"My Narrative" (peep and drop FEED!)

Awe-Dio · **"My Narrative" (peep and drop FEED!) -** 05-19-2005, 09:42 PM

there it is... "My Narrative" .... Mesta on the beat.

www.soundclick.com/awediossamplepagemusic.htm

I'm puttin it up early, will put up the lyrics and shit later... holla at me with feed, i need feed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

peace.

Enkore · 05-19-2005, 09:58 PM

feelin it, jus finished listenin to it. hook sounded soo long...verses were good, u know errything else. i jus didnt really like the hook to be honest. if i get anything else in mind, i'll edit and drop it.

Mode · 05-19-2005, 10:00 PM

oo mesta beat.. didn't know he'd appeal to you.. sounds cool.. yeah you got a nice presence/energy on this one, def adding more to the track.. flows are so dope, some nice quotables in the lix.. hook is mad chill can really vibe to it.. delivery is all on point, good accentuation on the emotion, hit the end of each bar nice.. structured your verses real well.. damn man.. this is your best yet for sure, leagues ahead of your previous i think.. the more i hear the more i like.. keep 'em comming

Mantic · 05-22-2005, 04:34 AM

yea it was all catchy like always energy level was deff there but the chorus was to long and i felt kinda lost at time between the hook ya know.. i dunno but the track is deff a good listen

peace~

Awe-Dio · 05-22-2005, 05:48 PM

thanx fa the replies, appreciate it!.... i dont get what y'all mean by the hook being too long, it's the same length as any regular hook.. its only 8 bars.. i'm confused to what ya mean., oh well.

anyone else? always the same couple cats droppin feed.. this gonna be the opening track off my demo so i would really appreciate if more heads would drop a quick thought.. just lemme know if u like it or not, dont need to break anythin down.. a simple sentence is more then enough.. if u peeped it, holla at me.

peace.

Mantic · 05-23-2005, 01:35 AM

i think i talk for the rest of the org when i say...

send me a copy!!

yea foreal its mad hard to get some feed in this joint lol

Awe-Dio · 05-25-2005, 09:34 PM

word..... i know y'all can drop 1 fuckin line.. stop sleepin

l3_l3oy_trance · 05-25-2005, 09:47 PM

shitz dope, i dun know much bout judging music, but i like this track.

keep on truckin'

Awe-Dio · 05-29-2005, 03:19 PM

thanx playa, appreicate the reply... thx for peepin my tracks.

peace.

Mode · 05-31-2005, 02:56 AM

more more more more more more more please awe..

GrandMoren · 06-03-2005, 10:50 AM

Friggin dope from the start yo.
Writtin this as i listen for the 3rd time.
You n' mode are the only ones i dont want to go against on the tourny :P
I agree that the chorus is a bit long, yet dope though.

b-boy sobber · 06-04-2005, 06:28 PM

no time to drop anything constructive now but shit was the complete package. hot beat hot verse good hook.. definly an ill track

Awe-Dio · 06-10-2005, 01:03 AM

thanks for the feedback, appreciate it...

haha @ mode.. dont worry i got more shit coming.. was gonna drop another track today, but i got a sore throat so i cant finish recording it.. only got the doubles and adlibs to do, and maybe little touch ups on the hook.. shouldnt take long, i'ma try n' get it done soon as my throat feels a bit better.... track's called "I'ma Threat".. here i'll post a clip to give u a preview and keep ur panties wet while i finish it up

new smilies, nice!

Reflexion · 06-12-2005, 12:29 PM

my narrative: awesome man, the quality is professional ... beat is really good for everything, the effects are pretty fitting and it's got a nice hook.. produced pretty nice, the flow is consistent and dope.. ya really got into ya voice

nice man

Awe-Dio · 06-19-2005, 04:44 PM

thanx flex, good lookin.