Alright, here's the finished version of From The Soul, with a second verse. I was gonna put a chorus on there but thought it was fine without. Hook me up with some feed and I'll return the favor.
wooo that delivery is gettin pretty dope hells yeah
sound hella comfortable n such on the track. i like
ahahah
anyway
well first off, the whole shot could be louder
it was really quiet but im sure thats just myspace ahah
your flow is on point man
woo major improvement from your other myspace songs (thats all i had to relate it too ahah)
second verse was SICK
"greatful for the day it took me under its wings"
i think if i could write dope shit like that...
fuck man
ahahah life would be great
Nice quote at the end spell
i feel you dude...
NICE SHIT!
COLLABS after... im done with that elbee track >.<
i really think this isnt up to par of the other songs on your page. im not really talking lyrically but your voice was bland i just didnt feel no passion. your rhymes are tight but you need to rethink how you saying everything. it seems monotone as fudge. but everything else was good besides that
Can't believe I missed this. First off, the beat sounded like something AZ would spit on, just as enkore said. Delivery was a tad monotonous but clarity was present throughout. The lyrics were dope especially in the first verse when you incorporated all four elements into the verse. The second verse was sweet. Flow was consistent and you didnt fell off. Plus what you said at the end there, thats something ignorant mainstream heads should heed. Overall, I dare say its your best track to date.
