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05-22-2006, 05:46 PM
first dude: lyrics is pretty nice, he hits the topic good... but he really needs to work on his delivery... dude should step back from the mic a bit too, sounds like he's way too close to the mic and like he's whispering... step back, focus on ur emotion and delivery.... flow's solid for the most part, lix are nice... just work on that delivery, sounds too monotone and like i said, sounds like he's whispering....
second dude: flow needs work, u need to learn how to ride a beat... aint feelin the lyrics as much either, i like the topic but u just aint convincing me... to me it sounds like u dont really know what ur talkin about with the way u come across with ur lix... if u spit sumthin on a political stand point u gotta convince and really know what ur talkin about.... the verse was a lil too short too.... but ur delivery wasnt too bad, just gotta focus ur emotion and work on ur breath control....
overall, this was ok... first guy needs to work on his delivery and second guy needs to work on his flow and lyrics...
peace.
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