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"Back Up Again" - 08-01-2005, 07:52 AM

did this about 2-3 weeks ago, didn't put it up cuz the hook got kinda distorted on the mp3 mix. Was gonna try n' fix it or re-record it but got lazy, so deal wit it

track's called "back up again"......

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08-01-2005, 08:19 AM

listenin.. ahh i know this beat!! damn who's it from tip of my tongue.. well whatever, you coem in solid flows.. real nice delivery 'n mic presence.. you ride it nice.. some good lix.. i think the hooks soundin alright, distortion aint too bad.. but it's kinda abrupt.. second verse is nice, this a good topic.. same as first, it's straight.. some nice schemes in the third verse, 'n pronunciation on the slant rhymes, again lol, same as other verses, it's nice man, feelin it, verses hot, not really feelin the layout of the hook or how you present it (the hook) though.. for the rest, good job, keep it up i voted it hot..

also, whens yout mixtape comin? that roach-one from msn dropped his now, my copies still comin but i heard some 'n it's dope.. hit him up.

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08-01-2005, 09:07 AM

good lookin... it's a mobb deep beat, "where ya heart at".... mixtape is prolly gonna be somewaht on hold right now... can't get studio time for august and i'm gettin and gonna be really fuckin busy with other business... it's gonna be hard for me to get in the studio and with shit changing i might change the format for the mixtape... take some tracks out that i got written and add some new ones... we'll see how things work out in the next month... i'll prolly even update my home set up in the comin month and get a pimp ass mic... but right now i got figure some shit out, and put this on hold for a minute while i foucs on other things... i don't wanna rush it right now or do a home recorded mixtape, cuz i ain't wanna put sumthin out that's wack or half assed... i'll update when i make it official.. right now i got a lot to do and don't wanna put out any false dates or time frames.. it already got pushed back so i don't wanna do that again.

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08-01-2005, 06:07 PM

HEY MAN, i just peeped it....not too bad...i love the concept, the flow, and delivery....sort of sounded a bit read-off-the-sheet style,..but not bad...i really wish you used a different beat though...i know its an alchemist beat, but probbaly one of the worst alchemist beats i heard...the drums are so wack...but that sample from the greenmile is dope...i think if you woulda went into the track different, woulda been cooler....but the beat man...that that accapella and use a different beat...i love the concept and the flow man...very nice...im feelin it...but like mode said, the hook was ..i guess, not structured well,...probably the beat....the drum roll into the hook just leaves you hangin...

on another note...that shit fucked about marc emery right...that shop gettin raided by the DEA in CANADA!! ...fuckin wild man...long arm of the US strikes again....

another note...hit me up at rian@newphex.com about puttin a track of yours up on the site....for realz homie...we got you...
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08-02-2005, 01:53 AM

sorry i aint been hittin you wit feed on ya tracks, those life 'n narrative joints were hot 'n i'm feelin that shit wit atom react so i been listenin in when i can, just aint been droppin words lol.......aight here we go........ahh, classic ass beat......flows soundin dope, deliverys on point 'n matchin the vibe of the beat.......listenin thru, ya have some dope lines 'n some sick rhyme schemes, some original flow yo, shits hott......i think ya voice works real well with these typa tracks, the beat, the vibe, just all feelin real solid, hooks coo, like other cats said, coulda been a lil more fluid but i aint hatin, its a lil different of a vibe than the verses but it works, i think the reason it detracts a lil bit is cuz it comes in wit a lil more agression than the verses, a lil louder 'n in ya face but its aight.......overall i'm feelin it.......i always liked tracks when ya on this tip, kinda a narrative into life, shits dope......

holllla.....

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08-02-2005, 12:54 PM

u bastard, i been workin on a track on "where ya heart at"!! lol...

damn the lyrics are soo damn hot...the flows are hot...with all the inners and multies...ur voice fits this great...the style...i love this hook...sounds soo tight lol...hit hard on every verse...i'm bugged that u used that beat ...but u did good with it, so i respect that. the clip at the beginning was nice too, i like that...keep up the work, dos!




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...your presence, flow 'n all that shit is on point, reminded me why your my fave emcee on bboy yooo..
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08-08-2005, 06:54 PM

thanx for the feed and crit y'all... much appreciated... i'll get at you zeke, good lookin out on that

ps: fuck the long arm of states
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