Cryin- Mantic,Yung and Fame -
04-03-2006, 01:01 PM
Yo so far ive gotten a shit load of plays on myspace and a lot of plays on my soundclick *new* so i hope ya like this one as well . My boy Yung did a snippet to this beat and i had to jump in it.. i couldnt be greedy so i let my boy fame in on this shit too.. so yea holla back with some feedback... i think i did improvement since i last came here... holla back
yo the beat is sick i like how ya do that speed up slow down thing i would give it overall score of 3/5 keep up tha good work
Protect Ya Neck, my sword still remain imperial
Before I blast the mic, RZA scratch off the serial
We reign all year round from June to June
While niggaz bite immediately if not soon
Set the lynchin, and form the execution date
As this two thousand beyond slang suffocate
Amplify sample through vacumn tubes compressions
cause RZA, to charge niggaz twenty G's a session - RZA DVS SOUNDCLICK
ah, i got this beat on my pc.... its a pretty dope beat...
your flow's gettin better but still sounds a bit jumbled.... try to smooth it out a bit more.... you keep tryn'a fit too much in ya flow.... delivery's gettin better too.... you're improvin but still gotta smooth it all out.... lyrics were coo, fit the topic but nothin that wowed me or made me think na'mean... like i said, you're improvin but still got alotta work to do..... and as much as i hate to dwell on it, ya voice aint really that easy to listen to.... but keep uppin ya game....
second dude was nice... really feelin his steez, no complaints at all... he comes correct...
wasn't feelin the last dude.... dont like the way he sounds, lyrics were kinda corny.... multis seem kinda force... his whole steez seems kinda forced to me, just gives off a fake vibe.... i dunno, dont wanna hate but i just ain't feelin kid....
overall this was aight, i really only liked the second dude.... but like i said, keep working on ya game u seem to be improvin....
. My boy Yung did a snippet to this beat and i had to jump in it.. i couldnt be greedy so i let my boy fame in on this shit too.. so yea holla back with some feedback... i think i did improvement since i last came here... holla back
