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11-18-2007, 12:45 PM

Good..

Just try speed up your'e top-rock, a bit.
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11-18-2007, 02:09 PM

looks aite, just a bit dark
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BboySomeDay
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11-18-2007, 02:26 PM

The name of the 1st song is "One by Jay-Roc N Jakebeatz"the second is"You Boys by Menusha and the girls".Sorry about the lighting everyone its just that the camera on my laptop sucks.But how high should my arms go and did the 4th step(the sweep) look good?Thankz everyone
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11-18-2007, 04:49 PM

Just high enough to lift your hand over your body and put it down on the other spot. Thnx for the names btw.
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11-18-2007, 04:55 PM

good, put more style in your toprock, try putting you legs behind instead of in front make combos, try to throw a standing up six step in there. speed it up. good for a beginner though
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BboySomeDay
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11-18-2007, 07:12 PM

Alright thankz guys,will work on it tonight and hopefully post up new videos if it improves
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11-19-2007, 12:56 AM

Dont post vids everyday and get peoples opinions on it.
Try posting new vids maybe every week or 2 weeks, to show your true progress.
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11-19-2007, 01:42 AM

ok cool
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11-19-2007, 03:09 PM

speed up toprock, maybe a little uprock, and dont pause when you finish your 6 step. and keep your hands a little bit closer.




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11-19-2007, 05:50 PM

Turn on the lights or film outside. Don't worry about people watching you, you have to get used to that too.

Your tops are good, but they are, yeah, the same move. It looks fine though.
Try not to concentrate on one thing too long with tops.

Your footwork is too sped up for you to keep up with. Do them slow, like you're retarded. THEN speed it up. You want to be facing forward the entire time. So in other words, you're doing your 6 step wrong right now. Review the guides.




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11-19-2007, 10:25 PM

Thankz everyone keep giving me more pointersBut the light thing,its a combination of a bad camera and dark lighting in my living room
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11-19-2007, 10:34 PM

slow down ur footwork a bit cause it looks rushed tops are good but use more variation. doing good so far




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