Hey ya'll.
Im trying to get topicals down, and improve on my punchlines.
If ya'll could give me some feed on the general delivery and punches and all that good stuff I'd be very appreciative. Thanks dogs.
This track is a vast improvment, ya flow is killin it on this one, you fall off a couple a times, but jump back on nice, the delivery is smashin, and that beat is crackin. nice track man feelin this one
beat's aight, a lil too crazy fa me.... i dunno if its just me, but duke, ya sound like you tryn'a be DZK... wow fa real, i dunno man, really sounds like yuo tryn'a be like DZ a lil too much.... that right there throws me off... flows pretty good for the most part, falls off a lil here and there... but shiet, ya whole delivery, flow and word use really sounds like a wanna be DZK.... straight up, aint tryn'a offend u, but u need to find ya own style...
