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[GrandMoren]

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Cool beat, not my type but pretty cool.

Good starts, flows on point and delivery is awesome.
Mic presence is straight on point as well.
The emotion you gave the words fits perfectly, and I like the fact that you used the singing chorus of the beat to your benefit.

"Your a vision of the goodness in this evil world"
Best line.

I will remember u -

Now this beat I like. Really.
Flow is even better on this one. Punchlines too.
Needed to turn yaself down a bit.
Again you used the singing chorus, love it.
The whole disc like that?
The "I love you jen" interlude is very emotional, adds a lot.



"Writing about you, wished you were here to see" Seems a little rushed a bit.

thanx bro, and yeah, the whole disc is kinda like that, there's one upbeat track which has a more sexed up vibe to it, but its pretty much pure cheese throughout lol. and that line is most definately rushed, but it says what i want it to say so i dint change it. oh, and turn ya treble down and ya balance will be right, i have a very bass heavy sound system lol. peace.

yo, another track up, and another 1, maybe 2 to follow later today. peace.

[Awe-Dio]

wow, this girl musta done sumthin to.. all them tracks is about her!!!!.. i skimmed thru them, a lil too lovey dovey for me... not really in the mood to listen to this type of ish right now so i dunno what to say... the beats sound a lil too corny to me... "born to love you" sounded a lil more poetic... was feelin the vibe a bit more than the other tracks... lyrics were coo, just can't really get into listenin to these type of tracks right now, na'mean.... but i'm sure ya girl loves them..

peace.

haha yeah the album was actually written and recorded for her before we got together, i'm rerecordin them to post them online coz i cant get my master from the studio and her version has gone missin lol.