How I do - Opening sounded like a nursery rhyme. Nice beat. Finally got it about 36 seconds in and it started sounding pretty dope. Interesting hook... like a little much synth on that one but it sounds good overall.
To the Top - Sounds so mainstream.. but I guess when you are trying to get into the mainstream you are supposed to sound like it. Synth is over the top on this one as well. Can't really understand second line of hook. Verse 2 was better than first hands-down. Better than first track, try to tune down that synthesizer shit in your hooks and it will sound alot better.
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The synthesized vocoder voice crap has got to go. The hook on the first one was just terrible. It's like a part II to the 50 Cent song but worse. The second song had decent production. As far as the rhymin/lyrical part goes, it's ok.
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just be like:
"Bitch, lemme lay it down for you. This is how I roll, don't fuck with me or I'll kill you."
Then bust out a mad flare>airflare>dickspin>cockrocketmoosefucker combo and her mom will be all:
yo i stop by just to check shit out n look what i find.. Angel nice tracks.. umm
How I Do had potentail for a great song.. but ya synth was just to strong kinda ruined it.. newb says nurseury rhymes i say professional quality.. the kid couldnt spit like that if his life depended on it..
To the Top great song.. i didnt hear any big flaws however just to let ya know.. ya synth voice wasnt as strong in this one and come out way better then the other
on a side note.. what up?you stickin around? or just commin by to post some tracks then bouncin again?
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"Wings Over Daygo" MIxtape: Sampler -
06-29-2008, 04:17 PM
