[Mantic]

yea i got my first club banger up yay im happy lol yea i like the vibe to it its kinda like gangsta yet clubby lol i dunno you gotta listen to feel... yea well listen up and drop some feed.. its up at soundclick


Ya Aint Ready

thanks


peace~

[b-boy sobber]

my bad homey but i aint feeling it ..... some of the lyrics is tight but hook sound like you ordering chinese food ... and didnt like the the background overlay of the last word . sounds like you dipped out that or ya got down syndrome...... yo im just bustin on you. i wouldnt take what i say to heart i dont like club tracks in general so im kinda bais.

[Awe-Dio]

beat's pretty coo...
sounds like the hook off the jump.. hmmm, its aight sounds a lil off... first verse is ok, flows pretty good but falls off at some points, but not bad... lyrics is aight, delivery is ok, hard to make out some of what u sayin... hook comes in again, like sobber said the overlay dont sound good... 2nd verse is ok, starts fallin off half way in, you start mumbling and its hard to make out some words... hook without the overlay sounds alot better... start of the 3rd verse sounds like you on some bone thugs shit... 3rd verse was aight... hook comes in again, gettin kinda catchy..

this was aight, it seems like you starting to improve form what i remember... but flow still needs to be more consistent, and you gotta try to polish up ya delivery and be more clear.. try not to mumble so much.. i couldnt really get into the verses, there were a couple parts that sounded coo, but wasnt feelin some of the lyrics and some i couldnt understand... the hook ain't sound good at first but the last 2 times around it grew on me and started to sound catchy... sounded alot better without the voice over on the "y'all aint ready" part... stretching some of the words on ya verses was pretty good, it shows you elevatin and can adapt a bit more to a beat.. so in that sense i can see you startin to get more comfortable on the mic...

overall i wasn't really feelin this, but it was aight... you showin improvement.

peace.

[Mantic]

fuck you sobber hahaha jk bro thanks

awe-dio thanks a lot man i apreciate all that feedback... now i know what to work on in my next track ...


thanks guys

uppin for more feed


peace~

[b-boy sobber]

you know you still love me

haha i was gonna write some contructive critisim but i thought an insencitive witty coment would just as helpfull...

[Mantic]

yea you deff helped me out sobber haha yea man i got much love for you and your sigg lol shits the best ive seen in a long time lol "i smoke rocks!!" hahaha you should add "it hurts when i pee" on the bottom shit be nice haha lol


anyways uppin for feedy and sorry for uppin