[razorbrain]

Now i know im a hear a bunch of shit about this(smart ass shit) when i say some of this:
i know italk alot of shit but i hate cocky songs, but i made one anyway.. was supposed to be a collabo, but it fell apart.. so just as a thoguhthere chronologially i wrote and recorded the song like this : 2nd verse, 3rd verse, 1st verse, hook..lol wierd right? and ways i know of the sound issues, but i tried to fix them as best i could. i really gotta learn this crap lol anyways here ya go also since someon else wanted me to talk shit in the begingin to add t the assholeness( i know not a word) of the whole thing i added that too.. ut on myspace and soundclik that will be absent.

[istolicee]

haha im glad you sent me the non-shit talking version. but umm, having heard this song rough, and then done and redone and re-redone, you basically know all my feed. good, love the beat, love the second verse over all others, LOVE the hook too... fits with the song. okie

[Anghellic]

OMG THA MASTER RAZOR BRAIN HAS COME OUT OF HIDING AND OF THE MARTIAL ART SHADOWS TO GRACE US WITH A SONG

LOCKDOWN IS BACK?
watch out

[atrain]

Damn, im really feelin this track homey

Aight... beats tight, real polished sounding... diggin the hook...lyrics are dope and ya delivery's really good, keeps me wantin to listen all the way through

sounds real professional n ish, hope ya keep puttin shit out like this for us to listen too

keep it up

[Anghellic]

lol my nigga razor now that im home i can actually listen
and loving it
dope track homie

[razorbrain]

lol thanks yall keep the feed comin apreciate it.. i know i need to record more now irght? and to think i aint wanna even do this song lol

[razorbrain]

Originally Posted by Anghellic

OMG THA MASTER RAZOR BRAIN HAS COME OUT OF HIDING AND OF THE MARTIAL ART SHADOWS TO GRACE US WITH A SONG

LOCKDOWN IS BACK?
watch out

lmao! your such a jerk lol funny though

[Awe-Dio]

damn, woulda never expected to hear some shit from u... brush the dust off, pimp the mic...

beat's bumpin.... flow's on point, but i know u aint gonna come wit no wack flow... u remind me of someone on this, but i cant think of who.... anyway, lyrics n' shit is coo too.... i aint feelin the hook as much tho, and i think there's way too much reverb on the hook... might just be the way its recorded and the delivery of it, but the hook aint doin it for me... ain't wack or nuttin, but just aint doin it for me... feelin the verses tho, and its good to see u back on the mic... keep it bangin...

peace.

[jonnyz]

illy.............

beat and vocals are dope.

[Enkore]

i listened to this the same day u posted it but i didnt have time to drop feedback...

your style's real chill and laid back on this, clear presence and nice multies hittin the flow. lyrics was nice too, feelin it...

i actually like the hook, thought it sounded good...

the only thing i dun like about the song is that you sound the same throughout the whole song, even the hook doesnt have much of a change except for the reverb.

keep it rockin.

[nxyte]

well me.. i alwayz had liked razor's stuff...
this one was real tight..


loving the beat... your dilvery is quite relaxed.. feeling the lyrics...
overall this song sets da mood for somebody move dey heads in da car(going to a party)...and the way the beat was constructed you can def. Pop n' Lock to it


PS... try to keep your ass around a lil more often on this site(although i understand you'll have other things to handle)...i'll see if i can think of a verse and continue the audio cypher thread.. so u can comment on my verses when you have time....

peace/respect(lemme go leave some feed to some other peeps...

[razorbrain]

word..thanks for the feed yall preciate it.