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In the End + NY State of Mind Freestyle - 06-23-2009, 03:25 PM

I have been listening to rap for about 2 years and I thought I should freestyle for the very first time. So what do you think, and feel free to give me any advice/comments/concerns/etc.
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In the End Freestyle.mp3 | Plays: 43


NY State of Mind Freestyle.mp3 | Plays: 17


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06-23-2009, 03:29 PM

Couldn't understand you at all on the first one.

The second one you didn't make much sense, even for a freestyle.

Keep practicing. I'd suggest you start with writtens first.

I'll just start off by saying the majority rappers today have no intention of supporting hip-hop culture. If you don't support the culture, then you aren't really hip-hop.
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06-23-2009, 09:47 PM

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06-25-2009, 10:40 PM

write it down...

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