sweet bro! You got some sweet stuff..ya content is great. Iz actually stuff worth thinkin bout stead of tha clubz an 24 inches that satisfy us for a few seconds. Try to strengthen up ya voice..meanin so it stays constant. Iz probably tuff though b/c of no pub. yet..iz cool doh. I'm still goin through that prob. Juz keep rappin an ya voice will stiffen up...
content is pretty good.. but how old are you? you sound young..not a bad thing but i was just curious.. just gotta try to build a stronger presence on the beat..but pretty good job man