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The Countess - Blessone/Conscience - 11-08-2009, 05:35 PM

I thought i did a good job on this considering my crappy equipment. And by crappy equipment i mean computer, extremely cheap computer microphone, and audacity. The beat was produced from a guy on shadowville. Tell me what I can do better and I will happily take constructive criticism.


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11-08-2009, 11:56 PM

lol... I'd lower the volume of the lyrics a bit and of the whole thing maybe. And I'd cut it out with the talking for half the song stuff lol. And the chorus was unlistenable.

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11-09-2009, 12:21 AM

ditch that chorus for real Oo
 

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11-09-2009, 12:19 PM

Originally Posted by RingerINC View Post
lol... I'd lower the volume of the lyrics a bit and of the whole thing maybe. And I'd cut it out with the talking for half the song stuff lol. And the chorus was unlistenable.
I'll lower it next time and I know the chorus is trash, i kinda rushed it.

btw the talkin stuff was just playin around cuz i was too lazy to write another 8 lines lol, I heard drake do it so I thought I might give it a shot. thanks for the tips

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