1st Audio Track

Disparage · **1st Audio Track -** 01-22-2006, 09:58 PM

Yeah, Its my first audio track...Everyone tells me I should start audio so I gave it a spin...

Wantcha feed back, 'preciate it.

razorbrain · 01-23-2006, 12:21 AM

listening.. beatr is a good choice.. man you sound really young lol... what ya sayin on here aint bad and ya rhyme on beat.. but it seems like ya just reading..but ya cuttin off some of ya words and theres no feeling..ya need to convey more emotion.. but not bad for ya first try..keep doin ya thing

Disparage · 01-23-2006, 07:33 AM

bump bumpity bump bump.

jonnyz · 01-23-2006, 09:07 AM

I think I already told you on aim...

But yeah, shits good. A lot of potential.. just fix up that delivery, you need to mean the words.

But think of it like this... if this is what you're capable of producing now, imagine what your shit will be like when you're older.

Disparage · 01-24-2006, 02:30 PM

Bump nigz.

Scribedvs · 01-24-2006, 10:16 PM

yo you should make a mic presense a lil better and show more emotion but also by the way im no too audios and im still learning all this shit too but are you down for a callb both of us on a track since we both new prety sure we can drop a decent track yadadameans get back at me
peace

Disparage · 01-25-2006, 07:14 AM

yea fool..we pro'ly could drop atleast a decent track...hit me back wit a beat n shit.

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razorbrain Infinite Warrior Respect: 4.5 Posts: 919 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Boynton Beach, also Orlando and NYC	01-23-2006, 12:21 AM listening.. beatr is a good choice.. man you sound really young lol... what ya sayin on here aint bad and ya rhyme on beat.. but it seems like ya just reading..but ya cuttin off some of ya words and theres no feeling..ya need to convey more emotion.. but not bad for ya first try..keep doin ya thing
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Disparage Just something about me.. Respect: 2 Posts: 395 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami	01-23-2006, 07:33 AM bump bumpity bump bump.
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jonnyz Rock. Robot rock. Respect: 8 Posts: 1,146 Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Here.	01-23-2006, 09:07 AM I think I already told you on aim... But yeah, shits good. A lot of potential.. just fix up that delivery, you need to mean the words. But think of it like this... if this is what you're capable of producing now, imagine what your shit will be like when you're older.


Disparage Just something about me.. Respect: 2 Posts: 395 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami	01-24-2006, 02:30 PM Bump nigz.
	droppin' knowledge like einstein's brain fell out of my hands...


Scribedvs Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 131 Join Date: Jun 2005	01-24-2006, 10:16 PM yo you should make a mic presense a lil better and show more emotion but also by the way im no too audios and im still learning all this shit too but are you down for a callb both of us on a track since we both new prety sure we can drop a decent track yadadameans get back at me peace
	Protect Ya Neck, my sword still remain imperial Before I blast the mic, RZA scratch off the serial We reign all year round from June to June While niggaz bite immediately if not soon Set the lynchin, and form the execution date As this two thousand beyond slang suffocate Amplify sample through vacumn tubes compressions cause RZA, to charge niggaz twenty G's a session - RZA DVS SOUNDCLICK


Disparage Just something about me.. Respect: 2 Posts: 395 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami	01-25-2006, 07:14 AM yea fool..we pro'ly could drop atleast a decent track...hit me back wit a beat n shit.
	droppin' knowledge like einstein's brain fell out of my hands...