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mode @ soundclick - 05-17-2005, 07:03 PM

new track up - verbal eloquence..

also two collab joints, one with razor (qual is iffy 'cos amp probs, but some funny shit from razor, peep it) and one with grandmoren (recorded in one go real quick, so aint the best)

also, peep up the top of my page for a beat me 'n yosh one put together in england.. he did most the work though, i just made suggestions lol..

peace.

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05-18-2005, 06:41 PM

you def deserve feed since you always drop feed for everyone, so i'ma peep all this shit and see wassup...

requiem beat:
(that was a dope movie btw)

like the sample... beat's pretty coo, some of the instruments seem mixed too low for my likin tho... i think it would sound a bit better if some of shit was turned down and the drums were a bit harder... maybe a lil extra bass too... but this a pretty coo beat, real artistic.

verbal eloquence: haha, i love this beat.. told u that roots album was dope... roots beats are always dope... quality's pretty nice... dont like the sound effects that were added... flowin pretty nice, a bit much fa me sometimes tho.. too many punch ins.. lyrics are coo, some nice lines.. delivery's gotten better, everythin sounds real clear n' shit... just need a lil more character on the mic, sumthin that'll make u stand out more na'mean.... u still elevatin tho, keep it up.

humble begginings w/ razor: beats dope... u come in pretty nice, sound more mature on the mic... flow's nice, more stable n' fluid and the other tracks... lix are coo, some nice concepts... this prolly ya best drop yet, that i can think of.. ya sound more comfortable on the mic.. nice verse... Razor comes in... flowin nice.. haha @ bashin on mode... some funny lines... remember awe shattered ya.. lol... razor comes thru pretty nice, but think it coulda used a lil more energy.. but nice none the less.. y'all both came thru nice on this... big ups.

collab w/grandmoren: wow, this beat is horrible.. haha, some trance shit.. sorry, but i can't listen to someone rap to this shit.. grandmoren sounds aight tho.. tryn'a to flow this, dont know how y'all even dropped to this... u both spit pretty good but this beat is just too fuckin gay for my likin, sorry but tha's me bein honest... never use a beat like this again, please. can't listen no more..

overall, mode ya seem like u def elevatin.. the track with razor was prolly ya best overall verse i've heard from u, ya sound more grounded n' mature on the mic... keep elevatin, n' work on not usin the same rhyme schemes all the time, try to adapt more to the beat instead of makin the beat adapt to u, na'mean? but i thought that erse w/ razor was dope, tha's what u should be tryn'a to do more of... i think as u keep elevatin ur learn to be more versatile with ur pen and ur flow, which is startin to show more improvement and it seems like u heading to the next step.. my opinion anyway... keep it up and keep elevatin!

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05-20-2005, 02:38 AM

yooo thanks for the feed awe, appreciate it..

i jumped on the end of angels collab he had up, would like some feed if ya'll got time.. also any feed on all the other tracks would be dizzope..

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05-20-2005, 07:14 PM

remenisce: beat is soo hot, the flow is sooo hot too. honestly, i liked this flow/delivery the most of all ur tracks so far, clear, and deep lyrics. couple lines i would quote, second verse was fuqqin nuts with flow. same with third. damn, i'm really feelin it, the end is crazy...serious, good job.

humble beginnings: all layed back and calm, givin lessons...not exactly keepin me interested to be honest but ur lyrics are good so i listened, some nice quotables, i digged the second part of ur verse when u were seperatin it in steps, nice to say the least. LOL at razor's jesus thing. but yeah really, i wasn't feelin the delivery, clear pronunciation and enunciation on multies and such...

verbal eloquence: needa put ur vocals up, otherwise, nice flow and punchlines and all, delivery is cool.

head of state: grandmoren, keepin it pretty hot, flow is pretty hot, lyrics are cool. ur flow is crazy though, so many multies, rockin that beat all nutsy and stuff.

requiem: i'm really feelin it, if i had any inspiration at all i would love to hit it, but my minds blank whenever i try a topic... .

nice job, mode, keep doin ya thing thang doggie dogg. payce.




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then i'ma give you an Enkore.....how much more can i say??
i'm dope as fuck like that one cat, aka Dorian Gray......


Originally posted by Mode
...your presence, flow 'n all that shit is on point, reminded me why your my fave emcee on bboy yooo..
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