[AsianxRomeo]

hey... can i get some feed bacc on a tracc i made? =T

AsianxRomeo- Lets Ride
www.soundclick.com/asianromeo

go ahead and gimme ur honest opinions and feedbacc on it, the chorus succs so yea heh go ahead and rip on it xP

[Awe-Dio]

nah... i'ma be honest... real honest..

yea, that hook was wack... real wack..

this whole track was wack.. you sound like a kid that been watchin too much fast and furious... you just sound fake, but tha's prolly cuz u ain't really got a grasp on emceeing or hip hop in general... that outro sounded gay as fuck too... i ain't tryn'a be an asshole, but i'ma be honest cuz it needs to be said... ya flow is aight, kinda choppy... you sound mad young, i'm guessin you like 16 or 17... your lyrics is pretty weak, but this whole concept is just wack... i can appreciate the fact you prolly into the whole import scene right now, like most cats around ya age... and i'm guessin Jin had a bit of an influence in you tryn'a rap, seeing as you asian.. but if you really wanna rap, work on ya game and learn sumthin about hip hop...

this track was horrible, it hurt my ears... i'm sorry for being such an ass about it, but it is what it is.

[AsianxRomeo]

nah dont trip, honesty is what i want, i dont want no "oh yo tracc was iight" bullshit, yea im 16yrs old, and honestly i hated fast and the furious, and jin isnt an unfluence on me, i mean i like his freestyles and all but his mainstream isnt good, but yea i got alot to work on, and yea i played tha tracc bacc to me, it does sound like somethin a lil poser would say, ierno. its all good, im still yung i got time to elevate. thx for tha feedbacc though ^^;

[Enkore]

needa get ya words clearer...intro and hook were wack...did u jus say "so my niggas"? lol...umm, stop lol...yo hook really annoys me...flow is iight, kinda choppy like awe said, it was decent, really on the mainstream tip and thats not bad jus it's not quality mainstream...the lyrics were jus...sub-par if anything...man...outro...lmao... ride till we die doggg, hahahahahaa...

okay, passed all the bullshit i might have said, i've heard worse...but u have a long way to go. definitely fix ur hooks, which is a hard thing, i still can't make a hook...get ur flow more fluid and definitely work on ur lyrics. everybody elevates differently but the more u write the better u'll be as an emcee...the beat was alright, and the concept was ehh, iono, different i guess. the outro, really, i'da rather jus hear ya name or suttin...and then a fade out or some shit...just keep doin ya thing and u'll get better, cuz, as much as i didnt like that track...it shows potential, being that, i've heard a lot worse...so work on ur shit and if u got any questions or want feed or suttin u can ask me, or anybody else cuz i'm sure they'd be down to help you out...dos!