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07-02-2009, 05:58 AM
I may actually record a track myself on this, I just see the whole concept (especially from teh chorus words) a little different than y'all I think.
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Diamond Dobb - New Song!! Click Here!
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07-02-2009, 02:33 PM
Well here it is, its a raw to, no effects or vocal cleaning and w.e, only because I'm a newb and i dont know how.. btw this is a sample
heres lyrics Yup lifes a bitch, its only a matter of time before your get switched let the haters hate away for there soul is a grainy shade of gray a mystery an artifact of ancient history a simile its about responsibility, you would last a mile in my shoe so i suggest you, build and get over it takes a while till you know of it. |
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07-02-2009, 04:40 PM
bakri i think you shouldn't whisper your verse, and keep your mic away from your mouth.....i can hear you blowing into the mic when he spit your liks..........
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07-02-2009, 04:48 PM
oh yeah i know, i was expirmenting with this mic.. but hows the lyrics?
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07-02-2009, 04:50 PM
You got the idea with the lyrics. But your delivery is really lacking, the set up gets iffy and yea I bet thats a gaming mic ahahah.
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07-02-2009, 05:14 PM
so far its gonna kinda sound like this with AJ and Verb........if Backfire let me know where ya wanna be, 2nd or third, i didn't want to post up this with a huge break between verses
oh btw AJ ya shoulda just got that good mic, ya can hear the difference in the quality of the recording...... |
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07-02-2009, 05:34 PM
damn good so far.
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07-02-2009, 07:13 PM
AJ - not bad, production is really lacking. You need to get a much cleaner dry track, then you need to know how to use the compressor properly and how to balance yourself in the mix. Flow was ok, a little staccato in places but not too noticeable. You need to learn to announciate better, at times you sound very muffly.
Verb - Turn yourself up. Delivery isn't emotional enough for me compared to the lyrics, you flow ok, a little off in places, kinda like you need to relax or somethin. Again production needs work but I'm sure you know that already. Not bad guys, I'll keep an eye out for the finished version and leave more in-depth feed then. |
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Diamond Dobb - New Song!! Click Here!
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07-02-2009, 07:58 PM
Alright Dobb, thanks for that feedback.
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07-02-2009, 10:56 PM
hopefully my qualitys good, don't wanna ruin the track with bad quality, i'm gonna be recording soon so it will be up 2night...if i'm happy with it. And verb, i don't really care listen to my verse then u'll see where u think it fits in best.
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07-03-2009, 12:05 AM
Thanks Dobb your feed is def appreciated. You probably know I know shit about production. Like what should be done to enhance the sound and what not. I maxed out on aj's volume. That might be the reason why he sounds a little softer and I turned down mine so I don't overpower his verse. Ill up my vocals again and see if it helps.
Its kinds a rough mixdown. Ill try to get it up to par but don't hold your breath lmfao Backfire don't worry dude whatever you give me is what it is. We will use it as long as you think you done ya best work. And if anyone else wants to drop a verse I can lengthen the beat. |
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07-03-2009, 02:03 AM
yo my shit's done, just adding the double's n shit, it'll be up a bit later.
Life is Unfair: my brother accidentally deleted part of it and we can't get it back so gotta recrod it again... |
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07-03-2009, 06:16 PM
Ahahahahah at you. LOL.
So hmmm it looks like its gonna end with backfire??? |
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07-06-2009, 12:12 AM
Alriiight yall this is all on you guys to finish, finalize and what not. Im gone with no comp from Monday to Friday ahah WOOOOOOO.
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07-06-2009, 02:24 AM
mine will be up soon just haven't gotten around to recording it again...but by the time u get back it'll be done.
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