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Noche Rock · **So I (Bomb) -** 09-26-2006, 04:49 PM

A lil somethin somethin I recorded today over a 9th wonder beat, nothing great but overall i think my MC voice is getting more developed.

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Noche Rock · 10-10-2006, 10:30 PM

I updated it with a revised version, drop some feedback

Noche Rock · 10-15-2006, 01:09 AM

bblaster20 · 10-15-2006, 01:33 PM

hmmm ya gotta have more flo. it seems like ya juz ramblin lines rather than in rhythmical possession.

I used to have that problem. Thinking that for a sentence I had to fit it in a whole bar...don't do it if it sounds bad.

hmmm I know many of yall don' like Eminem an stuff, but the one song that shows an example of nice flow (besides lose yaself) is in When I"m gone. Listen to it...he spreads out the sentences for better flow, rather than packing them into one bar, ya kno what I mean?

comes w/ practice though...just get lost in the beat, the same amount you get lost in the lyrical value.

Noche Rock · 10-18-2006, 07:37 AM

cool, anyone else?

Liberty · 10-24-2006, 12:43 AM

Your delivery is non-existent. It sounds like you're reading your lines off a cue card.

Try writing some really simple lyrics and delivering them to a really slow, simple beat--but make sure that you put some emotion into it. Once you get to the point where you can tell the difference between sounding like you're reading your lyrics and having a good delivery, start upping the complexity of the lyrics and the beats.

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Noche Rock Full Member Respect: 1 Posts: 856 Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: MueraLand	So I (Bomb) - 09-26-2006, 04:49 PM A lil somethin somethin I recorded today over a 9th wonder beat, nothing great but overall i think my MC voice is getting more developed. Ritmo - free MP3 music downloads on SoundClick
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Noche Rock Full Member Respect: 1 Posts: 856 Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: MueraLand	10-10-2006, 10:30 PM I updated it with a revised version, drop some feedback
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Noche Rock Full Member Respect: 1 Posts: 856 Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: MueraLand	10-15-2006, 01:09 AM ...
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bblaster20 Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 10 Join Date: Oct 2006	10-15-2006, 01:33 PM hmmm ya gotta have more flo. it seems like ya juz ramblin lines rather than in rhythmical possession. I used to have that problem. Thinking that for a sentence I had to fit it in a whole bar...don't do it if it sounds bad. hmmm I know many of yall don' like Eminem an stuff, but the one song that shows an example of nice flow (besides lose yaself) is in When I"m gone. Listen to it...he spreads out the sentences for better flow, rather than packing them into one bar, ya kno what I mean? comes w/ practice though...just get lost in the beat, the same amount you get lost in the lyrical value.


Noche Rock Full Member Respect: 1 Posts: 856 Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: MueraLand	10-18-2006, 07:37 AM cool, anyone else?
	Past Names: bboy alloy --> Noche Rock --> Ritmo New Name: Zoinks! http://www.xanga.com/dale_ritmo http://www.myspace.com/ritmo_xl


Liberty Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 1 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Denver	10-24-2006, 12:43 AM Your delivery is non-existent. It sounds like you're reading your lines off a cue card. Try writing some really simple lyrics and delivering them to a really slow, simple beat--but make sure that you put some emotion into it. Once you get to the point where you can tell the difference between sounding like you're reading your lyrics and having a good delivery, start upping the complexity of the lyrics and the beats.