[Tuddles]

this be the second track i recorded for the mixtape im putting out...
need some new recording gear, and CORDS... shit man...
fuckin midi cords...

anyway

check it out, its for a mixtape hence the ending of the song
the effect...

[_-=FiRe=-_]

i liked the concept, but it seemed like at some times you were straying from the theme into other secondary and tertiary branches of thought that kinda left the organization kinda off. good delivery tho

[Tuddles]

ahah fsho man
the donuts line was a jdilla shout ahah
and im chunky but more a jdilla shout

its mostly an interlude the point of it was though
just to spill some thoughts you know?

[Enkore]

i knew this was the beat when i seen the name...

flow is straight...feelin it for the most part...diggin the lyrics...

maybe you coulda put more energy in a couple spots na mean...make it more dynamic...

i was definitely feelin it comin upto the ending...you started messin wit the flow and it was funky na mean...

keep at it...potential is there...