listenin.. beats hot.. is there a voice on the intro?? like a real quiet one? again you switchin up the flows, dunno how well suited to the beat they are, still soundin nice, i guess 'cos the beat aint got many points for emphasisin the end of your lines.. second verse got some nice shit some nice lines.. good hook, not too cluttered so it came off well.. 3rd verse soundin hot too, yeah i'm feelin this, at first i was hmm, but nah it's dope.. keep it up man.
hit up my myspace thingo 'n drop some feed on my track called "gonna be good to you" bit old but haven't gotten feed yet.. just drop a line in here or suttin i'd appreciate it.
www.myspace.com/modemc
peace